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zphoenixdownz — dive! dive! dive!
Published: 2008-04-27 04:54:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 432; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 15
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and so we descend into the sea of sleep,with dreams and nightmares filling
our ballast tanks, straining for a depth --
a consciousness we've not cruised in.
surfacing always makes me spin,
as we flush the flood of ideas
back out into the cold darkness.
i wonder who or what i am
when the last drops have trickled out.
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There's an interesting metaphor. I can identify with lines 8 and 9, though I tend to wonder more where and how I am rather than who or what. It's good.
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