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Published: 2014-07-31 22:16:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 962; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Its Friday, so that means more TBaTP pages woo. This is based of a fanfic I did back in August 2013. it will be done in manga styled (so right to left) and will update every Friday (AEST).there is alot of blank backgrounds because well I cant draw them well but i'm trying
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Comments: 4
kessy-athena [2014-08-26 00:32:11 +0000 UTC]
I like your premise - I always thought it was so sad how Mai passed it off as a joke when Yukko didn't immediately give a positive response to her confession in that one episode.
You asked to have typos pointed out, right? There are several on this page. Panel 2 should be, "Mai-chan isn't usually like that." Panel 3, "Well, she does play those jokes, but they're never usually like this." Panel 4 needs an apostrophe and a question mark, panel 5, "I've got to stop worrying about this."
(Teasing) And math doesn't have an S! Silly British persons.
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00Stevo In reply to kessy-athena [2014-08-26 05:02:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah thanks for the feedback back, and I'll fix those errors quickly. And I'm not British...close though
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kessy-athena In reply to 00Stevo [2014-08-26 20:05:04 +0000 UTC]
Oops, an Australian. Well I guess that makes you a silly... errr British... Commonwealth person. Yeah, that works!
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