SecondWhen In reply to steelydan1923 [2012-11-11 07:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Will do! I've been slow in doing much of anything online recently, but I'll get to it, I promise, hahaha

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steelydan1923 In reply to SecondWhen [2012-11-13 23:49:15 +0000 UTC]

no hurry ... just making sure you hadn't forgotten about me, because I would really like your input on some of the stuff in my gallery ... and I, of course, will be watching for your future additions ...
I have to ask -- how'd you get interested in boxing? Something in your background, etc.? just curious ... I boxed amateur for 15 years so I can't shake it .. ha ha ...

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SecondWhen In reply to afwfan [2012-10-05 01:09:17 +0000 UTC]

My avatar pic? Hahaha, not that I know of... it's been so long, I'm not even sure where I got it from....

Thanks for the feedback! I enjoy writing them!

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SecondWhen In reply to Tetsuo72 [2012-09-24 06:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, thanks so much! I saw you favorite my chapters so far; did you get a chance to read them all yet?

When you do, I'd love some feedback; it's always appreciated and helps my development, I think XD

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Tetsuo72 In reply to SecondWhen [2012-09-24 18:16:54 +0000 UTC]

I've read through the first two chapters so far, and it's pretty great! You write the fights with a bit more of an eye for the technical side of things which is refreshing. I'm not much of a literary critic though so I'm not sure how much help I can be in that department, but I can say that I wouldn't mind seeing the fights get a little foxier (e.g. topless ), and I always love it when one of the girls ends up dominating at the end of a fight.

Anyway, keep up the great work, I'll be looking forward to seeing more!

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SecondWhen In reply to Tetsuo72 [2012-09-27 07:53:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Tetsuo!

Yeah, I figured that knowing boxing would be an integral part of watching boxing, so I try to integrate that into my work. If you're the same way, I'm always down to discuss current events in the real life ring as well.

As far as topless fights go, the setting makes that a little hard to work in, since it's more of a professional focus, but since most of the other writers have characters who fight topless often, expect my girls to follow suit in collabs!

Lastly, the way fights end, I'm open to a variety of finishes. Hailey's fight ends that way, unfortunately for her, but it's not drawn out. Zoe's fight was intentionally dramatic, because of her style and tactics. But if our braided boxer builds a comfortable lead, expect her to dismantle opponents from a distance with stinging crosses and jabs that take their toll over several rounds. I've got a couple fights planned to showcase that but don't want to give too much away!

As always, thanks for the comments! Love talking with the people who enjoy my work!

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SecondWhen In reply to Wayward-Darkwolf [2012-09-22 21:58:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh? You're too kind! What have I done this time?

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Wayward-Darkwolf In reply to SecondWhen [2012-09-22 22:37:10 +0000 UTC]

Bein' yourself?

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SecondWhen In reply to Wayward-Darkwolf [2012-09-23 01:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I didn't have to go out of my way? That's even better!

And hey, you're no slouch in the "cool" department either!

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Wayward-Darkwolf In reply to SecondWhen [2012-09-24 02:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Awwe. Thanks, When

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SecondWhen In reply to MasterSaruwatari [2012-09-17 03:11:23 +0000 UTC]

Nothing much, just writing when inspiration and time collide...

You?

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MasterSaruwatari In reply to SecondWhen [2012-09-17 03:12:52 +0000 UTC]

getting this reading out for com class and try to finish this paper. so I can free up so time to write. Good to see you around. Have you ever been on my page before?

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SecondWhen In reply to BeanieTheBoxer [2012-08-06 23:27:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! yeah, Hailey's just getting into boxing, and she's got a lot to learn. Zoe, the girl who acted as her cornerman, is also a boxer, and is a little bit further in her journey. I plan to bounce back and forth between their stories, and hope to start posting the next chapter this week!

Thanks again for the watch!

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BeanieTheBoxer In reply to SecondWhen [2012-08-06 23:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, I saw you've got help from fx, with editing! Him and I are working on a collab together before I start getting my original story in the works. If you have yahoo im, and wanna spitball or chat sometime, add me (sabrina_boxes) I'm also on msn if you use that (sabrina_boxes@hotmail.com is that email for that i believe!)

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SecondWhen In reply to BeanieTheBoxer [2012-08-07 00:13:12 +0000 UTC]

haha, cool, thanks!

Yeah, for editing, i mostly just use google docs. If I can just send the invites to that hotmail address, you'll be on that list!

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BeanieTheBoxer In reply to SecondWhen [2012-08-07 00:26:40 +0000 UTC]

my email that i use google docs for is sabrina.boxes@gmail.com :3

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SecondWhen In reply to LatinVimes [2012-07-14 01:04:53 +0000 UTC]

No problem! It's really coool, and different from your ordinary work. I like it.!

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