razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-01 02:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Am LOVING the Wonder Slave story even if it's intensity freaks me out a bit >.<

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-01 03:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Awe, thank u for the compliment!

I'm sorry the intensity freaks you out a bit.

But, she is the strongest superheroine of all time so I think she can handle it.

I remember reading a fan fiction once and it really got my heart pumping, sorry to say that was my goal for readers and some of the chapters.

I wanted to put the readers in the same or similar situation that Wonder Woman is going through to create that anxiety within as she realizes how certain things begin to connect to bring out a clearer picture.

Perhaps if you prepare yourself that you're reading a type of a thriller, you may feel a bit less tense.

I hope that helps and thank you for reading.

I wouldn't take offense if you stopped.   

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-02 12:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! And I have no intention to stop reading. Why it freaks me out a bit at times is kinda complicated but a good part of it is definitely your skill as a writer. The story really pulls me into Wonder Slut's shoes and who WOULDN'T be freaking out in her position lol. As much as messed with me at times I could never stay away for long, I soon HAD to come back and read the chapter. I'm trying to get my Daddy (bdsm Master) to read it when he gets the chance! Can't wait for the chapter =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-02 19:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for another compliment and for the reply.

This is the type of feedback I really like and really appreciate.

I get so curious as to how the readers feel when I write and post each chapter.

And, I'm glad you will continue to read as well.

Hearing your words makes me feel more motivated to write more but I love this story so much that I don't want to put out anything sloppy as I find myself editing older chapters when I find simple mistakes like spelling errors or major mistakes like a continuity issue.

I don't mean to mess with readers but want to add as much surprising twists and turns while making the readers a bit apprehensive and anxious to read more with cliffhangers.

It sounds like you've already established a bdsm lifestyle and happy to hear you want to share this with your "daddy."

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-02 23:27:41 +0000 UTC]

Yea Daddy and i live the lifestyle, kind of a cross between Master/slave and DD/lg. Glad you striving to be better, always a great sign for a writer =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-02 23:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Sounds cute and hope it's going well for you both.

And thanks, I can notice my growth as a writer as I went back to read my older chapters and ended up editing a lot of chapters 2 and 3 to make it flow better with some better details.

I probably may do that for other chapters once I release next chapters or after I finish the story which will be a long time from now.

^-^

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-02 23:44:05 +0000 UTC]

Hope it won't be TOO long from now! Wanna know what happens =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-02 23:50:53 +0000 UTC]

I'll start on the final rewrite for chapter 20 right now and post it as soon as it's finished.  ^-^

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-03 01:02:21 +0000 UTC]

*cheers!* YAY! =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-03 04:43:24 +0000 UTC]

Yay! ^-^

And, wow! Looking at the time of this message, it took me 3 hours and 40 minutes to do the last rewrite.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-03 07:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Just finished reading and my heart is still pounding! Not only is it pinsing hard but I found it speeding up and slowing down with Wonder Womans. The slow felt really weird, never really had my heart pound hard but slow before. The fast was definitely very much like building up to an anxiety attack but thankfully never getting that far >.<

I've done some hypnosis/guided meditation stuff before, both in therapy and erotically, and it was pretty interesting how you included that. I've been wanting to try electro play for a long time but have never had the chance.

I also consciously realized part of what has been freaking me out about this. Being left alone and prolly unsupervised with the dildo gag where she really struggles to breath and is in danger of being choked to death. I really like the idea of a dildo gag but that kind of breath control/play is a pretty hard limit for me thanks to an assault years ago.

Our talk had me paying a lot closer attention to the writing itself and now that I'm looking for it you've made some huge strides forward!

Have gotten me feeling inspired to revisit and work on a story of mine that I havent touched in like 3 years. Excited for what's next! =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-03 08:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is the best feedback I've ever gotten.

Thank you so much for the compliment and the insightful comments.

First off, glad you didn't get an anxiety attack yourself.

But didn't realize the impact it would've had on the reader.

To give you the behind the scenes, this was some of my experiences when I took E at raves or at home.

The way the DJ controls the tempo can really control your mood, energy, and feelings.

Sometimes, even the visuals or video on screen can trigger old memories or specific thoughts.

As for electro play, I have an Electrostim kit with some accessories.

It definitely hurts at first so like a spanking, a good warm up can help and I get surprised with myself how far I can push myself.

Of course, I don't want to get ahead and spoil anything from the next chapter which is only partially written. 

Besides drugs, breath control/play are some of my concerns people may copy and mess up with.

Of course depends on how you do it.

I don't like strangling but dildo gag is something where you do have to be careful with and learn to tolerate something that goes deep in your throat.

Like anything, you can get used to it and learn to keep yourself from gagging.

I'm so sorry to hear about an assault.

Anything traumatic can really mess things up for anyone.

I've been lucky I never had such a traumatic event where something I like is taken away from me because it gets associated with such a terrible memory.

I'm curious what you saw in my writing for you to see me making huge strides forward.

All I can say is I always try to improve and get better.

I was able to connect some things from past chapters to help readers get a clearer picture and reasoning for certain things.

Also, I have used or added a lot of foreshadowing as well.

I'm really happy to hear you feel inspired to revisit your own stories.

I really enjoy talking to you about this and it's really fun for me to see how a reader felt and what they got out of it as some of it is a surprise for me.

Next chapter is going to be long but really fun.

I just hope it doesn't take too long but may have to split them up into multiple chapters if it runs too long since I want to be as descriptive as possible.

It's actually my favorite chapter and one of the main reasons why I decided to write this story.

I guess it's also because my favorite fantasy scenario as well.

^-^

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-03 20:56:44 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad i didn't have an attack too lol!

i've never tried E before and didn't know it has that effect on people, very interesting!

*jokingly* i hate you just a tiny bit for having an e-stim kit while i only have access to an outlet *pout*

Breath play and gags are prolly the parts of BDSM that people jump into way too quick and early the most with out understanding just how serious they are. i think you portrayed it in a way that gets at least some of those dangers across pretty well. How much trouble she has breathing the panic that she might choke and just how powerful and dangerous taking someones voice is. How much she NEEDS to say something to her captors but can't. Hopefully that will impress on anyone who might want to try at home to be careful and look up some good info first. As far as the drugs go you don't really glamorize it all or even make me want to try in even the slightest so i think you are prolly good there.

*hugs* Thanks for the kind word about the assault. It's something i'm working on and it is getting better. i'm also glad you've never had to experience that and pray you never will. Daddy and i will start to incorporate breath play eventually working up to choking one day. Rewrite the neural pathways with positive, make it so the first place my mind goes is something fun with Daddy instead of the assault.

As for what improvement i'm seeing i'd break it down into three categories; word choice, flow, and mistakes. Your word choice has definitely gotten better, i remember there being times in the earlier chapters where a word choice felt awkward, out of place, or was wrong for what i think you were trying to convey. The only example i can think of off the top of my head is the way you used "vulva" and "vagina" interchangeably when Wonder Woman was getting whipped. They aren't the same part of the anatomy. i know most people use them to mean the same thing but having you use both to mean the same thing threw me off some when reading. There was some similar problems with the way some sentences were written that threw me off as well that messed with the flow of reading. i don't think them were technically wrong from a grammar stand point but the way they were worded felt kinda awkward to me. This in particular is where i think you've made the most progress and what has improved the reading experience the most. For mistakes i mean thing like spelling errors or a missing word. That's gotten better as well but wasn't as big an issue for me as the other two. Hope this helps! If you want i go back and look for examples.

It's kinda funny that you were inspired to write this cause of a fantasy, it's the same for the story i'm working on lol. Started with wanting to post one of my favorite and oldest fantasies then expanding it cause people wanted to hear more and what happens next lol. i like talking to you too and am really glad that i can help, it's what we subs live for! Think i'm gonna post what i have already written for my story here since i'm not active at all where it was before. That kinda scares me lol, putting it on a place this big. i should do it right now before i lose the nerve!

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-03 21:43:22 +0000 UTC]

E can be fun but seen about 30% have a bad trip and never do it again.

It can definitely get you depressed after due to the imbalance of endorphins afterwards which is why many to get hooked end up doing higher dosage each time.

And, people don't take into consideration that even 1 pill can give you a heart attack because of how fast your heart rate gets.

Or because messed up people make impure pills to make more profit.

It's not worth it and a lot of times, you can feel the effects of a good song without such drugs.

I've been to live concerts sober and feel chills or tingling sensations that's similar to what you get when on E and you don't feel like crap after.

The Electrostim is nice and I hate to say it but probably my favorite sex toy in my collection.

I don't want to say too much so I don't spoil the next chapter but it's interesting how much you can do depending on the accessories you have.

Best part is the hands free aspect of it so that you or your partner can do other things while stimulated.

WORST part is that it can physiologically mess you up, either more sensitized so can't orgasm as easily or can't pee as strongly so it takes longer to pee because it comes out weaker or "stop and go" majority of the time.

But, it seems like the body recovers if you don't use it for a long time.

Also, with GMO, arsenic in our food like produce and juices, extremely low frequencies, etc. who knows what direct and indirect side effects will be.

I'm glad to hear you're getting better with your bad experience.

Good support is usually the best place to start since I have some experience in psychology and counseling.

And thank you as well, life can be unpredictable but I don't put myself in a risky situation the way I used to when younger so I think the chances are slimmer for me now.

I definitely used vulva when I wanted to convey the outer part of Wonder Woman's sex.

I will admit that I was high on weed during my earlier chapters and need to do a rewrite on most of them since I recently rewrote chapters 2 and 3.

Thanks for the insight.

It's harder to edit your own work because you may not see the mistake as a mistake or your eyes may just read it like your mind is trying to portray.

I feel eager to post something when done but I end up reading it after it's posted then start editing more.

I've seen many silly mistakes like missing words, wrong tense, or misspelling.

Even chapter 20 I posted last night, I ended up editing it a few times and even added words like "VR" and "video" in front of "visor" to be more descriptive rather than just "visor" which can be just glasses.

No need to look for examples since I get what you mean but I will definitely revisit the parts when I used "vulva" because I think I may need to clarify if hard for readers to get the image or a better idea.

To me, vagina, vulva, and mons are all distinctively different areas of the body and try to use them that way.

But, I can get dyslexic sometimes and end up switching which also could be a possibility.

What can I say?

I also got bored with any fan fic that's out there or what people tend to write.

As mentioned, the next chapter is my ultimate fantasy even though many of the other chapters depict all the fantasies I love.

Which is probably why you see so much spanking scenes or spanking incorporated with other scenes as well as my favorite bondage positions.

It's the struggle of resisting to submit to or through the pain that forced upon Wonder Woman as you may have noticed past chapters and the setup for the next chapter.

It's literally a fight in my mind.

She may not be punching or kicking back but her resistance is how she puts up the fight.

Of course, the added twists which I'll show will make the fight even harder.

Then, to ultimately be defeated in such a humiliating and degrading way is a turn on.

And obviously, she will be a subservient slave and how she accepts her position and serves just continues the addition of all my fantasies.

And rather than just jumping through, adding the realism of details, insights, and actual real life psychological aspects is where I try to set myself apart from other writers.

That's why I try not to rush through the necessary parts that can be a bit boring for me but feel it's needed because of the logical or chronological steps to get to where I want to be.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-03 22:38:11 +0000 UTC]

The drop from E and the commonness of impurities or being spiked with other drugs has always made me shy away. Not to mention the worry of how it could mess with my already off-kilter neuro-chemistry and how it might interact with my meds.

Never heard about electro-play cause that kind of physiological effects before, well without going overboard anyways. Will have to keep that in mind when i give it a try.

I really liked how you used vulva instead of vagina to talk about the outer parts of the genitals. In that example it's when you said that her vagina was whipped after having used vulva before that threw me off. Something i've that helps with finding mistakes is to slowly read it out loud instead in my head. Reading the actual words out loud helps keep me from switching things around or filling in a blank. Something that i thought off after sending the last message is that you might want to change the quotations for speech, thought, and sounds. That confused me a bit at times, specially between speech and thoughts. The most common way i've see it done is the double quotations, ", for speech and the single, ', for thoughts. Having sounds in quotations also threw me off a bit because i wasn't always sure if it was the actual sound or was someone making the sound with their mouths to mess with her.

i really like how you add the "boring" little details, it fills in gaps and makes it more realistic thus drawing the reader deeper into the story and Wonder Woman's experience. I don't think i've actually seen someone that before for this kind of story, prolly part of what is making it so intense for me! The battle of wills is awesome and as a bratty sub that like to be forcibly put in my place at times is something i really identify with lol. One of my favorite things when i'm feeling playful is to poke and prod Daddy until he gets to the point that he chases me down, literally!, and spanks, whips, humiliates, and fucks me back into my place at his feet. To be so completely consumed by his dominance and power over me. Can't wait for the next chapter! =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-04 00:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Good for you and glad to hear I have nothing to worry about when it comes to drugs.

I used to be on Cymbalta for depression so I had to stay off street drugs myself.

Yeah, I never knew about those side effects from electro play either until I learned 1st hand how it affected me.

I guess some people are different but that's the dangers of pushing yourself to your limits.

Which is my biggest concern and guilt when writing my stories is that I use Wonder Woman as an example to do just that.

I usually pretend I'm Wonder Woman or other heroines with the "never surrender" mentality.

So, I end up pushing myself harder and even had partners that get worried they're hurting me when I'm asking for more or harder.

My point is, I have the "ElectraStim" brand and it's "Sensavox" level goes from 1-99.

In the beginning, I could only handle level 40-50 then it would hurt too much.

Now, every session ends at level 99, although some modes or patterns just hurt too much to even go over 70.

I guess that's why it has a limit to 99 since sometimes I'm wondering if I can find something more stronger but good thing it can't because it can probably damage your nerves.

Thanks for the example and I'll definitely recheck what I wrote and do a rewrite.

I always end up finding some kind of mistakes like you mentioned on the last note.

But, after so many written chapters, so hard to just remember where it is.

I know I used that during the "Stage 1 Routine" but I usually use the "find word" tool (Ctrl F) then go through the list.

Different quotations for speech or thought is a good idea but I usually say "thinks" or "thinks to herself" even when I use double quotations to try not to throw readers off.

Also, I've been saving single quotations for a quote within a quote but such a necessity never really came up or forget to use when I should.

I will definitely consider the change but problem with me is that I get OCD with format so if I change one thing then I have to go through every chapter and change anything in the past.

Good example is I used to write "superheroine" in one word then due to DeviantArt spell check, I started writing "super heroine" in two words from like chapter 14 on.

I decided one word is better since "superhero" is accepted as one word and just because superheroine is a female superhero shouldn't have different rules. >:E

So, I went back to every chapter to fix while I fixed my master copy of the story as well.

As for sounds within quotations, I try to stay consistent with a specific format but noticed some inconsistency when I used "cough" as speech or *cough* as sound.

I used to RP so I usually try to use the asterisk mark to use sound *SPANK SPANK*.

Although, I do end the quote for speech, then sound to distinguish the difference although I noticed I notice some inconsistent errors when I go back and end up fixing.

I apologize for any confusion when reading my stories as I try to establish a style or a rule then try to stick to them while still end up messing up from time to time.

I'm glad you like the "boring" details.

I may not have as much fun writing them but after I write them, I feel glad and even proud I went far enough to give readers a better picture or more insight to the dire situation.

I also want the readers to get inside of what Wonder Woman is thinking when she gets spanked to near submission then all of a sudden she's very resistant.

And I'm happy to hear a story like this is new to you because that was my motivation for writing this as realistic as possible.

I got so sick of a fan fic where I find something I kind of like but things move so unrealistically fast, like couple spanks then Wonder Woman is in pain, becomes submissive, or gets turned on by spanking.

One forced fucking and Wonder Woman turns into a slut and ready to suck his dick rather than try to bite it off. 

That's cute how bratty you can be and how you provoke your daddy.

That's why subs like you and me can't be punished with spanks, whips, humiliation, or a hard fuck.

Let's be honest with ourselves, such punishments for pain sluts are counter productive.

Such acts are rewards for us.

I know you won't tell your daddy this or maybe he already knows, but silent corner time should be your true punishment.

And, I know you'd totally hate it so end up behaving properly to avoid it. 

Not really a spoiler for next chapter since I left as a cliffhanger but perhaps a bit of a preview for you and you only.

I need to refresh on how to reference songs and artists for the next chapter.

I wrote some parts here and there.

And I took a lot of notes the last time I was on E so just need to transfer the rest onto story format.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-04 01:15:25 +0000 UTC]

i've seen drugs and alcohol destroy way to many lives and cause way too much pain to take them lightly. Even prescriptions. There was one anxiety/depression drug (can't remember which one) literally almost killed me on the first dose. So yeah, fuck drugs lol. Plus i don't need them to have a time to experience music the way you described at raves. It already does that!

i really don't think that there is anything for you to feel guilty about when it comes to your writing or the story. It's fantasy, it isn't real, and i think a majority of people understand that, can separate the two, and you aren't responsible for the actions of others IF someone actually goes out and tries any of this.

i definitely what you mean with the OCD thing and needing to go back make everything consistent. i've gone back and reworked things i don't know how many times in writings lol.

It bothers me too when people take the lazy path and the character instantly becomes a subby slut without any work to establish before hand. You build up to the moment by establishing mindsets and character traits and the like BEFOREHAND so it makes sense? Great! Don't establish or make them act out of character? Boo! i'm kinda torn on how i want the story to end lol. Part of me wants to see her become a slave and Catwoman once the training is over to be a very loving Mistress, and they all get to live happily ever after as a family. The other part wants to see her endure, overcome, escape, and get her revenge! Is definitely tapping into my own rage from the shit i've experienced irl. Might sound bad but this is actually a really important and positive thing for me. Cut myself off from it for far too long so having a healthy outlet for it feels weird but good lol.

Daddy DEFINITELY knows how to punish me lol! Tickling is absolute HELL for me >.< Threatening to tickle me is by FAR the most effective threat he could ever make when i'm being bad. But he knows how to tell the difference between and i'm being playful/mischievous because i'm happy and want to play and when i'm being disrespectful or something. He knows what to do to make me feel super subby versus what to do to actually modify my behavior from something he genuinely doesn't like.

After the last chapter i was hoping you were gonna incorporate music into it some how! *shy* If it's not too much trouble would you mind reading my story and letting me know what you think?

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-04 02:14:15 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree although I admit to being tempted from time to time.  >.>;

And seems opioids are becoming an epidemic including vaping nowadays.

That sucks on almost dying on the first dose of a drug that was supposed to help.

Yeah, I noticed I get that feeling from some music without drugs.

And as mentioned, live concerts can really pump you up and feel something within songs I couldn't feel before just from radio or at home.

Thank you for your supportive words!

Just to be short and simple, most of the guilt comes from a religious point of view.

I know, right?

I feel the same when trying to make things flow, spelling, and grammar.

Oh, even format on my entries.

If I have a disclaimer on the bottom then change it to the top, I have to go back to my older entries and fix that.

All the spacing between titles and indentations need to be the same as well.

Lol! It's interesting on how you feel torn about the way the story should end.

I kind of had the same struggle myself when I was brainstorming the layout of the story.

It's interesting on how we can get emotionally attached or how we emotionally relate to characters we love.

I can be very protective over my favorite characters and part of a sub's struggle is pride vs. submission or even pride vs. pleasure.

People don't really notice or point this out but it's so real.

I developed a spanking fetish long before my parents spanked or punished me and not once I got turned on when spanked by them, usually my mom, when I got in trouble.

It's like you get in a fight with a bitch and let's say she beats you up, well that won't feel good when outside the realm of fantasy like this.

This never happens but let's say the bitch kicks your ass then decides to spank you like many fantasies, then I wouldn't be turned on, rather more pissed thinking revenge.

Lastly, even if the bitch doesn't beat you up but brings her friend with the threat of jumping you, but gives you an option to get on your knees, grovel, and beg for punishment, then pride would get in the way unless you really get scared and do it but still wouldn't get turned on by any of these scenarios.

Sorry for over emphasizing but I learned in some cultures, they actually do this.

I know Chinese and Vietnamese cultures do this, haven't seen Korean or Japanese do this, but if a wife catches the woman that cheated with her husband, they will bring out all their friends and neighbors, strip the bitch down and kick her ass in the streets for all to see. They would make her beg on her knees for forgiveness or even whip her naked ass. Only thing that the cheater can do is just take the beating, try to protect the blows, or run away until the wife is satisfied.

Anyway, I gave it some deep thought and decided on an ending that I would be happy with.

Ugh, I want to tell you some details and how I came up to this decision but would be a spoiler.

The only thing I can say is that it still makes logical sense as to why it will end the way I decided to do and that I personally would do the same.

Tickling, huh? That's interesting and heard many times how it can be used as a discipline.

I'm not really that ticklish.

I am ticklish to a degree but I can concentrate so that my body adjusts to tolerate or endure it.

But glad to hear your daddy knows you well enough on reading your mood and what to do between playing and actual behavior modification.

Oh, I thought I was clear, I need to relearn how to reference songs and artists because I have specific music Wonder Woman will be forced to listen to.

Lol! That "ba, ba, bum, bum....ba, ba, ba, ba, bum, bum" is actually from a song but I just couldn't figure out the best words to make it sound like that intro.

So, I'll be referencing real songs and artists.

I will definitely read your story when I get the chance.

Probably later tonight.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-04 03:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah live concerts can be absolutely AMAZING! From what I understand the problem with vaping looks to be impurities in black market products.

Sorry about the religous guilt, took a long time to deprogram that crap after I left the church. I'm pagan now and am much happier now.

I discovered my kinky side pretty early too. The difference between a family member or stranger doing it and a trusted partner is really big. When I have to try and explain why BDSM isn't abuse I use similar examples. That is super fucked up what you talked about in China. Hearing stuff like that breaks my heart.

Thanks for no spoilers but would love to talk about it all once it's complete!

And yeah tickling is HORRIBLE. Especially since I'm extremely ticklish, there is no possible way for me to concentrate and stop it. That's part of why it's so horrible for me, it is a complete and absolute loss of all control no matter what I try to do. My body completely betrays me and I can't even breath of my own free will. If I had the power I would outlaw all tickling of every kind for every reason EVER. It would considered torture and war crime no matter what.

If you don't mind me asking, how do you identify and what pronouns do you prefer?

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-04 03:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes even videos or recordings of live performances can be effective.

Loudness is one thing but it's the energy of the crowd that can really boost the effects.

And, I'm sure a lot of black market impurities are part of the problem but I'm seeing reports of legitimate company brands are causing problems as well.

They are going to ban it eventually, New York already has.

I figured we'd be like the fox and the hound when it comes to religion.

I didn't want to say anything to upset you or anything.

All I'll say is that I'm not perfect and still a sinful person but I'll keep trying until I die and acknowledging my guilt is one way for me to deal with it.

Yeah, it is pretty messed up.

I saw a fight on the news where an employee fought a customer, then wanted to see more by going to youtube.

It wasn't enough so googled more fights then ended up on heavy-r seeing that beat down and was an interesting learning experience.

I'm so tempted to tell you everything that's going to happen. 

But, part of me writing this story is to entertain and get the readers' reactions after like from you.

Only a few actually make comments and usually vague, which is why I was so happy to see your reaction in details.

It definitely can be part of torture.

There are a lot of people with a ticklish fetish as well.

Few tips I can tell you is to try to endure the pain that initiates the tickling sensation like the pressure that's applied.

Tighten your body like you're flexing your muscles.

And hold your breath, this is probably the biggest key.

I am trying to keep my identity separate from here because my fetishes are still a big secret in real life.

Only thing my family and friends know is that I'm just a big Wonder Woman fan since I have Wonder Woman merchandises and wear Wonder Woman shirts.

I guess part of being on DeviantArt is to live out my fantasy and I actually identify myself as Wonder Woman to a degree while being true to my real self.

It may be awkward to some but you can call me Wonder Slave.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-04 05:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Wanna say first off that i'm sorry if i made you uncomfortable with my last question. i can definitely understand the fear and worry of being outed and needing a place where you feel safe to be yourself. i've really enjoyed talking to you and would like to know more about you but also don't want to cross any lines or make you uncomfortable. i'm not sure what to do so maybe you set the pace of what's ok by asking me first? i'm ok with you asking me pretty much anything.

Videos can definitely be effective! The live videos of "Greatest Show on Earth" by Nightwish and "Sober" by Tool are soooo much more amazing then the studio versions <3

i've heard a little about legal sources causing problems and some bans coming about. i don't understand why we don't treat tobacco the same way or are as concerned about it. So confused lol.

Your religion doesn't offend me. Doesn't matter if you are some kind of christian, jew, muslim, hindu, shinto, pagan, satanist, or believe in the flying spaghetti monster. What offends me is what people do to others, especially children, in it's name. If people made you feel bad about yourself and your sexuality when you are harming anyone? THAT and the people who did that to you offends me. Paganism is what happened to be the right path for me, i completely support that you follow whatever path is right for you!

i could never look up and watch videos like that, real life violence like that is extremely disturbing to me and would severely trigger my ptsd and anxiety.

Thanks for the tickling tips but they are completely useless for me. i can't tighten my muscles or hold my breath or anything. i have literally no conscious control over my body of any kind, it's like i'm having a laughing seizure. *shudder*

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-04 06:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for respecting my privacy.

I wasn't uncomfortable with the question.

I just don't wan to give out my real life identity and just felt like you were looking for a name to call me by.

If so, you can call me Wonder Slave, Wondy, Diana, or even Wondra.

Whatever you like is fine.

I just didn't want to make you feel awkward.

Yeah, live footage or even live recordings are great.

I was listening to live recordings from Lalapoolooza, forgot which artists but gave me chills.

Well, tobacco doesn't kill from smoking a bad quality version or one that was produced wrong.

It also doesn't kill in a matter of few years or months of smoking.

Many teens got ill or died have heart issues which makes people alarmed.

Tobacco kills but takes decades of smoking.

Also, they really don't know why people are dying or getting sick from vaping, yet.

They are speculating that there is a type of crystallization in the lungs but if they did know, they haven't released to the public.

They are working on banning it in California and Trump has announced he and his cabinet will try to ban it.

Lol, spaghetti monster.

Well, if you're not gonna be offended then I was going to say, 'Jesus still loves you no matter what.' 

Yeah, real life violence can be traumatizing and definitely not good for anyone with PTSD.

Once you see it, you really can't forget it and gets imprinted in your mind.

Some things are so horrifying that it replays in your head or your can't stop thinking about it.

Worst is when it gets associated with something like trigger, whether it be a word, song, etc.

People can get sensitized by it or even get addicted to the point that it's like watching a horror movie for them and those are usually red flags of a sociopath or a serial killer.

No worries on the tip.

Some people are more ticklish than others and I'm sure just the thought of being tickled will make you giggle.

And, I read your story so far.

All 4 chapters.

I liked it overall.

It definitely has potential, like a cross between "50 Shades of Gray" and "Twilight."

I'm already thinking how the story can go with so many twists and turns. 

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-04 07:04:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh! I'm sorry if I wasn't clear in that question. I wasn'tooking for your rl name or something like that. Was more curious about do you identify as being a woman, a man, both, neither, something else entirely and what the correct pronouns would be for you like she, he, they, or something else. That's what i was asking about. Tbh right now I'm just glad I didn't accidentally scare you away!

True tobacco doesnt tend to kill as fast as some of the vaping cases but it's still a massive public health hazard that that over time kills FAR more people. One of the things I've heard being a big problem in the recent cases is vitamin e oil which was present in the vapes used in like 75% of the cases I think it was. It enters the lungs as a vapor then turns back into a liquid in the lungs coating them in an oil that the body really struggles with.

I'm not in the least bit offended by that and take it in the positive light that it's offered! May the Goddess protect you and light your way =^.^=

It's interesting that you mention horror movies. When I was younger and in some of my darkest days I really LOVED horror movies and other super violent stuff (fiction not real) and often found it really funny. It was like a form of gallows humor, a cathartic way of letting out all the negative stuff building up inside. Now I don't like horror and graphic violence all that much.

The thought of tickling doesn't make me giggle, it makes me squirm and whimper lol.

Is there anything you think I need to work on or improve in my story? Any mistakes you noticed? I won't give any spoilers but what I think I'm gonna do next but am always open to ideas if you have any! =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-04 08:13:09 +0000 UTC]

No worries. Sounds like the misunderstanding is on my part.

I guess it's cuz I thought it was obvious.

I identify myself as a woman and pronoun would be she.

Lol, but they or something else I can't imagine.

Yeah, I heard something about that as well about the liquid in lungs.

But in comparison with tobacco, vaping hasn't been out long and still don't have anything for long term effects.

Already 1,080 lung illness cases and 19 deaths with an average age of 29.

No 29 year old died of tobacco lung cancer.

It's the age that really gets people, not the number of deaths.

Lol! That sounds like the beginning of a religious war.

I love horror films even to this day but horror films don't scare me anymore.

I even try to set the mood by watching alone in the dark sometimes.

They are a good way to release stress and a close analogy I can think of is that it's like a roller coaster ride.

I guess that's why people end up chasing snuff films if the horror movies doesn't release that stress.

Sometimes, I even see some weird crap when looking for a good Wonder Woman BDSM pic and see decapitation or cannibalism.

Ok, that sounds worse.

I thought you'd be so ticklish that the thought would make you laugh before actually tickled.

Besides grammar and spelling, there are some suggestions.

I took writing classes in college so I try to follow rules but I won't go into all that.

But I also realized writing style is subjective so no need to follow someone's style unless you're being graded on it. J/K

But after college I noticed some rules were just the professor's preference rather than law.

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Anyway, first recommendations is to use less "and" and replace the first with a comma. The same way you would list objects or adjectives, you can do with action.

Or if the 3rd thing is not the same then you could use "then" instead of "and."

Like if the 1st 2 things are objects and the 3rd is an action, then I would use "then" even though "and" could work.

Ex. The book is red, white, and blue.

He was fat, ugly, and mean.

She ran by the door, quickly said 'hi,' and ran off.

I grab my books, purse, then went to class.

Again, it's more about style and preference but I always use that but sometimes can end up with 'run ons' if over used.

I grab my books and purse and leave my dorm to go to my first class of the morning making a quick stop in the bathroom to pee.

I would write - I grab my books, purse, then leave my dorm to go to my first class in the morning, but I make a quick stop in the bathroom to pee.

There is one rule to follow which is to separate into paragraphs whenever a new character talks.

Although you didn't really break it except maybe once or twice since you narrated your words after Fairchild talked.

Once established who's talking, you don't even have to use "he said" or "she said"

EX.

     "Over my knees, pet!" She commanded.

     "Why, mistress?" I questioned.

     "Don't question me, slave!"

     "Yes, mistress!"

Unless you want to add details or descriptions which I usually end up doing but never get a chance to have back and forth dialogue.

But, you'll see these examples in any novels.

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Anyway, those are just couple things you could do to make things flow and don't want to do a long lesson on writing.

Otherwise, many are simple spelling errors like using "breath" instead of "breathe"

I can't hold my breath for too long.

I can't breathe.

Or displaced words where one word is just placed after the subject or before as an example.

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As far as the story goes, I liked it when you used analogies that came off poetically.

And for ideas, I was thinking couple directions.

1. Which I was kind of expecting or I would write after Morrigan and Kaitlin establishes their relationship, Kaitlin sees other girls or students with the same ruby tear drop chokers.

Then, Kaitlin feels jealous which opens so many doors and different options to take the story.

   1- Kaitlin can turn tables when Morrigan gets attached where Kaitlin gives an ultimatum between her or the other student slaves.

   2- Other student slaves get jealous of Kaitlin and shows her who the top pet is by dominating Kaitlin.

   3- Both 1 and 2 happens where Kaitlin doesn't like being in a polygamy relationship and gets jealous, but the other students try to tame or blackmail Kaitlin into being obedient slave, Morrigan finds out and becomes protective of Kaitlin.

2. After established, Kaitlin meets other vampires in Morrigan's clans and the others try to seduce Kaitlin away.

Then, Morrigan becomes the jealous one and many doors and options open (although this feels more like I'm copying Twilight).

 They compete for Kaitlin's servitude.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-04 08:49:23 +0000 UTC]

My first guess was that you were a woman as a queer transwoman I've learned just how important getting it right can be for someone and don't like to assume.

Yes! A religious war! Our weapons will be words of affirmation and acts of kindness! The winner will be whoever makes the other feel most loved!

I think there is more than going on than stress if someone is looking for real snuff films
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I've come across tons of extreme stuff too when looking for good BDSM stuff. Think the one that had me scratching my head the most was the unbirth stuff.

Tickling is EVILS! Thankfully it's really rare for me to ever mess up enough to deserve that. Most often it's a combo of pain I don't like combined with loss of privileges like getting to sit on furniture, sleep in Daddy's bed, no sweets, or having to eat out of a dog dish on the floor. Though really the worst punishment for me, even worse than tickling, is the knowledge that I disappointed and upset Daddy enough that he needed to actually punish me.

Tha is for the advice! I never particularly good at grammar and commas and all that lol. I'll definitely go back and try some of your suggestions and see how it feels!

Some interesting ideas! Some were similar to what I'm planning for the next chapter but not gonna say what. Ms. Fairchild isn't a vampire even though she likes to bite lol. I just love biting! It just feels so primal and intimate to me.

I never really about the story involving poly even though I am irl. Honestly a part of why I started writing it was explore my own feelings and experience of still loving someone and wanting them in your life after they so profoundly hurt you. Gonna play around with the idea and see if I like it before I write the next chapter. Thanks! =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-04 09:12:01 +0000 UTC]

No worries on guessing or assuming.

I'm just me and you're just you. 

I think there's a song that goes like that but can't remember.

Let's move on to an armistice, then.

Yeah, definitely a weird issue if you keep seeking but I've seen some just to satisfy my curiosity.

Those are cute ways to be punished but how sweet of you to feel disappointing daddy is the worst punishment of all.

Lol! Not a vampire?!? You picked the perfect name for a vampire.

That's cool if she's not a vampire and just likes to bite.

Primal and intimate is why people are attracted to vampirism.

I didn't want to psychoanalyze but I did notice a few things in there that seemed like it reflected yourself.

You're writing a self titled story.

You're writing in first person.

And some things feel like it's kind of similar to your real life experiences.

And the nightmare sequence seems to be the most reflective parts.

After Kaitlin feels so accepted after a night or 2 with Morrigan, how devastated she'd feel if she saw another girl with the same choker?

But, like the rape, she realizes she likes the other girl after getting to know her.  *shrugs* 

Have fun with the ideas! 

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-04 23:18:34 +0000 UTC]

*refuses the armistice and fires the first shot!* You are a very talented writer! =^.^=

i can understand being curious about something like a snuff film but could never even seriously look for one let alone watch. i would feel just way to horrible about it. i can't watch like war documentaries or true crime shows for the same reason. It just makes me feel so horrible.

*shrugs* What can i say? kitty wuvs her Daddeh! He means the world to her. It's why i wear his collar and one day will wear his brand <3

Morrigan is a great vampire name and i do think they are really hot. i've had plenty of fantasies about being the blood slave for a vampire <3

There is definitely a lot of myself in the story beyond my kinks and fantasies. It's in part an exploration of myself, my life, and nightmares are definitely a long standing problem for me.

You definitely raise a very real issue i hadn't thought about with Morrigan having more than one slave. Someone like her, willing to go to the lengths she did, would definitely have had other slaves. No way i would've been the first. Haven't figured out exactly how i'm going to handle that yet but is definitely needs to be addressed. i want to add some more internal conflict as well and have a few ideas about how to do that. =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-04 23:42:34 +0000 UTC]

That's not a religious shot.

Those compliments are always welcomed.

Yeah, I didn't meant to encourage you to see or anything.

Definitely avoid when you can because it does get imprinted in your mind.

Just talking about this makes me think of some images I've seen in the past.

Brand? Like get a branding?

That is sexy and I'm a bit jealous.

But, keep in mind that a branding is really painful, very permanent, and can turn out ugly if done wrong.

Tattooing would be the safer alternative but a branding does have more of a symbolic meaning to a slave.

Not persuading you either way but just something to think about before you actually do it.

I think the next generation will definitely have more vampire fetishists due to so many movies and shows about it.

I don't really like it but I think the moment a female character gets bitten is sexy as it's a moment of submission.

If you don't want Morrigan to have 2 slaves at the same time then the older slave could be out of the picture for various reasons.

The old slave retired or didn't want to be in the relationship anymore.

The old slave tragically died and Kaitlin happens to have a stunning resemblance of the old slave kind of like in Bram Stoker's Dracula.

Morrigan got bored or lost interest of the old slave.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-05 03:24:56 +0000 UTC]

I just finished rewriting chapter 1 and posted it!

Gotta remember that I said our religious war would be fought with positive words and acts!

Yep! An actual brand ranchers do to cattle <3 The reason we have done it yet is because we are trying to find someone in the body modification community that has experience and is willing to teach him to do it so it doesnt come out bad. We are also keeping it pretty simple too. It will be the same brand that is used on most slavegirls in the Chronicles of Gor books, the "keff". It's a kinds cursive K, the first letter of the gorean word for slave girl, "kajira". Once he's been properly taught how to do it and had some practice we'll do it =^.^=

Vampire fetishes will prolly get more common but I don't see that as a bad thing lol. I agree it is such a submissive thing to be fed on by your lover. I love it <3

I have two different ideas about how to handle the previous slaves thing and they are on opposite side of the spectrum lol.

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-05 03:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Good for you, I really need to write my next chapter or start rewriting my old chapters.

The kajira "kef" symbol is a good choice since it's not as personalized.

Well, it's not too hard to learn about branding but good choice to get lessons or an advice from a professional.

I wouldn't be surprised if some places have that "staff and fronds" branding iron already made.

That's one of the biggest key to a good branding is the branding iron.

Last thing you want to use is some flimsy make shift because you want the entire symbol pressed into your skin evenly.

Next important things are the right amount of heat, right amount of pressure, and the right amount of length of time.

I'm curious, since it's the kajira symbol, would you get in on the left thigh or somewhere else?

Vampire fetish is ok until you start drinking real blood.

There's too many risk for illnesses and diseases.

There are some documentaries about it.

Or at least a segment of a documentary series like "Taboo."

It can make your breath stink and stuff.

Many of them live in New Orleans and even get their teeth modified to have fangs.

That's when, in my opinion, is unhealthy as some permanent changes can be regretted later in life.

Kind of like a personalized tattoo or branding, so really need to be sure.

I guess the different possibilities are out there and it's also about what you want to set up for Kaitlin and what you want her to experience more than anything.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-05 04:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Plan on getting the brand in the middle of my left thigh with it being about 2"-3" inches high.

I remember that episode! Really loved that show and still watch it when it comes on. Blood play, including drinking, is ok as long as it's done safely and in moderation. Doing it with someone who is sick or too much is definitely problematic but I won't mind if my partner to do it a little. The tooth modification thing isn't actually permanent and can be undone pretty easily by pretty much any dentist so have fun with that one I say lol.

The thing about personalized, permanent mods is why we are doing the generic kef. Gives the perfect mix of him marking me but not having something specific to him that I can't get rid of.

I'm leaning towards the much darker version of the slave dilemma but am not there yet story wise. Would you mind checking out the updated chapter 1 pleases?

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-05 05:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, inner thigh will definitely hurt but easier to hide than the outer thigh.

I guess for me, I just can't really agree with all that.

There's just too much risk when it comes to drinking blood even if you try to do it safely or in moderation.

You are right about changing back the teeth but those people kind of choose that permanent lifestyle as well.

They basically change to the point it can't be hidden.

But, there are people who do live that lifestyle don't do it because of a fetish but rather a weird craving for blood, haematomania or Reinfeld's Syndrome.

They actually hide their lifestyle, don't dress like they're from Interview with a Vampire, and use scalpels rather than modified teeth.

I think if it's fetish driven, then just better to pretend or role play.

LOL, also, getting bit on the neck can tickle, nothing like a hicky. 

Atta girl on picking something generic.

So many celebrities or personal stories of people getting names for tattoo and it's like a curse as they all seem to separate.

I had a few friends who got tattoos of their boyfriend or girlfriend at the time and had to somehow erase or get a bigger and darker tattoo to cover it.

Sounds interesting on the direction you'll be taking it to.

My personal story would be that I'm the new slave, the old slave is still around, but after time, I fall in love with the old slave then our mistress tries to punish us or separate us which only drives us closer together and decide to run away from out mistress to find our own happiness. 

Hmm, thinking about that kind of made me sad.

And, sure, I'll read it later tonight since I neglected a lot of real life chores and duty the past couple days.

Although I'll always take a break to check for notices and send back replies.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-05 06:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, i didn't mean inner thigh. i meant half way down the middle-front of my left thigh.

i've seen some people irl that were really into the vampire sub-culture. Was never for me but they seemed to be very happy with their choice. Getting bitten on the neck can tickle some but can also hurt like hell if they bite hard enough lol.

That's definitely an interesting take on it! Not what i'm thinking tho

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-05 08:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh, ok. It is your choice where to put so be safe about it.

I actually did some reading on vampirism and too many myths made by movies and TV shows, too.

Too many vital arteries in the neck to be bitten there.

I even remember that documentary how they make incisions then suck like a hickey.

Usually on the wrist too.

Anyway, I don't really like vampirism to be honest and I find it gross.

So, really don't want to talk about this anymore.

I tried to read your chapter 1 but had to stop.

It seems to flow better but it also seems like your typing just couldn't keep up with the speed of your thoughts.

I read a few chapters and seems like there are more mistakes.

Like, "peeve" instead of "pee" and forgot to add "in the bathroom" so with "peeve" instead of "pee" made it confusing.

For instance, it says  "...left dorm room to go peeve for my first class...." Now the meaning changed like you went to get irritated for your first class.

2nd paragraph, add "my" or "the" to "back of neck"

Here, I'll correct it.

My attacker is pressing their forearm into the back of neck so hard that I can barely breath let alone call for help.

My attacker is pressing their forearm into the back of my neck so hard that I can barely breathe, let alone call for help.

---I added "e" to breath and comma to separate the 2 actions.

I swing my left elbow out behind me to try and hit my attacker and get free. <----- Nothing wrong with this grammatically but I would try to use different words to get rid of 1 "and" so it doesn't sound like you're listing things.

I swing my left elbow out behind me in an attempt to hit my attacker and try to get free.

They catch it and twist my arm painfully behind my back then slams my head into the wall again leaving me dazed and disoriented. <---- this is actually a run on so can separate into 2 sentences or add comma if you really want to keep it all in one sentence. Also, I would usually use the subject word before the pronoun as well so that the readers can follow easier.

They catch my arm and twist it painfully behind my back, then slams my head into the wall, leaving me dazed and disoriented again.

I see less mistakes here but I would try to reread for minor mistakes.

Like you said to me, try reading it out loud if it helps.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-05 19:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Sorry! Didn't know vampire stuff squiked you! No mores talks about it!

I'm officially blaming my phones autocorrect for all errors in the rewrite lol

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-05 20:05:12 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind it as a fantasy and can be quite alluring.

But, I just don't like it when real life people do it.

I guess part of it comes from being a bit of a germophobe.

And thank you for respecting my wishes, hun.

I just didn't want that conversation to drag on when we can talk about more fun stuff.

Lol! You know, that explains a lot.

Most of it is good but it seemed you created more mistakes while fixing the old ones.

I guess take your time and reread what you wrote so you can go over some of them.

I'll always be happy to help. 

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-05 20:22:44 +0000 UTC]

I definitely will and really appreciate the helps *hugs!* =^.^=

Do you like other comics besides Wonder Woman? Never got all that much into DC myself, X-Men was always my favorite! Especially Laura Kinney, she's my favorite character =^.^=

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-06 05:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I do.

A long list actually even though I can come off as only liking Wonder Woman at times.

I have a huge spandex fetish.

My second favorite fetish next to spanking.

So, pretty much any superheroines that wears shiny spandex and has a spankable butt are the ones I tend to like a lot.

I also love shimmery tights.

I have a few Wonder Woman costumes and a lot of star spangled shorts.

So, whenever I wore my Wonder Woman costume in public then I usually wear a new pair of shimmery tights.

But, I usually wear my star spangled shorts without shimmery tights like when at home or exercising.

I have a decent collection of leotards, too.

I hate anything matte finished so I will never buy or wear cotton base spandex shorts.

Psylocke is my 2nd favorite character of all time!

I used to like Rogue a lot and Jean Grey but their costumes changed too much over the years and don't like as much.

If I had to list right now, then I'd probably go...

1. Wonder Woman

2. Psylocke

3, Scarlett from G.I. Joe

4. Chun Li

5. Teela

6. Cheetara

7. Black Canary (love her fishnet tights)

8. Taki

9. Ms. Marvel (before she turned to Captain Marvel because her Warbird costume was similar to Psylocke's)

10. Catwoman (even though spankable, I look at her as a mistress)

As you can see, I don't like characters with capes or skirts since it covers their butts. 

I do like X-23 as well and think she can be really cute and sexy.

There is a nice bondage comic someone was doing and I thought Laura was really cute being tied up for the first time.

Those X-Girls can be so playful at times.

I used to love that living in a dorm together aspect of the X-Men and having a headmistress to watch over them.

So many possibilities.

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-06 08:32:23 +0000 UTC]

While I appreciate a tight, curve hugging suit as much as the next girl it's just not as important to me I guess lol. How much I like a character/how sexy they are tends to be based off of personality more than body/outfit. *shrug*
If I had to list my favorite comic women I think I would say my top 10 are:
1. Laura Kinney
2. Caitlin Fairchild
3. Gabby Kinney
4. Wonder Woman
5. Purgatori
6. Emma Frost
7. Magik
8. Catwoman
9. Poison Ivy
10. Kitty Pryde

Caitlin was my favorite for a LONG time until the properly introduced Laura. Caitlin was usually called "Kat" I'm the comics and I combined the two for my new name when I transitioned. She's also the inspiration for Ms. Fairchild in the story, like my vision of a dark version of her. Oh Gabny is a completely non-sexual pick, she is just SO adorable I can't help but love her! Costume wise I actually like ones with skirts! Is always such naughty fun trying to sneak a peak heehee. I always the dorm thing for the X-Men was great too! Like you said, so many possibilities heehee.

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WonderSlave In reply to razorwind0 [2019-10-06 14:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Of course, their personalities and also their actual looks have a huge factor into who I like as well.

Pretty much who they are and what they look like as a total package is how I favor one over the other.

I used to love Caitlin Fairchild and I actually noticed the 2 names before you mentioned it.

I thought it may have been a coincidence since your name starts with a K.

I actually liked Freefall more when Gen 13 came out, but over time, I got to like Caitlin more.

Rainmaker was OK, too. I liked her because she was like the 1st lesbian in comics.

Emma Frost, Catwoman, and Poison Ivy I like as well but I see them more as a dom or possible mistresses.

I was gonna mention Kitty Pryde in that cute and sexy category with Laura.

I think Magik is cool. I really like her big sword and her hairstyle.

There are so many characters to like for so many reasons.

The ones I like more tend to be ones that I can relate to as well since I usually think or pretend I'm that character in most of my fantasies.

Kind of like how I pretend to be Wonder Woman when spanked, whipped, bound, tortured, etc.

Or other characters down my long list.

Gabby is cute but that is a whole different category for me.

The cute characters tend to be ones I adore but can never pretend to be or be with in my sexual fantasies.

But I definitely have a list of many cute characters I really like, especially since anime tends to have so many available.

Skirts can be sexy and cute but I can't help have that sense of embarrassment that goes with the sexiness when I wear spandex shorts, leotards, star spangled panties, etc. that shows off my butt and in plain sight.

And to add to that flair, I usually buy my clothes a size or 2 smaller so that I can wear them with a wedgie.

Ha, just talking about it makes me blush while getting turned on. 

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razorwind0 In reply to WonderSlave [2019-10-07 08:17:23 +0000 UTC]

I never really connected with Roxy and didn't really for Sarah for a while either. Having an open lesbian in a mainstream comic was awesome but for so long she was just a two dimensional stereotype of both lesbians and native americans. When they flesh her out more towards the end I REALLY loved her. The end of the comics first run was so heart breaking! I hated that it had to end but that party was an amazing and perfect way to end it. Still tear up all these years later just thinking about it.

That Emma, Ivy, and Selena would make good Doms/Mistresses is definitely part of the appeal for me. Other subs can be fun and all but it's the Doms that I really wanna play with =^.^=

My therapist and I have used Laura and Gabby in visualization exercises that were really powerful. Laura is who i am now, scarred, hurt, and guarded. Gabby is who I want to be, innocent, happy, and open to life. She is so awesome <3

The way toy explain it I can definitely see the attraction to the briefs, ect but I'm not there yet. Not in public at least. That's something Daddy and I will have to work up to =^.^=

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