DeadEnderz13 In reply to DeadEnderz13 [2018-01-23 02:37:07 +0000 UTC]

You know what, never mind. I’m not bored anymore. Bye! ^^

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to OldandNewShowsForevs [2017-10-02 14:03:19 +0000 UTC]

I already made Red Echoes...

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OldandNewShowsForevs In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-10-02 18:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Will you bring them back on your journal posts?

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to OldandNewShowsForevs [2017-10-02 18:38:13 +0000 UTC]

No, AFAC Plotholes is over, but I at the right opportunity (when AFAC is over) would criticize AFAC on my journals.
In the mean time, how about AFAC Negativity Wiki?
afac-negativity.wikia.com/wiki…
The color palette is the opposite from the AFAC Wiki, and it's mostly encyclopedic instead of my usual ranting.

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OldandNewShowsForevs In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-10-02 18:44:46 +0000 UTC]

YES.

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to OldandNewShowsForevs [2017-10-02 21:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Talked with TQ and said that she's doing too much canon divergence. Tried to be as nice as possible, and if TQ tones down her comic a tad, then it proves it's redeemable. Then we both try harder on our respective works to help her improve, maybe even help each other. The Fairy Godmother's words: "Light and dark go hand in hand. You can't have one without the other."
That works in writing, because if you only be positive and not helping the creator the author wouldn't receive criticism, and if you only be negative and harsh, the author would be too depressed to continue the work.
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Speaking of AFAC, MBSRARMA is far too on the negative side, because the plot focuses on killing the characters, and it should instead be less bashing and demonizing, more making snarky remarks on the dialogue and the morality should be the Good (Main characters that are good and catch on the Mok plot sooner because their worlds are very different and frequently interacted), the Bad (AFAC, but they're still on the white side of the morality scale and don't catch on the Mok plot because Gaster only sees alternate timelines and all non-Undertale universes are fictional) and the Ugly (MOK. Need to say enough?)
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tl;dr, How TQ responds will determine if the comic is irredeemable or not, and there should be a balance between positivity and negativity. You're too far on the negative end.
forums.spacebattles.com/thread…
See the one with Minnie on Twilight, THIS is how you bash a work while not being heavy-handed.

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OldandNewShowsForevs In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-10-03 01:05:16 +0000 UTC]

I know, I know.

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to OldandNewShowsForevs [2017-10-03 14:28:49 +0000 UTC]

It's irredeemable since I asked as kindly as possible and she strawmanned me saying I said I "tarnished" Toby Fox's "perfect vision" and said if I don't like the content, "I can create the comic".
You can go with the old plan of MBSRARMA (kill the characters) since the readers basically spoiled her by giving her only positive reviews.

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OldandNewShowsForevs In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-10-03 18:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. But they'll retreat after Mok's demise.

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-10-02 15:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wait. A SJW fanboy messed with my page, I reversed it.
(Edit: Why SJW? He's so stereotypically SJW you have no idea. They called me a cis white male and said I was angry when I only demonstrated anger at Chara.)

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to vinnadinnachk1988 [2017-09-10 20:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I got so famous people linked me to a FUCKING PORN SITE.
As Sans would say: "go to hell."

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Emerjeen [2017-06-27 00:26:51 +0000 UTC]

"Be honest."

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Emerjeen In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-06-27 00:55:21 +0000 UTC]

I just feel  sorry for you because you feel like you need to do that. If you don't like the art, go somewhere else. It doesn't help anyone if you just put down the artiest because they feel inspired to do something.

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Emerjeen [2017-06-27 13:52:01 +0000 UTC]

If you don't like me, go somewhere else.
Your logic puts you at checkmate.

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-07 14:40:05 +0000 UTC]

You can have a few plot holes, but you can't go completely overboard.

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-10 14:46:23 +0000 UTC]

I never try to put plotholes in my stories, but after I write something that feels solid to me I ask my friend about it and he asks 'why does ____ happen?' and I sit there like 'uhhhh' xDDD

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-10 15:29:10 +0000 UTC]

Show me an image of your stories.

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-10 23:08:42 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could. I have a few in a 'planning limbo', three to be exact. A game(free on for RPGMakerMV), a super hero comic, and a UT AU. The only images of those would be: a sketch, some in-game assertery, and nothing on the UT stuffs.

Planning limbo due to college btw... and laziness.

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-11 00:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Right.

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-13 17:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Ya know, the main concept of my AU is based on a pet peeve i have with UT fan comics. Lol... wish i was good at drawing, I'd post something about it.
#ISuckAtArts

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-13 17:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Right.
What's your pet peeve?

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-13 17:29:33 +0000 UTC]

saving and reloading and stuff in UT comics, references as if it was a video game, but its a comic/animated shorts/literature. I get the point of UT is deconstructing it, but when I see that stuff in a non-videogame form it iritates me to no end for some reason. So my AU is like 'what if that didn't exist', and I went from there... I've been working on this for 7-ish months now... xDD

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-13 17:36:55 +0000 UTC]

What about Flowey?

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-13 17:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Flowey was literally the hardest thing in the world to decide. It took me at least a month. Either he does die, or doesn't and that would also effect things.
As you can tell, things started stacking in 'Lifeline' as I call it.
I always liked AUs where it wasn't '____tale' xD

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-13 17:44:33 +0000 UTC]

It could work in MS Paint Fan Adventures.
There's no relevance in Flowey's resets.

>Flowey doesn't kill himself for stupid shit
>Flowey, being Asriel, tries to befriend everyone
>It gets boring for Flowey, so he thinks: "What if I start killing?"
>After Frisk comes, Flowey tries to kill them.
>Toriel blasts him
>After Asgore is killed, Flowey absorbs 6 souls and starts rewriting history.
>Flowey fight.

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-13 19:18:06 +0000 UTC]

When I was first came up with it I considered the idea of the series being similar in style to 'Save CHARA', but i decided to just go with a comic xD

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-13 19:27:06 +0000 UTC]

I've seen your art. It isn't bad, it's pretty good. Second, suggest you start. Give me your previews. I will correct every error in the storyline.

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-13 20:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Its pretty terrible. The only non-terrible things are cringy base-uses and dress up game things. Lol

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-13 20:25:32 +0000 UTC]

It is at least decent.
Moving on, I am an sprite editor, so I can make up for you some images. Can you set up an chat in Deviantart? If so...

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-14 01:34:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks

I don't usually use 'chats', sorry. Haven't used them in yeeears, I prefer notes.

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PlotholeBrigade In reply to Twilight-Knight1 [2017-03-14 13:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Right-o.

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Twilight-Knight1 In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-03-14 21:07:08 +0000 UTC]

We could do it on a note if ya like

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