Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2013-04-26 08:57:01 +0000 UTC]

*zooms over and reads* c:

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2013-04-26 22:58:02 +0000 UTC]

What was your favorite part?

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2013-04-27 08:29:27 +0000 UTC]

I think I liked when Zim absolutely flipped his shit after Gir got destroyed the most. C: The entire prologue was really well written, too. You got plenty of detail in, but still kept it good and concise.

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2013-04-27 19:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Heh heh the fighting scenes were difficult to write but fun! I'm glad you liked it (he'll flip more of his shit later on for a different situation XD)

Thanks!
Is there anything that I need to work on my writing?

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2013-04-29 23:42:58 +0000 UTC]

Nah, you're pretty good. Just proofread a lil'- stuff like to and too, and the sentence with A'nalli readying the plasma cannon and dodging Gir's missiles seemed like you had been changing it around when you were initially writing/editing, and you forgot/missed fixing it.

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2013-04-30 01:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I tend to do that a lot sometimes

I always would write a sentence and not realize that I missed some words until I reread them again! My brain fools me sometimes XP

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2013-05-01 03:54:53 +0000 UTC]

I do that too. For me it's usually the and he, because my brain knows which word it's supposed to be, so I don't realize I missed/added in an extra letter and thus completely changed the word when I skim over everything.

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2013-05-01 20:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Don't you hate it when your brain does that? Lol

For my brain--- it skips any word it wants and I won't know it until it's too late

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to darkkinder [2013-01-07 04:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Hah, wow, someone on DA noticed Thanks! I'm finally 18. That means I don't have to log into my side account every time I want to look at a gory deviation that an artist has restricted to people over 18 xD

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-04 02:16:38 +0000 UTC]

If you drew something in muro, it won't let me see what it is D: And depends. What kind of crossover? I don't watch much television, so I only know a handful of shows. And the animes/mangas I have listed on my FF page are the main ones I'm familiar with- and even those I haven't revisited in a while, haha.

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-04 03:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah about muro I couldn't think of something to draw so I closed it but I didn't think it would show sorry...

As for a crossover one of the equations involves Zim... How well do you know video game characters?

It's actually based on a pic I did ===>[link]
Maybe you know the character

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-04 03:30:27 +0000 UTC]

I play a good number of video games, but sadly enough I never did play ratchet and clank :/ As far as similar ps2 games go, I've played Sly Cooper, Kingdom Hearts, and pretty much every Spyro game under the sun. (to list a few.)

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-04 03:44:52 +0000 UTC]

Aww I was hoping a crossover between those two mainly because of alien species swap XD
Guess I'll think of something else then...Maybe a songfic?

Ratchet and Clank series are excellent games to play :3

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-04 04:03:43 +0000 UTC]

I could probably do a songfic, yeah. I've been wanting to do one for a while anyway- it'd be good practice. :3

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-04 04:13:07 +0000 UTC]

I'll pick a couple and you can chose which one you'll use :3
Want me to put links or just the name of the song and artist?

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-04 04:20:02 +0000 UTC]

You can do links if you want- but if they're fairly easy to find on someplace like Youtube, I can find them myself if you don't want to find and copy paste every single song link xD

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-05 16:59:00 +0000 UTC]

Here are some of songs I thought of (there would have been more but I think it would have taken forever to find some of them)

RED
Shadows [link]
Confession(What's inside my head) [link]
Faceless [link]
Buried Beneath [link]

12 Stones
Psycho [link]
Bulletproof [link]
Infected [link]
World So Cold [link]

Paramore
Monster [link]
Careful [link]

Flyleaf
Treasure [link]

Thousand Foot Krutch
War of Change [link]
Down [link]
Take it out on me [link]

Becca
I'm Alive [link]

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-07 04:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Alright, give me a bit to listen to them all and pick the one I think I can write the best story around :3 Ironically enough I've heard a lot of Paramore's stuff, but never those two songs xD And I have one or two 12 Stones songs on my phone, and I think the only Flyleaf song I ever knew of was Again or something like that- I don't remember, its been years, haha.

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-07 05:17:07 +0000 UTC]

Those are some of my favorite songs
Enjoy them :3
Can't wait to see which song you picked

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-11 01:53:10 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I'm pretty sure I'm going to base it around Shadows by Red- it has general emotion-based material I can work with, it's short so that gives me some creative freedom, and I like the song itself :3 Would you like zadr or zadf? (Or something else?)

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-11 02:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Ah Shadows, from my favorite RED album Innocence &Instincts.

Not a big fan of ZADR... I much prefer ZADF over it :3 (and maybe some ZAGR or ZATR but really it's optional I don't want to limit your creativity! If you feel like it needs romance than go for it! XD)

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-11 02:31:47 +0000 UTC]

Oooookie dokie. I'll let you know when its done. (if all goes well, probably like two days or so.) It'll likely end up being added on to my series of oneshots like 10yrsy's gift was, simply for the sake of not having a million different tiny plot bunny stories, you know? xD And now that I know your story preferences, would you prefer a zagr or zatr over zadf? I'm pretty sure the lyrics will allow me to write for basically any pairing.

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-11 02:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Take yer pick :3 I won't mind if it feels more like a ZADF than ZAGR/ZATR.

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-14 05:09:11 +0000 UTC]

I think I'm almost done with it- it's already at 3,000 words, haha. It'll be done in maybe another day or so. (depends on whether my boyfriend comes over and bugs me all day tomorrow or not.)

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-14 06:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Yay!
I'm excited to read it! ( Have fun if he does!)

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Kazehana23 [2012-12-16 09:55:31 +0000 UTC]

Guueeeeeeess what I just finished You can find it right after 10yrsy's chapter. Hope it came out close to what you had in mind/wanted :3

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Kazehana23 In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2012-12-16 18:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it did I really enjoyed reading it
I'm still planning on challenging you in different ways but I'll have to think of them...

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to amoonlitdawn [2009-05-18 21:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!!!

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to BRW-Doraigaa [2008-07-28 18:44:32 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome ^^ I love your drawings color, and i'm going to try to use your fur coloring tutorial if I ever end up drawing something with fur. it helped me out a lot 8)

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to LittleKirara [2008-05-10 23:50:35 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to princevansii [2008-05-03 04:14:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks! you're the first person to comment on my account that I don't know in real life. I'll be sure to look at your art!
keep on drawing!

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princevansii In reply to Invader-Thrawl [2008-05-03 04:19:53 +0000 UTC]

^^ thaanks

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Invader-Thrawl In reply to Parker-Fan [2008-04-18 01:03:31 +0000 UTC]

by clicking the pretty button.

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