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Published: 2010-03-19 00:34:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 7053; Favourites: 107; Downloads: 166
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cold, distant, with a pint of apathy, i present to you:Bytes (Also known as Blanc, and Melody)
Yes, she has white hair, wears white clothes (most of the time)
i'll update more info and have a scan once i get my scanner installed
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Scenario's different? How so?
Oh, and what I said about your character's Sueness before, I didn't mean to imply that she's already a Mary Sue, so please don't take it the wrong way. (I know through personal experience that most people here have an extremely thing skin.)
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now that i think of it, in a sense... she IS kinda a mary sue....ish?
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Well, in a sense, any character that's exceptional is a bit of a Mary Sue. But, that's what the Mary Sue is, the exceptional. Just take a Mary Sue litmus test online to see if she's too mcuh of a Sue, then decide what to tone down. Now, I'm not a writer or anything, but one thing that pisses me off when there's a killer child is that the child is stronger, faster, and smarter than every adult. Seriously, WTF is up with that?! But as a general rule, don't follow any very popular movie, and you'll probably be much better off.
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haha, i did some googling
according to Wikipedia, she's probably more Mary Sue than Mary Sue herself
actually... that'll make a nice nickname for Shino
But we all learn from our mistakes, i've yet to commit it, so let me fall and hurt myself on this one.
i'm actually glad she turned out to be a sue, if i start my first piece thinking i'm doing it wrong, i'd probably be much more open to good critique like yours. Thankyou
Regarding her, no she's not faster and stronger than an adult, or her peers for the matter, she's just smart. mastermind of "the breed" after all.
would you like to help design her weapons?
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Well, because you didn't give her unbelievable physical abilities, that does take off from her Sue-ness. And I would be happy to help with the weapons. I just can't draw for shit.
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oh.. she's just looking at her hands
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