AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to Dragon-FOXX [2015-03-14 02:17:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, hei there..

No problem! I kinda fell in love with you after reading your dragon story, so HERE I AM!

You may remember me or my wacky comment, or my strange sense of humor. Or you may not. I don't know.

Frankly, I don't even know if I'd remember myself...which doesn't sound like a good thing...

BUT I DIGRESS, you...are very much welcome.

Have an awesome day!

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Dragon-FOXX In reply to AwkwardTurtle17 [2015-04-18 14:43:52 +0000 UTC]

I totally remember you, dude! I just like to thank people who watch me!

I also have a strange sense of humor. We can be a team! 

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AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to Dragon-FOXX [2015-04-19 07:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Yes, we could definitely be a team! The only question is, what would our name be?

And would this team be one that fights for the forces of good, or evil? Muahahaha! (so very lame, i am)

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AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to bluerose269 [2015-02-11 18:43:07 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to LadyofLegends [2015-01-08 23:01:13 +0000 UTC]

I actually have a few of yours in my favorites, so I'm not sure which one you are referring to.

Honestly I love a lot of your work and I've stated it before in a different message, but I guess you forgot; which isn't a problem, though I don't know if I'll be able to ever type out all of it again.

You have a really good style and way of portraying a story, and I adore your use of Japanese films in some of them. I'm a big fan of them as well! They have such a strange but charming feel to them.

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AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to Ississ-Perok [2015-01-03 00:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, sorry I didn't reply soon enough. I hope you had a great holiday as well!

This year will really be something, I'm sure. Let's hope it's full of fun and good memories!

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AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to Mistress-Of-Monsters [2015-01-08 23:01:44 +0000 UTC]

You are very much welcome! I really like your work!

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AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to LadyofLegends [2014-10-13 21:08:46 +0000 UTC]

OH GOSH. Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, SO SORRY!! I didn't even realize that you asked why I liked them! I am SO sorry! (apparently i am an apologizing mushroom today ._.)

Anyway, first of all you are a great writer. All of your stories are very well written and thought out! That alone is a big reason for why I enjoyed reading your stories. When something is well written with less mistakes, I find it more enjoyable to read (though any story is good in it's own ways; quality aside).

I will admit to you; quite some time ago, I read your For Better or For Worse fanfic, and honestly, I disliked it. The reason wasn't because it wasn't written well, or because I didn't like the plot. I read the whole thing through adamantly and finished it. In the end what I didn't like, that made my opinion negative; was that I was so engrossed and felt such apathy for the characters, that the end result (Spain and the reader's decision/agreement) made me unhappy.

The story was good-amazing even in how realistic the plot was. What I would think is really great about this, is that the story HAD a very realistic set up. This real factor shows from my own feelings for the fanfic. Like in real life, not everyone gets the happy ending they want.

I don't know if that made any sense but, the point I'm trying to get across is that; the story was good, the plot was great, and in the end the fact that I didn't personally agree with it, shows that you as a writer can write not just from one view point, but many others as well.

This is a valuable skill, so please don't take this as though I'm trying to offend you or your work.

ANYWAY! Moving away from all that...stuff. (sorry i started rambling and couldn't stop Dx)

I can't wait for your next update of your Hetalia-Nausicaa parody! That one is definitely my favorite of all your work. I adore parodies, but at times its hard to find really good ones that go into as much detail as I'd like to see. In my eyes, the mixture of the two is really good (if not leaning a bit heavily towards the Nausicaa side, but that can be expected).

If I had any advice for you, I'd recommend getting as much action and character development into the Hetalia characters as possible. The thing about the Nausicaa movie that I find frustrating is that they didn't give the viewers a lot of time to get to know all the other characters that are (i guess?) mildly important.

Your story is a parody after all, so I don't think you should be afraid to go off story a bit, and add in your own ideas. Nothing too big of course! Just some added dialogue here and there, or a few extra scenes would be just fine. I think that would really improve the story! (this is all just a suggestion of course, you don't have to if that's not what you like, or not what you were planning) This is also just directed mainly towards the fact that, the next parts will be including the love interest of the story ('MURICA!), and the original movie didn't give him a lot of screen time with Nausicaa, or character development (i personally can't even remember his name, that's how bad it is!).

GOD, look at me I'm being such a critique!! Sorry about that!

Look if I keep this up, this is never gonna end!! Your stories are great, the other one-shots/drabbles are cool too, and I obviously LOVE YOUR WORK! Sorry again for not answering for a while, I'm a scatterbrain...

I don't know what else to say, since it's all pretty much out there...so...HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON, CAN'T WAIT!!!

Have a smashing day, my friend!

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AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to Konakona321 [2014-06-16 17:55:22 +0000 UTC]

No problem my friend! I hope you'll be able to update soon!!

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Konakona321 In reply to AwkwardTurtle17 [2014-06-21 21:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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AwkwardTurtle17 In reply to xYourHero [2014-05-03 21:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Hey, no problem! Even if you are new to dA, you seem to be doing a great job on here already. Can't wait to see what you have in store!

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