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"Local Mime"
# Statistics
Favourites: 0; Deviations: 8; Watchers: 12
Watching: 38; Pageviews: 4316; Comments Made: 555; Friends: 38
# Comments
Comments: 62
Your poetry is inspirational.
Keep up the amazing work!
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This is another one of da poems i wanted your opinion on.
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Thank you for the watch. I will watch too, because I like your poems even though sometimes I don't get the meaning. I'll keep reading them over and over againg until I find a meaning to them.
It's odd though, I'm not a fan of poetry, but I like yours. Maybe things are changing.
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I'm glad you like my poetry. I like your works. If you ever need a meaning, just ask!
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thanks about the Hiragana or whatever it was thing lol I appreciate it! Nice poems
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I'm glad you like my work. If there anything else I can help with (hopefully nothing too hard, my Japanese isn't all that fluent) just ask!
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I will! and you seem to know my friend FLCLOVER!
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It would seem so. Small world, huh?
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Pfft. You think I'm rude? Look at what LocalMime does!
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Now THATS scary! How'd you get that?
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You can find a butt loud at ~!!!
Its filled with ALOT of things~!
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Of course I put up everything I've ever written in my whole life on DA. While your statement is fundamentally flawed, I applaud your misguided attempt at being an elitist.
You are really a naive person if you believe that the number of items you have in your gallery is representative of skill, and that giving a truthful critique is a bad thing. Maybe, instead of trying to portray and defend nonsensical ideals, you should look at your own writing (because I've seen your gallery) and think “Am I the one that needs help?"
Good luck on being a novelist. If you act half as snotty as you have been to any mentor: you have got a long, hard road ahead of you.
I'm sorry if that "destroyed your dream", because we all know that saying the obvious and honest truth is the worst thing anyone can do in the whole world.
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Oh, shut up! My stories are just fine, you can just fuck off!
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you know criticism can actually be a good thing when a person is intelligent enough to see it... But hey, some just don't have that gift...!
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I know! But I'm just saying. Too much is just mean.
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You're just an awful human being. Gtfo.
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His 4 deviations are better than 25 of yours.
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As if you've read them all.
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You wouldn't know talent if it hit you in the head.
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Yes you. I know from when he criticized one of my works. I have to be honest, I was not expecting it, but a good writer is typically blunt, and therefore, I applaud him for that. You on the other hand, are just pathetic for writing anything related to animu.
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Don't bother begging for my pardon. Not now that you've given me that horrible first impression.
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Thank you for the critique,I'll keep it in mind
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Glad I could help. Please feel free to ask if you want me to look at anything else!
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Thank you for your offer .w.
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Thank you for watching me first.
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Not to discourage or put you down, but the comment you left for ~Luthien167 wasn't the best thing to write to her. She's going through hard times right now; maybe you could've saved that correction for later?
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If she does not want her work critiqued she should not have put her work on website devoted to improving artists, where it could be viewed by the public. She did not discourage or disable comments, so I will not apologize for, or rescind any statement.
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I'm not asking you to apologize. But as a fellow artist, you can understand that sometimes the action to take during a period of grief is to express feelings in art and writing. I've done it before. Do you disagree?
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I agree you can express an emotional state through art, but the moment you put it on display for the whole world, you place it under the light of criticism. If a person is so fragile that they can not handle a correction of punctuation, then they should not be placing their work under the scrutiny of others. As a fellow artist, you know that you should always strive to improve your work, when you stop doing that, you stop being a true artist.
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I doubt she knows about the Critique Disabled function-- don't you think that's implied?
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No, infact, she thanked me for my input. Even in an emotional poem, there is a need for correct punctuation. I did not mention content or message, just the fact that an elipsis and comma are different and she had them confused.
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You're an impressive artist.
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