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# Comments
Comments: 90
Hi there new little sugarbutt!
I came to thank you for the awesome
I really truly appreciate it, and I hope you will enjoy my artworks and actively tell your opinions about them!
Please don't get creeped out by me calling you ''sugarbutt'', it's just the way I call my watchers x'D
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Hey, Hey buddy thanks for the fave and a happy birthday ya magnificent manga drawin bastard!
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You're welcome! Your art is EPIC!
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Thanks for the watch! I'm honored you found my work worthy!!
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Thx for
If you want more informations and images of me, please follow me on :
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You're welcome! You're the only person I watch that has amazing Naruto art!
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Hey, hey buddy POST SOME ART DAMMIT but hey man no pressure
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I got tons of stuff that I gotta post! Gonna start.....now!
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No problem again! Maybe you could watch me! Just kidding!!
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Thanks!
deviantART muro drawing
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hey buddy-- it's your soldat friend.
cool work man!!
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Thanks dude, sorry for the late reply though.Should I upload some fight scenes?
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Well, you were basically my only inspiration but you haven't been talking lately.Let alone drawing.
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Also, for more characters; I'd start by adding helpless children, so it seems like too the Audience that it's a depressing scene.
Take Example; My Pokemon Fan Character, Cane. He is a 12 year old Eevee who is curious, yet scared easily. While Cane is young, he is skilled with a technique of being an easy Target, so he involves lots of attention and protection.
Though, around chapter 5 or 7 you'd introduce you're first Adult Character, like a Blastoise, Venasaur or a pokemon at it's final evolution state.
First Evolution; Child
Second Evolution Stage; Teen
Final Evoulution Stage; Adult
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Okay, most of the characters are teenagers who are about 18 yrs. But there could be helpless children who the main characters take in. The child also may have special powers that can....idk. Can I read your fanfic?
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I don't have a fan fic.
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The first chapter is too short, I suggest too be more detailed instead of just typing or saying "Ninja Stars and Katana" You'd type something
A pair of two rusted Ninja Stars, they're about five years old.. Dust had been gathered and they just took residence in my attic. It helped though too have a Katana, "Why'd I even buy it?" I said too myself.. Still in shock of the 'ending of the world' meteor shower that was too come.. I slowly crawled too the Katana, the attic was too cramp too walk or run, let alone I didn't want too disturb the quiet dark sea. I looked at the katana in amazement. "It would help.." I began, "It would help too take it." I grabbed it by it's holder, I got cut a bit by it because if it's sharpness, but a little scar won't be a problem, right?
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Holy SH**. You planned this out already?!
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Well no, I just thought it up.
I'm a very detailed person. Which is why I just wrote a paragraph of the character grabbing two weapons.
Also, in the first chapter; I still havn't noticed that you don't establish what pokemon the character is. And what he looks like.
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P-pokemon? You got it all wrong dude, this isn't a pokemon fan-fac it our own original story. But we do have our own Pokemon fanfic too.
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Yes, well. I still need too know information on the characters. Descriptions.
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Elorm (pronounced LM(ME):A smart, 18 year old who designed the worlds first hydro-plasma bow,arrow, and hoverboard.
Race: African American
Weapons: Katana,Bow and Arrow, Type 88 Sniper Rifle,Tomahawk, and portal gun!(Our own.)
I'll do more later but tell me what else you want,detailed. The rest later too.
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Sure. It's about a group of friends who survive a meteor shower that ended the world and they are searching for a magical seed that can restore the Earth. Also, demons find out about them while searching for souls and try to kill them but get a surprise.
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It's a nice intro too the story, but the 'magical seed' seems too relative too Jack and the Bean Stock.
But the Meteor shower, that is clever.
Though, the demons could be edited a bit. And the 'searching for souls' relates too Harry Potter and the Soul Suckers, as does Adventure Time Soul Eaters, and so on.
For the main evil characters; instead of Demon(s) You'd go with something that would relate too the Meteor Shower; Such as Mutants, Gastro Acid Balls, and the leader could consist of a mixture of Chemicals and Body Parts gorged together from the gas.
Instead of trying too kill them, demons are more likely too cause mischief. Such as Acting too be their friend, false helping and plenty of tricks and lies. This shows that they are true spawns of unworthy ness.
If I were too say, instead of a 'magical seed' I'd say that they'd be looking for a gem, mystic stone, or something relative too the Pokemon Adventure games. Where Pokemon Adventure Darkness, Time and Blue. They each searched for a certain mystical item.
So Kakashi, if I may ask; May I write some of it, or give my thoughts for edits? It helps too be original, let alone creative which gives it a better story line.
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You know! After reading this well-planned message....you are worthy of helping. XD! But, yeah you seem to have a nice thought story. So, you can write some and givce your thoughts because two story writers are better than one and you got skill. Thanks, i'll ask the other story maker for his account on fictionpress so you can help. Thanks.
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My pleasure, and please go on of the compliments. XD
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