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Zazwaki — What time is it? Pg 1
Published: 2012-04-30 02:17:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1010; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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This is a request from which is based off of their short story [link]I think I got a little to carry away with the clock
and maybe its the wrong one Next -> [link]
Clock ref(C) yahoo image [link]
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Thank you, it is wonderful. I really like the character design and how she looks. Also the "flow" and how you made the story progressing with each panel is very interesting.
There is nothing that can be done wrong when putting a written story into images (thats something i like also about my other project - everyone has given the people and the scenery an unique visual ... when you look at artworks based on Lord of the Rings or Harry Potter nowadays they all look like the movies).
The clock is perfect, different from the train stations were I live, but thats not important, it is very fitting to the scene/mood also very detailed draw. Especially the "zoom in" effect is a nice touch to symbolize the passing time ... maybe you could add an additional clockarm for the seconds in different positions to enhance this even further.
What might be a little better would be to place the 8th panel to the middle so parts of the people she sees are left, and part right (according to her headmovement). And the 2nd Panel looks a bit like a train is driving by or a strong wind blowing which was a bit unexpected
I can't wait to see the next pages ... it is the first time someone made one of my stories into a comic thats is longer than one page
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