YuBit In reply to powder-sugar [2014-11-30 10:04:28 +0000 UTC]

LITERALLY ALL THE FEEDBACK MESSAGES I HAVE ORIGINATE FROM YOU I CANT BELIEVE THIS SUGAR I CANNOT

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powder-sugar In reply to YuBit [2014-12-05 22:32:48 +0000 UTC]

I cannot be STOPED

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YuBit In reply to powder-sugar [2014-11-25 15:27:05 +0000 UTC]

WH-- WHERE DID YOU COME FROM.

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powder-sugar In reply to YuBit [2014-11-27 02:17:33 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW PENCILFISH ON TUMB AND THEN I SAW U HAD TAMIYA AS UR ICON AND WEL P HERE I AM

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YuBit In reply to Freakerybattery4 [2014-09-29 09:03:31 +0000 UTC]

HAHAH THANKS<3

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YuBit In reply to DylanSeto [2014-06-12 13:56:40 +0000 UTC]

well music always interests me so...
what kind of support, though?

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DylanSeto In reply to YuBit [2014-06-12 20:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Just lookin' for feedback. xP

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YuBit In reply to DylanSeto [2014-06-13 11:15:02 +0000 UTC]

oh I'm capable of giving you that~! got a link or something like that?

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DylanSeto In reply to YuBit [2014-06-13 15:34:52 +0000 UTC]

Okay!

Here: www.youtube.com/watch?v=XEbreA…

Let me know what you think

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YuBit In reply to DylanSeto [2014-06-16 12:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I'm a little late with my response! I haven't been on dA a lot.
Anyways.. as for my opinion.. watch out, it's a whole bunch. I've always been sensitive to music -runs in the family- and often have had criticism to give when it comes to songs.

It has an overall nice feel to it, really relaxed. And I'm not even gonna say anything about the lyrics, it's already obvious you've got your talents in that.

But the beat seems a little odd, in my opinion, it all seems a little off rhythm. Or it might simply just not be a rhythm of my taste, it just seems a little off. Then again... it does kind of fit as well. So I can allow it.

The rapping isn't bad, but the singing is a little off-tune. Not as in... absolutely bad, because I can still hear which tones are supposed to be made. But coming from a really tone sensitive person, it could've been a little more stable. But just like the rhythm, some of the instruments being off-tune adds to the charm of the song as a whole.

Anyway, it's a very good composition. It sounds pretty unique, but really relaxed, even with the electronic- maybe especially with the electronic instruments. The instruments are well-balanced. As well as the volume of the vocals.

To improve it, maybe try more stable singing? Or if that's difficult, find someone to sing these parts for you? Someone with a soft voice, perhaps? To add to the melancholic feeling?

I hope you find my criticism useful. Keep going!

~ Alice

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DylanSeto In reply to YuBit [2014-06-17 13:39:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback!

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YuBit In reply to Jamcouver [2014-04-19 16:08:37 +0000 UTC]

I saw she mentioned me, yeah :'P

So on what aspects do you need help?

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Jamcouver In reply to YuBit [2014-04-19 17:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Well Annie is left and betrayed by her brotherhood because she failed the infiltration of wall Rose. The brotherhood maked Annie responsible for the arrest and execution of Reiner and Berthold. They force her to commit suicide. (New idea) Her father wanted to convince the New Brotherhood to give her a chance. He gets killed as he denies the order to assassinate his own daughter. When she finds out her father was killed by the New Brotherhood she falls into a depression. Now she is really hated by the whole world. What do you think about her reaction?

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YuBit In reply to qpio [2014-03-19 08:42:02 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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YuBit In reply to UmiHoshi [2014-02-18 07:22:10 +0000 UTC]

OH NOOOOOOoooooooo

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UmiHoshi In reply to YuBit [2014-02-18 07:43:38 +0000 UTC]

upupupupu llllD

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YuBit In reply to Pencilfish [2013-12-01 09:14:38 +0000 UTC]

I love you too uvu

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YuBit In reply to NekoTenshi-Chama [2013-10-01 17:19:02 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOD ITS YOU WHAT HAPPENED I DONT EVEN REMEMBER WHAT THE FUCK

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NekoTenshi-Chama In reply to YuBit [2013-10-01 18:16:29 +0000 UTC]

ahahahahahahaha ^^ Its been about... ehm... 3 years? maybe 4? hahahahaha How have you been doing?

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YuBit In reply to NekoTenshi-Chama [2013-10-02 11:58:45 +0000 UTC]

oh don't ask, I've gotten pretty bad when it comes to my health and school
then again, could be worse, currenly jamming to a sexy song sung by a sexy seiyuu

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NekoTenshi-Chama In reply to YuBit [2013-10-02 19:11:51 +0000 UTC]

aww D: I hope it will be ok c: WHICH SONG/SEIYUU!!??

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YuBit In reply to NekoTenshi-Chama [2013-10-03 12:58:44 +0000 UTC]

I FORGOT WHAT I WAS LISTENING TO YESTERDAY

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NekoTenshi-Chama In reply to YuBit [2013-10-03 18:48:06 +0000 UTC]

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAKA BAAAAAAAKA XDDD maakt niey uit hoor uvu.
Ugh ik probeer iets te tekenen alleen k heb geen flauw idee hoe je goed kan inkleuren ;n;

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YuBit In reply to NekoTenshi-Chama [2013-10-04 16:04:57 +0000 UTC]

wat maak je dan? en in welk progamma? u3u

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NekoTenshi-Chama In reply to YuBit [2013-10-04 16:37:53 +0000 UTC]

n b-day drawing van 4 characters (junko,annie,levi en armin) de meiden in ondergoed en de jongens naakt in een apron (het is een request xD) en ze hebben n sjaal om. painttool sai (alleen kan de free full version nie meer vinden ;n

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YuBit In reply to NekoTenshi-Chama [2013-10-06 06:11:20 +0000 UTC]

HOLY JEGUS SHIT WHO REQUESTED THAT

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NekoTenshi-Chama In reply to YuBit [2013-10-07 14:29:25 +0000 UTC]

haha a friend of mine called manon uvu

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YuBit In reply to LilRuii [2013-09-26 11:35:31 +0000 UTC]

RUI!!!?!?!?!  ITS BEEN SO LONG?? WOW HEY

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LilRuii In reply to YuBit [2013-10-09 09:22:46 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHA YEA IK DACHT OJO IK GA WEER TEKENEN. D: DUS IK KWAM HIER OP EN EN ENENENNE JA. TOEN ZAG IK JOU EN TOEN FEEST. 

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