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Ever since I created Zerinia as a character it has been impossible for me to acurately depict her. Even the ones I say look like her begin to be totaly inacurate in my eyes days after I draw them. In an effort to discover myself (because Zerinia really is me) and fully flesh out the character so I can add some meat to the story, I am embarking on a mission to draw and paint Zerinia acurately. The base of this picture was a lovely woman named Marcela Bovio who is a Mexian singer who happens to look a bit like me. I printed out a picture of her, altered it with pencil, carbon copied it with the alterations, altered the copy further, copied that, and shaded it and fleshed it out. I want a thorough critisism of this sketch, from basic anatomical inacuracies to features that you think just don't go. I plan to do a third sketch based on your critisisms, get more feedback, virtually kill the peice and my desire to create it by scrutinizing it a million times over, then do a final sketch and paint it. All right, give me your worst.
Oh, and I am aware she has no eyebrows. I always do those last and they are not necessary as yet.

Note: This does not mean flame me. I actually want constructive critisism, nothing like advice to take a drawing class or anything like that.

Description
Ever since I created Zerinia as a character it has been impossible for me to acurately depict her. Even the ones I say look like her begin to be totaly inacurate in my eyes days after I draw them. In an effort to discover myself (because Zerinia really is me) and fully flesh out the character so I can add some meat to the story, I am embarking on a mission to draw and paint Zerinia acurately. The base of this picture was a lovely woman named Marcela Bovio who is a Mexian singer who happens to look a bit like me. I printed out a picture of her, altered it with pencil, carbon copied it with the alterations, altered the copy further, copied that, and shaded it and fleshed it out. I want a thorough critisism of this sketch, from basic anatomical inacuracies to features that you think just don't go. I plan to do a third sketch based on your critisisms, get more feedback, virtually kill the peice and my desire to create it by scrutinizing it a million times over, then do a final sketch and paint it. All right, give me your worst.
Oh, and I am aware she has no eyebrows. I always do those last and they are not necessary as yet.

Note: This does not mean flame me. I actually want constructive critisism, nothing like advice to take a drawing class or anything like that.