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WARNING: Mature Content, you have been warned... Possibly *Shrug*Equestria News Journal Entry: [link]
Zeks' Review of the Equestria News: [link]
... and then things took a turn for the Darker side...
Welcome... You are now in the presence of the serial killer... There is only two ways this can end for you... Will you make it through his game? ...Or become his next trophy?
Haha~ Ummm... He will be the star of my Personal FanFiction. ( The one that will be put up on FIMFiction. )
Now before anything... He is a changeling and so explains why he has eluded the guards for such a long time.
Currently though he is too influenced by other Dark and GrimDark stories so...
Sadly I will have to withhold myself form releasing the first Chapter... Simply because it was a copy / paste of other stories...
So will plan it out more and such before launching the Official Version.
Now~ Some info on our killer...
He suffers from having multiple personalities...
Our killer is actually two ponies in one...
Morshar - Who is a carbon copy of myself.
Very shy yet happy, optimistic, Kind, sometimes blunt but in a helpful way...
Zeks on the other hand... Only cares for himself, Calm, Collected, Stoic, but always gets bored easily...
The only thing he's found that can entertain him to such a great length... Is to kill.
But not just in anyway for having it end quickly spoils the fun out of it for him.
Sometimes he feels like tying them up and...
Extract their insides...
Seeing how long they can last..
Other times he wants to challenge himself, calling out for the guards of a murder he just committed.
Waiting for them to arrive and witness him deal the last blow, still covered in blood.
Then would run off and see how long the guards can chase after him.
He's even given them a chance by not changing his appearance until he has wiped all the blood away.
Still he eludes them and returns to claim his prize, sometimes by posing as a guard, or even the coroner from time to time...
There has even been moments that he lets his victims pick the way the game is played...
Even then he almost always wins...
Ok Dark story time is done... For now~<3
Thank you for the idea on the eye effect.
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Comments: 205
ZeksMorshar In reply to ??? [2013-05-22 18:59:59 +0000 UTC]
*Zeks grinned at Letivia when she said that about Morshar.*
Zeks: Finally somepony else who thinks the same. (Zeks doesn't mind it. )
*Letivia could tell some form of discomfort coming from Zeks, but it wasn't Zeks that was causing it. Morshar can still hear and see everything that is going on through Zeks' eyes and ears.*
Zeks: Sharing a body... It's very annoying I can tell you right now... Certain times you would black out and end up in an un-familiar area. Other times you would miss one day, three days, a week even. But~ that was only on the first year of us "being together." Afterwards we stopped blacking out and became "aware" of what the other was doing. Kinda like watching a movie that you can actually feel, along with seeing and hearing it.
*He stared at Letivia for a moment, slightly lost in thought.*
Zeks: To be honest I don't mind this at all. To see somepony else's life play out while I "rest." Though it does become very bothersome to have the mind fully awake but the body tired from days of staying up. Morshar... Has definitely taken this the hardest out of the two of us. What a surprise right? Pony finds out he was sharing a body with a killer for the past year. I was able to feel his mind bend and twist with every realization. To be honest... I'm amazed his mind has yet to snap from all of this...
*Zeks chuckled a bit before shaking his head side to side.*
Zeks: I was the only one who had a mental break down though... Friends... Such a weird experience to have... I still feel as if some part of me went missing when my mind broke into several pieces on that day... I can barely recall it myself now that I think about it. From what I hear I was border line insane at the time...
(The "missing piece" is Azrael, he was actually part of Zeks' and Morshar's Sub-Conscious before he took the form of a demon and later escaped. Though Azrael is un-aware he was part of any pony.)
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Hmmm~
I guess I'm stuck thinking females who growl are cute because now i think you're cute.
(I can growl, I can do more then a couple of types. Sometimes I like to mess with people and growl randomly just to see how they would react to it. )
(It's random to do but bucking hilarious. )
(Though it has lead to some friends being cautious around me because they think I'm now clinically insane...)
(*Shrug* For all I know I may very well be insane.)
(The things I think about on an hourly basis, and even do on a daily basis...)
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-22 19:15:44 +0000 UTC]
letivia: that sounds terrible! you know...youre kinda nice...for a killer XD *winks*
do you have anymore questions for me or are we gonne continue trying to kill each other *leans closer towards zeks*
(oh this is gonna be fun....when letivs does that, stay away! but zeks doesnt know this alright....XD)
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that sounds exactly like me...my friends growl as well though....maybe bcuz i always talk to boys and almost have no friends who are woman...im a weird person XD
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-22 19:49:28 +0000 UTC]
*A slight grin started appearing on Zeks' face after seeing Letivia wink and lean in.*
*He leaned in and had a certain look of confidence in his eye.*
Zeks: I have a third option but... You've already cancelled the possibility of that... Unless you've changed your mind about it.
*Zeks couldn't help but to lick his lips.*
(No comment... )
(Zeks has his own tricks up his sleeve so I bet even if he knew he would do this anyways, in either case he is very cocky sometimes so...)
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Weird to others but not to me.
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-22 20:00:30 +0000 UTC]
Letivia: *playful voice* maybe...*giggles*
(oh zeks ur dead....retreat now, I repeat, retreat NOW or accept the consequenses)
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-22 20:11:00 +0000 UTC]
*Zeks grinned at Letivia and leaned in to kiss her on the lips. Part of his back was slightly dissipating, meaning that he was prepared in case of anything were to happen either then... Yea...*
(Zeks has the ability to disperse his body into a cloud of black smoke and remain perfectly in tact.)
(Haven't rightly found a weakness for this ability out side of that he can only do it a few times out side of his realm... and that it takes him a second to re assemble.)
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KandyKorn9 In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-23 12:45:48 +0000 UTC]
That's a similar ability of Shadow! (Sorry for intruding on an RP, just it was so fun to read.
) In fact, Shadow would love this guy!
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ZeksMorshar In reply to KandyKorn9 [2013-05-27 14:08:43 +0000 UTC]
He would love my killer OC?
Maybe at some point they could meet each other. o3o
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KandyKorn9 In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-28 14:50:57 +0000 UTC]
Well a Psycho like Shadow gets along with a lot of people.
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ZeksMorshar In reply to KandyKorn9 [2013-07-11 02:56:48 +0000 UTC]
Would like to meet him one day.
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-22 20:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Letivia: (wasnt planning on hitting him though)
*a monsterous growl could be heard and letivia raised her head, hitting zeks his head so hard it almost knocked it off of his shoulders.* whats that?!
*something behind the trees started to move*
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No offense, not enough action for me
Zeks is gonna get his kiss sooner or later... And maybe with letivia..
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-22 20:29:20 +0000 UTC]
*Zeks was surprisingly only momentarily disoriented. His head dissipated slightly and became see through for a moment, which in turn healed him a bit.*
(Zeks... You're a bucking cheater....)
*Zeks, with squinted eyes due to a headache he now felt, looked around.*
Zeks: Yea... It seems we have some peeping toms around here...
*Small black holes appeared around Zeks and very small centipede-like demons crawled out and searched the nearby area.*
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No offense taken. I always just go with the flow. So if you think this needs more action add as much as you want. I'll follow along.
Also~
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-23 04:43:56 +0000 UTC]
Letiv: thats not good....if we are seen people are gonna think im a cheater....*listens* its not a pony though....weird
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Tnx, letivia isnt really clever when its about love, but she never cheats.
I still feel stalked by lakword
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-23 05:40:06 +0000 UTC]
*Zeks raised an eye brow at Letivia while holding onto his head with one hoof.*
Zeks: A cheater? *Rubs his forehead a second.* Like cheating on your spouse? Or cheating in a game? Sorry if I'm not being as quick witted as I would normally be... Being hit that hard in the head tends to disorient me... ( )
*Zeks starts looking around the area for any signs of life other then what was already seen.*
Zeks: I got nothing myself here... My scouts on the other hand are converging on something nearby but... Due to somepony I'm looking at... *Glances at Letivia.* I can't clearly see what they see...
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Doesn't know how to deal with it but knows enough that she wouldn't try to commit herself to multiple ponies?
Zeks is more of a... Lustful pony... He currently only has one pony he is dedicated to. Though he is allowed to "be" with other ponies. Once again though remaining committed to one.
*Holds TheFlareSlizette in his forelegs and strokes her mane.*
Let him stalk us! As long as we have each other nothing else matters to me!
*Leans in for a kiss.*
(Once he reads that he'll have a smile on his face. )
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-23 06:20:46 +0000 UTC]
Letivia: *jumps up and runs into the woods*
Where are you.....*looks around not paying attention to zeks slanymore*
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If he wants to kill her u may try now XD
Oh you...i know why u made zeks such a perv lakword, if u reaf this u may kill him XD
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-23 08:20:56 +0000 UTC]
*Zeks was still slightly recovering from the head injury and so he din't even get a chance to see exactly were she ran off to.*
*Zeks was snapped out of his daze when he sensed his scouts where all killed off.*
Zeks: So... There is where you were hiding...
*He dissipated into the shadows and went to where his drones were killed.*
*He comes up to the area and sees Azrael standing there killing the last of his drones.*
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Appearance:
Tall pony, Slightly less then Celestia but taller then the normal stallion.
Almost black skin, mane and tail was even darker.
He had Dragon-like wings and tail.
Spikes ran down his back.
Mouth was sown up loosely.
He had a device on his back, and two smaller ones on his wings.
Chains were seen every where on Azrael.
Three hanging from each wing.
They had hook tips and the chain itself was lined with spikes.
At the end of his tail there was a long metallic blade attached and tied down by chains.
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*Zeks comes quickly out of the shadows and walks up to Azrael with a confused face.*
Zeks: The buck are you doing here?
*Azrael din't turn to face Zeks, he just kept adjusting his gear and taking off the dead scouts from his hooks.*
Azrael: I sensed the presence of another demon among these lands...
*Zeks gave out a grin and shook his head.*
Zeks: Well what did ya expect from somepony who controls them?
Azrael: Arrogant as always... 'tis not thee who I sensed... The demon still roams these lands... Thou only served to cover its tracks with these... Vermin...
*The machine on Azraels back and wings started to wire up and bellowing out brimstone and flames.*
Azrael The demon is near...
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You know what... Since you wanted more excitement why not add somepony who will keep the action going?
Azrael is my most recent addition to my OC family but mostly everypony loves him already.
So I would like to take this opportunity to include him in if it's not too much to ask.
I will shorten the responses if need be for later ones, since I was describing Azrael.... I need that image done already lol...
Also~
You can include what you wanted to do before I added Azrael still. Curious as to what She was looking for. Though sadly they all have to find each other again.
Also~
*Le Gasp*
Y U WANT TO KEEL ZEKS?!
Yes he's a perv... Yes he's a killer OC... Yes he's a sick bucker... But he's my OC!!!
My once Ponysona before Azrael came along...
( OMFG THIS IS LOOOOOONG! I IZ SOWWY!!!! ;A; )
( This is why I have to try and stop myself from doing introductions in the middle of an RP... )
(I'm sowwy once again!!!!!!)
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-23 10:48:09 +0000 UTC]
Letivia: *notices the newcomer and takes a good look at him, after a few secs she hid behind a tree comcluding this thing was the real danger here. She watched the whole conversation between zeks and the pony and hoped the had forgotten her*
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Neh its fine I like long rps, btw I dont wanna kill zeks...id never! *winks*
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-23 11:29:24 +0000 UTC]
[Quick fix the last line was supposed to have a " : " Symbol.]
[Meaning: Azrael: The demon is near...]
[One bad thing about not re-reading sometimes... =3=]
*Both of them couldn't shake the feeling they were being watched the whole time. What they din't know was that there was at least two spectators watching them.*
*They both started to scan the area around them, but still kept on with their conversation.*
Azrael: Tell me... Why art thou here... What kind of sins has thou committed here...
*Zeks looked at Azrael and his grin faded, knowing exactly how strong Azrael is he din't want to try anything too hasty.*
Zeks: *Chuckles* Wouldn't ya like to know.~ I ain't tellin ya...
Azrael: So... 'tis a new victim of thee... Has she been claimed yet?
Zeks: Nah... She ran somewhere... Besides... I think I was really starting to like her. H-hey have you heard of a Werepony before?
*Azrael shook his head and finally focused his attention on one spot. It was where Letivia was hiding.*
(OF COURSE IT WAS... *Facehoof*)
Azrael: There... I sense something behind that tree...
*Zeks puts a hoof over his face and shakes his head.*
Zeks: Which tree?! There's dozens of them here ya know...
*With a flap of Azrael's wing he rapidly sent out three hook-tipped spiked chains to the tree Letivia was hiding behind. The chains flew with an incredible speed.*
(Warning Azrael has one hell of a throwing... Wing... (Essentially... Beware of where he is throwing the chains at.)
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Two changes:
Changed a bit of Zeks' speech pattern. (He was beginning to talk exactly like another OC I have so this was needed...)
Azrael no longer has his Unicorn horn. He is now a Demonic Pegasus.
(This was going to be more relevant later on the RP.)
(Was also letting you know in case you researched Azrael. )
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-23 14:46:02 +0000 UTC]
letivia: *just before the chains hit the tree letivia was able to jump to the side. 'better be seen then be dead!' she thought*
AHH! *she falls to the ground*
*thinks: guess i was right seeing him as a dangerous one...*
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i noticed the changes, i did research him XD maybe im too curious...i dont really care..
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-24 06:23:08 +0000 UTC]
*Azrael started gaining a disturbing look to his face. He opened his mouth in a grinning-like fashion. Showing his sharp thin teeth and long forked tongue, pulling tightly on the sowing on his mouth.*
*He opened his large dragon wings and sent them down. Even with his size and, even with the weight of the machines on him, he sent them down with such force that he took off fast. He was barreling down to where Letivia fell to the floor. Breaking a tree in half that was in his path.*
*Zeks was barely able to react in time as Azrael was heading towards Letivia.*
Zeks: H-hey stop! Don't kill her! She's mine!
(Double meaning since it's.... Zeks we're talking about... >.>)
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I love curiosity~
Don't worry I do the same.
Though for the most part it's just to see appearances.
I do try and get more detailed information about them but...
I found out that it... Spoils how the OC would actually react in that situation... Though most of my OCs are talkers and thinkers... Azrael is my wild card OC.
He could be talking to you normally one moment then try and attack you the next.
Or he would start doing something a bit random for the time.
(In one RP he was talking normally to a pony he liked then started drawing on the floor all of a sudden for no reason at all. )
Already feel that he should snap in a couple of RPs I'm in...
You're going to have him like this at the starting.
Maybe depending on how this plays out he would calm himself... Maybe...
Maybe even remain a bit blood lusty but actually like Letivia.
Or end up wanting to shakes hooves all of a sudden mid fight.
(I've meant it when I said he would have an un-stable mind.)
(Though he does love to fight... and even more when he ends up killing somepony...)
Also... Just for the hell of it... Relationship wise...
He is the same as Zeks... Only...
He doesn't openly try and have sex with somepony he likes...
He would also actually devote himself to all of his partners he actually ends up being with. (Mares and Stallions... Yes he's Bi-Sexual)
He's even honest at all times admitting that he is in a relationship to others he is with. Always he speaks his mind and never lies in the slightest. (Being truthfully blunt? Yep......... That's like me....)
Not like Zeks that it is almost always a quick bang and done...
So to be honest... Relationship wise for my two ponysonas...
My demon OC is a lot better then by changeling one...
Once again because of how he treats his partners.
Just wanted to drop another wall of text about Azrael on ya since you like to know about the OCs you're RPing with.
Just give out a response to let me know if it gets to be too much info or something.
Last thing I want to do is spoil it for you. o3o
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-24 07:41:53 +0000 UTC]
Letivia: ugh....my head (that u know, she hit her head against the tree when she jumped away from it)
*yells to azrael* guess I was right huh? You ARE a dangerous one!
*stands up* but I dont run away from fights.....
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Id probably tell ya; letivs is immortal XD thats why she wasnt scared of zeks either.
If you want to make this fight hard for, take away the necklace
And u have an mortal letivia
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-24 09:37:17 +0000 UTC]
*Azrael let out a deep bellowing roar as he slammed onto Letivia.*
*The machines on his back and wings bellowed out more brimstone and fire as it spawned more chains around Azrael and Letivia.*
*He looked at her with a huge grin on his face. But quickly realized something.*
Azrael: Thou is not the demon I have sensed... But... There is something more...
*He leans in and looks at Letivia very closely. Seeing the necklace, he raised an eyebrow at it.*
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Azrael is technically Immortal too.
That's why I'm loving fighting with him.
Even if he looses I can still involve the RP as is with other RPs I've done.
Though no one ever wants to openly fight a demon... Mostly...
He will still get hurt and eventually appear to be dead...
Though he comes back to life and begins to repair the damage.
(Demon Race Passive OP)
The more damage he's sustained the longer it takes for him to come back and heal.
It's already a bit hard to fight him because he naturally heals.
(Demon Race so OP...)
Hence why he is able to wear a machine that is basically white hot to the touch at all times and still be normal.
I may need to tweak and nerf things here and there but so far it actually looks a bit balanced.
Though it thous turn into an endurance match.
Also~
Maybe a chain will knock that thing off in the next response. o3o
Azrael is already curious about it.
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-24 12:47:21 +0000 UTC]
letivia: *gets squeezed* umpf...not good....
*growls* i dunno if you noticed, but zeks didnt kill me...why would you want to?! *gets back into werepony form, breaks the chains and runs over to where zeks is standing, getting ready to attack back*
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oh nuuuuu plz dont! i thought azrael was mortal, but now if shes mortal and hes immortal...thats unfair... and then you say 'life IS unfair' and take the necklace anyways...dont ya?
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-24 16:55:32 +0000 UTC]
*Azrael kept his eyes fixed on Letivia and gave chase.*
Azrael: A Lycanpony? I only heard tails and legends of such a beast...
(Extra dimensional Demon reading up on other creatures of legends? Seems legit...)
*The machine on his back once again comes to life and bellows out more chains. He throws more chains around Letivia, preventing her from immediately running away.*
*Azrael still had the grin look to his face as he got closer to Letivia.*
*The look quickly faded as he looked past the chains and saw Zeks, contemplating if he should even try and do something.*
*He turned towards Letivia and bowed deeply to her.*
Azrael: Apologies... I... Let emotions over take me... It... Is one of my many curses I fear... I am glad thou art unharmed, despite what I did... Any other pony would of had their limbs shatter from weight I carry...
*He retracts all of the surrounding chains back into the machine on his back.*
Azrael: Allow me to start anew... My name is Azrael... I came seeking the death of... One of my kind... He has been problematic as of late and 'tis time to put end to it...
*The Necklace gets his attention once again. But before he could ask about it, spikes came flying by between the both of them.*
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Definition of a Lycan:
Commonly mistaken as a werewolf, the Lycan is a more advanced species that, unlike the werewolf, can for the most part control their transformations. A werewolf can only change under the full moon, and cannot control that. The same can be said for lycans, however they are also able to transform at any given time, wether under a full moon or not, should the need arise.
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I wouldn't do that...
He may have been curios about the necklace but I dought he would be able to move fast enough to obtain something so important to her.
Besides I'm still playing around with the concept so...
I need to do more to it...
Even with the nerf I did to his healing factor... =3=
Any ideas on how I can make him immortal yet still be balanced?
(Impossible question to answer right I think...)
Because for you it's the necklace...
For me...
Well...
He'll just be out of commission for a while...
If you don't mind...
I would love suggestions on how to make Azrael immortal yet still have a flaw to it.
That's one of the reasons why I got rid of his Alicorn status...
Another thing that still needs tweaking would be the healing factor...
Maybe have it that... The machines on his back and wings inhibits his healing to a muuuuuuuuuuuch slowed state?
Still noticeable yet not broken to all hell...
I will pay attention to any suggestions you may put down. o3o
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-05-24 17:05:37 +0000 UTC]
Letivia: well, that was unexpected....(ill remember the lycan...sounds awsome) i kinda dont like being called a beast, but I might as well get used to it.... Murderes duo are you? *grins*
*spikes flighing by* holy... *jumps back*
What the fudge...
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Thank you for that...XD
Maybe also put his power in an object? Or give him one perticulair weak spot? Like achilles?
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-06-03 05:11:16 +0000 UTC]
*The spikes flew by and landed onto the nearby tree.*
*Zeks dispersed into a black smoke cloud and went in search of the demon.*
*Azrael tossed a wing full of chains in front eh general direction of the demon.*
*The demon in question had already moved very quickly and made its way around the group and charged right at Letivia, fangs and claws ready to shred her apart.*
*The demon was a twisted and mangled looking pony that was very thin, its legs were literally only skin and bones. The tips of the legs were just the bone that was sharpened into a very sharp point.*
*Its skin was decayed and flayed in multiple areas.*
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Going through 120 replies suuuuuucks!!!! X_X
Also~
No problem~
I've thought about it and I've come to the conclusion that the machine on his back is his means of resurrection.
Though when he is brought back is will be in an insurmountable amount of pain for weeks.
(Maybe a full month even.)
This is one of the few pains Azrael can still clearly feel, even be toppled by it.
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-06-03 06:24:44 +0000 UTC]
*letivias senses were on max, but that demon travelled so silent she couldnt hear him coming up from behind. One strike of the demon later she fell on the ground, screaming in pain....but she wasnt dead*
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-06-03 07:30:15 +0000 UTC]
*Azrael turned quickly at the sound of the scream and saw the demon standing over Letivia.*
*Once again that twisted grin came over his face as his blood lust rose once again.*
*At the same time the machine on his back started to violently bellow out fire and brimstone as more chains were being made.*
*The chains that were thrown were broken apart with a tug of his wing and he cocked his right wing back, moving it forward lightning quick and with immense force.*
*He sent the chains out with such force that, even though two missed, the one that was aimed correctely went right through the chest of the demon.*
*The demon let out a loud gurgled screech as the chain went through, rupturing and ripping it from the inside.*
*Azrael let out a horrifying roar as he charged towards the demon.*
*As the demon tried to retaliate Azrael rammed it right off Letivia's back with immense force, the sound of bones cracking under the sudden pressure could be clearly heard.*
Azrael: *Having a bloodlusted grin on his face.* Your fight is with me now!
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-06-03 14:21:35 +0000 UTC]
Letivia: *growls in pain, jumps up seeking revenge* oh no its MINE *she smashes him through a tree and in her werepony form she puches right through his body, making him scream in pain* grr....*furious she pulls out her paw, showing no mercy, delivering the demon back to azrael* he is yours....i had my revenge...
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-06-03 16:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Azrael: I thank thee for the generosity.
*His grin widen even more now, pulling at the sowing around his mouth.*
*With a bit more force he ripped the sowing, along with part of his mouth apart.*
*He was now able to fully open his mouth very widely.*
*It opened more widely then anypony would naturally be able to.*
*Still looking as if he was grinning he bit down hard on the demon, who was now trying to crawl away in pain.*
*Azrael, with immense force, threw the demon straight up into the air.*
*He cocked both of his wings back and sent all six of the chains flying straight at the demon, who was flailing and tossing spikes every where it could manage.*
*Each chain was a successful hit, piercing and ripping at the skin even more then it already was.*
*With a roar he spread the chains apart, disemboweling the demon into a rain of blood and flesh.*
*He looked around for a second and saw that there was a glowing piece of flesh falling from the gory mess over head.*
*He smiled and dove right into the rain, biting down and swallowing the glowing piece of meat.*
*As the blood rain quickly came to an end Azrael turned towards Letivia, still having a very bloody and torn grin on his face.*
*He started to walk forward towards her.*
Azrael: If thou must know... He may not have the capabilities of resurrecting immediately... But with the piece I have ingested... You can bring that demon right back form the claws of death.
*With a sigh his grin turned into a light smile and he walked up to Letivia, still soaked from his mane to his hooves in the blood of the demon.*
Azrael: We must seek aid for you quickly...
*Zeks materialized next to them both and gave out a slight pout.*
Zeks: Dammit... I missed the good part din't I?... See... THIS is what happens when my scouts get killed... Now I have to go and make more...
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-06-03 17:17:37 +0000 UTC]
letivia: ill be fine *grins and heals herself*
now... *turns to zeks* was all this YOUR FAULT?!
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-06-03 17:31:40 +0000 UTC]
*Zeks stepped back a bit and gave out a nervous look.*
Zeks: W-well... I-I was testing a few things out an... I... May have released a handful of demons... But to be honest... I have no bucking idea how they were able to sustain themselves... As in actually get a physical form... Look...
*He summoned another demon, though this one was very faded in appearance.*
*It quickly took a swing at Letivia, only to have its claw go through her and not harming her in the slightest.*
Zeks: When a demon, at least my demons, try and leave my realm they lack a physical form. They're basically spirits in a way...
*The demon faded away, back into his realm.*
Zeks: Outside help in needed in order for the demons to actually materialize like that. Well... Outside of the localized area spell I can cast but... To be honest I can only cast that like once a day... It's hard work bringing even a piece of a realm into another plane ya know...
*Azrael just blankly stared at Zeks as the sowing and flesh on his mouth was starting to visibly heal and repair itself.*
Azrael: This is not the only time thou has lost control over them...
*Azrael looked around and sighed lightly.*
Azrael: Sadly this hunt comes to an abrupt end... I cannot sense the other demons that were released into this plane...
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-06-03 17:38:16 +0000 UTC]
letivia: there are some left? *shakes head* oh god....
*letivia looked at Azrael, then at zeks and asked (a bit ashamed)*
ya know.... im getting pretty hungry...wanna go for a hunt?
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-06-03 17:54:06 +0000 UTC]
*Zeks raised an eye brow at Letivia.*
Zeks: I've already fed enough before I started experimenting so I'll pass... Besides... It takes almost a full day just to make one of thous scouts... *Grumble and stares at Azrael with a murderous glare.* Just remember the only reason why I'm not attacking ya at the moment is because I enjoy my well being... I know I still need more strength to fight ya head on.
*Azrael moved a wing close to Zeks, having the machine on his wing try and take a bite out of Zeks.*
*Zeks moved back a bit more and he gave a "I'm not amussed" stare at Azrael.*
*Azrael grinned lightly and looked back at Letivia.*
Azrael: I can join thee for a hunt, my chains always thirst for blood. I may be large in size but I do know that art of sneaking.
[Azrael is taller then the mane 6 but slightly smaller then Celestia.]
[Maybe be around Luna's size? *Shrug*]
[Image to serve as a slight ref. Sun Shine is slightly smaller then the mane 6 [link] ]
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theflareslizette In reply to ZeksMorshar [2013-06-03 17:58:05 +0000 UTC]
letivia: great! *belly rumbles* ugh...cant wait till i get some food *runs into the woods* try to keep up *winks*
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ZeksMorshar In reply to theflareslizette [2013-06-03 18:21:16 +0000 UTC]
*All but the chains wrapped around his legs retracted and he closed his wings up tightly.*
*With a smirk he took off fast and chased closely after Letivia.*
*Zeks just stared for a moment and shook his head while rolling his eyes.*
*He faded into the shadows and started his work on rebuilding his scouts.*
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Lakword In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-23 07:35:24 +0000 UTC]
*Vince comes with a shoot gun and blows Zeks head off*
Oh oh... This suposed to be paralize bullets... *Looks at headless Zeks corpse* Ohh welll... We can call it pernament paralize...
(Something like that? XD)
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Lakword In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-23 12:26:52 +0000 UTC]
XD Well its so not PG since Vince would never kill. Even by accident since he cheks everything more than few times before using. Thats why his traps always work. Evil Vince on other hand would not have problem with this
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theflareslizette In reply to Lakword [2013-05-23 14:42:39 +0000 UTC]
XD evil vince? dont wanna meet him! smart and dangerous, a deadly combination!
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Lakword In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-23 14:43:43 +0000 UTC]
Exacly But he will be done just for one or two stories XD A amgic spell what went wrong or was casted on Flik, Vince and Vella creating their evil versions
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theflareslizette In reply to Lakword [2013-05-23 14:50:29 +0000 UTC]
thats nawt good... cant wait till the story comes out!
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Lakword In reply to theflareslizette [2013-05-23 14:57:42 +0000 UTC]
It will take some time. I still need to write 2 chapters and finish RP of chapter 5 and start RP of chapter 6 where they meet Vella
*Chapter 5 and 6 are in same time. 5 is Vince story where he goes for a tresure hunt into his homeland with Zeks 2 OC and my Bro 1 OC and they meet changelings tribes in need of help. Vince dosent want leave changelings on mercy of Griphons so he helps them and kinda becomes their new leader. He hates it but they follow him back home and theres more comming to join the swarm XD Kintaro is most loyal one to Vince. Chapter 6 is what happens with Flik while Vince is away. He is to stay with Zeks Twins and train his speed. He runs into Vella while during one of his practice runs and she is quite determinated to get him work for her. Vella is quite evil at start but she becoems more good by being influanced by Flik and instead of making him into a best actor for her show and money she starts to treat him as her own child. Small fact that she did kidnap him makes things a bit interesting since Flik is still wanted after Canterlot backfire magic incident and some try to hunt him... Also I think Specter wont let her take Flik since he made promise to Vince he will take care of him XD*
Sorry for long text wall XD
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theflareslizette In reply to Lakword [2013-05-23 14:59:45 +0000 UTC]
XD its fine...i like to read
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ZeksMorshar In reply to JonathanMDful [2013-04-24 03:10:05 +0000 UTC]
Since we are already doing the other RP with Zeks I might as well not start this one since it'll be the same.
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ZeksMorshar In reply to W0nderbolts [2013-04-18 06:37:02 +0000 UTC]
Neutral huh? I'm assuming since Zeks is a killer OC it affected your judgement huh?
I'm ok with that! Glad you at least considered looking at him knowing how you feel about death and such.
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ZeksMorshar In reply to W0nderbolts [2013-04-18 06:47:34 +0000 UTC]
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