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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-06 07:11:00 +0000 UTC]
heyyyyy
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-06 22:41:37 +0000 UTC]
I haven't seen you in foreeveerrr ;;o;;
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-07 05:12:20 +0000 UTC]
i know ;-;
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-08 00:45:55 +0000 UTC]
How have you been? :0
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-08 21:59:03 +0000 UTC]
ugh tired.
you?
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-08 22:00:36 +0000 UTC]
I kinda have a headache xD
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-08 22:50:53 +0000 UTC]
that sucks :/
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-09 19:45:28 +0000 UTC]
yea but it's okay :c
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-10 07:20:58 +0000 UTC]
Sooo <3 how are you today? rofl. xD
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 01:43:50 +0000 UTC]
aha tired.
i just made a story on Mibba and i'm waiting to see if the public likes it.
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 02:14:42 +0000 UTC]
Awwh I hope they do <3
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 02:16:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah c:
Wanna read it?
Tell me what you think and if something confused you or somethin'?
Please?
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 02:16:57 +0000 UTC]
Okay ~~!
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 02:17:19 +0000 UTC]
Yay! c:
[link]
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 02:35:04 +0000 UTC]
I like it xD but I have one question
why was fuck
used so much lol xD
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 02:36:02 +0000 UTC]
Ahahahahahahahahaha
I felt it was appropriate for a teenage boy.
Especially one with Kyle's attitude.
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 02:36:38 +0000 UTC]
Yea xD I do like it though lol
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 02:37:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you c:
So nothing was confusing or placed oddly or anything?
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 02:40:13 +0000 UTC]
Nope ;D
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 02:45:51 +0000 UTC]
Horray! c:
I kind of like it, I think c:
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 03:00:10 +0000 UTC]
I like it <3
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 03:00:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad c:
So what's goin' on with you?
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 03:26:55 +0000 UTC]
Nothing just rping a little xD
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 03:54:55 +0000 UTC]
Wanna rp?
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 03:55:32 +0000 UTC]
Ummmm sure.
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 03:57:20 +0000 UTC]
;D! wannah ear my idea
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 03:57:33 +0000 UTC]
Yeah c:
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 04:02:00 +0000 UTC]
Uummm..
My first idea was about like waay back then and like when vampires where feared and stuff and this monk and like two other knight guys are hunting them and they end up finding this young kid one, btu like the monk wants to kill it.. but like.. one of the knights kinda likes him and stuff
the other idea I had was about this kitten boy that was in a foster home and he's pretty old already and no one really wants him anyway.. and he's a trouble maker and stuff and no one wanted to adopt him until one day some guy actually does and they end up getting feelings for one another.
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 04:34:48 +0000 UTC]
I really like the first one c:
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 04:39:53 +0000 UTC]
want me to start?
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 04:44:20 +0000 UTC]
Please c:
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 04:51:25 +0000 UTC]
It was a late morning in the village of Andergon people stood in a huge group talking slightly a few babies would occasionally cry and a few coughs where heard.. there was a man standing wearing a pure black robe... a golden cross around his neck.. monk deep brown hair and bright blue eyes.. his hand was on a book the bible as words left his lips "...Today we bring to this village.. grate peace....finally a night where we can all sleep safe... the vampire that has been tormenting you.. has been found and captured!" as he said this the crowed roared with cheers and claps..even some whistles... they soon quieted letting the monk have his room to speak again "...We will be ridding the world of this filthy hellish creature! We are going to take him to a secret church in the depths of the mountains.. their... we will properly dispose of it.." More cheers broke out.. but soon they decended and went back to their homes and their jobs...later around night fall.. the monk walked up to one of the most well known, smartest and strongest knight around..he stood here a moment before opening his lips again to speak "..Ahem..you have been ordered directly by the king to accompany me and a few others on our journey to destroy the vampire ... and I know you have no choice but to say yes to me...do as I say..and this wont be as hard..." as they talked for a moment and the knight finally ended up agreeing the monk took him to a cage door opening it with a giant metal key opening the door witch made a loud creak noise... only light tourches where lit in the area.. the monk stopped in front of a cage witch had contained the vampire "...We placed some heavy herbs in his food last night.. he should be completely sedaded..." the monk spoke quietly to the knight next to him.
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 05:25:06 +0000 UTC]
The night slowly nodded his head in understanding, "I can watch him, then. Alone. It should be fine as the vampire is asleep, right?"he asked. It didn't think it would be hard to contain the thing. It was tiny. He'd never seen one so defenseless before. Never in a controlled an environment. It was almost⦠cute, if it weren't for the fact that this creature sucked the very life out of his people. Those feelings of fury quickly came back to him at that thought. He was glad that they were killing it.
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 05:29:55 +0000 UTC]
"..Yes he will not wake up for a few more hours.. now please pick him up.. get him over in that cage there.." he said pointing to a carriage with a cage connected to the end with a long metal bar.. two white horses in the front "..We will leave tonight.. get ready.. but for now move him..I will meet up with you later.." he said walking away down the hall his foot making loud foot steps until the door was closed and he was gone.. When the knight looked down to the boy.. he looked normal.. he looked just like a little boy that would be playing int he village in the morning with his friends...it was true that these creatures killed... but what did this one have to do with anything.. he's just a child.
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 05:33:54 +0000 UTC]
The knight grit his teeth, shaking those thoughts out of his head. This thing killed people. It killed people. No matter who small and child-like it was, the monk had told him and all those people that it killed people. He sighed, and picked the vampire up carefully, carrying it to the cage, refraining from touching the small creatures face. This was like a nightmare. He never thought he'd be attracted to the enemy. Then again, he'd never pictured the enemy being this small and defenseless.
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 05:36:07 +0000 UTC]
On his walk to the cage a small grunt was heard the boy was awake.. he flinched seeing that he might have had a chance to get away and quickly started to shake around even though.. he was extreamly weak due to the herbs he was forced to eat... he frowned and tried to get away "..A-.ah!..L-let go! I-i beg of you!" he said almost loud but it came out in a normal whisper.
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 05:41:24 +0000 UTC]
His grip tightened on the small vampire's waist. He shook his head and continued his way the the cage, "I can't do that. You're being victimized for your crimes. For killing those people."he replied. He figured that after he got the creature in the cage he should go get the monk. But did he really want to do this to the small creature?
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 12:54:46 +0000 UTC]
"..N-no! P-please! I-i didn't kill anyone! I-i h-haven't I-i swear! I-i...I.." he started to cry then trying to get away.. he didn't want to die for something that wasn't his fault..his master is the one that killed for him that brought him the bides that he hunted.
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-11 13:14:34 +0000 UTC]
For a moment he was almost about to believe the little vampire. He then shook his head, pulling himself back to his sense, "None sense. Your kind⦠They're murderers and deceivers. Your kind kill her, my wife. And got away with it. Before you're excellent liars. Now I understand how skilled you really are."he muttered, grit tight on the boy. Not tight enough to bruise, but enough to be stern as he put the small creature in the cage.
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-11 22:22:42 +0000 UTC]
"...N--no no no ! p--please!" he gripped onto the bars of the cage "..P-please I-i've done nothing!...I-i beg of you!" he said crying a little bit.. he'd done nothing.. he'd never hurt anyone.
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-12 02:04:49 +0000 UTC]
"You drink you blood of humans.Because of that you will never be innocent.I apologize." he mumbled, looking away from the small creature. He felt horrible. But he knew it had to be done. To save his people. Even if the little vampire had done nothing now he eventually would. And the knight couldn't let that happen to any human.
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-12 02:06:26 +0000 UTC]
He frowned and layed back against the cage.. he rubbed his head in to the bars and sighed closing his eyes "..mm...I hate humans.." he said slowly.
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-12 08:42:39 +0000 UTC]
"That an understandable hate at this point. We hated you down, stuffed you in a cage, and now you're awaiting your death all at the hands of human beings. Funny enough, we do the same to murderers. Ironic, eh?"he muttered.
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-12 13:51:00 +0000 UTC]
"..You are no better then my kind...killing for no reason...you don't understand...Your just doing the same as my kind does! It's never going to get any better ever!"
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-14 04:12:00 +0000 UTC]
"No. That's where you're wrong. I kill murderers. I kill men. You species kills all, including helpless woman that were lured into your traps."he muttered, "And it will get better. Time will always change things. And who are you to say that it's not better when your biased opinion prefers the past?"
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The-Unheard-Cry18 In reply to Eoix-BatPrototype [2011-01-14 04:18:15 +0000 UTC]
".That doesn't mean me does it?...Your kind kills innocent women and even children! Because your sick perverts that will rape them and leave their body for dead! Everyone in a race isn't perfect but just because of them doesn't make them evil!"
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Eoix-BatPrototype In reply to The-Unheard-Cry18 [2011-01-14 04:24:36 +0000 UTC]
"You suck the life out of people. All of your kind does. It doesn't get much more evil than that. The human race is a horrifying one. But to think that our horrifying race is scared of yours shows you something."he muttered, "Humans are bad. But not all of us are murders. I can't say the same for your kind."
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