TKTenaciousFun In reply to Thelonewandererof101 [2015-11-02 15:34:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but I actually don't. It's nothing personal, but I'm working on my writing and never have time to keep it up. Sorry

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Thelonewandererof101 In reply to TKTenaciousFun [2015-11-02 20:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Eh, no problem. Just curious is all. Good luck with your stories.

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TKTenaciousFun In reply to Thelonewandererof101 [2015-11-02 20:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Thelonewandererof101 In reply to TKTenaciousFun [2015-11-07 02:17:27 +0000 UTC]

I just got some ideas. You should write a piece, where the CPU Candidates get kidnapped (sleep gassed, hypnotized, somewhere along those lines) and tickled by Arfiore, and their sisters have to rescue them, and a piece where Nepgear and Uni become the sole CPUs because the old hag kidnapped Neptune, Noire, and the others,and is tickling them, and they have to rescue them with the help of Iffy and Compa.

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TKTenaciousFun In reply to Thelonewandererof101 [2015-11-07 03:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Those aren't bad ideas. I'm going to get started tomorrow on a new story. I want all the Goddess, and Candidates to get it, but I'm also think about some of the advisers too. I'm going to see what I can come up with.

Thanks for the suggestions. I had an idea where the candidates get captured, but have the focus of the story be on the tickling only, but I'm not sure if that would be interesting enough. I want to do a full adventure story with chapters.

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Thelonewandererof101 In reply to TKTenaciousFun [2015-11-07 08:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Well, with all due respect, you need to show the candidates being captured in order to create a feeling of dread and hopelessness. Having them struggle while being tied up might grant you the ability to lull the readers into a sence of false hope, then, after they are still struggling after getting partially tied up, you have them subdued by the sleeping gas, or hypnosis, (trying to resist it at first, before being lulled into a deep sleep.) then they are sucsessfully tied up, and taken wherever, and then wake up, and get tickled. My second suggestion, well as long as Nepgear, Uni, Iffy, and Compa are not only one of the main focuses, but also extremely OP, go nuts with it. As for your multiple chapter idea, either of these two are good candidates for it, but you could also do a new series about the lives of Uni, and Nepgear after they become the ruling CPUs, with Compa, and Iffy helping them out. You can include whoever you want, again, as long as the four of them are the main focus, kind of like MK2, or Re;Birth 2. And of course, the plot behind it all would be random misadventures that lead to tickling, lots and lots of tickling. But before you consider any of the current, and previous responses, or your orical tickling, please be so kind as to either write about Uni's time in the manners room, or whatever else you might have in store for her, and a Compa tickle piece. As always, I'm looking forward to reading your next pieces, and will begin favoriting them in order of Nepgear, Uni, Iffy, and Compa, then if you take my suggestions to heart, the CPU Candidate tickling.

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TKTenaciousFun In reply to Thehiddenfeather [2015-10-31 16:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Thehiddenfeather In reply to TKTenaciousFun [2015-10-31 16:35:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm Jasmine, pleasure to meet you.

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