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Published: 2017-12-29 09:46:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 3289; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 18
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Let me know if you guys want me to upload more "Scrapped art" I also wanna know if you want me to finish this character. I feel like she is kind of bland and uninspired. maybe give me suggestions on what you think I should do with this character to make her more interesting?Related content
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I feel like there's potential to bringing this character back, maybe as a foil for Felicity or even an allyΒ
Really digging the hairstyle and the face but I think her outfit could be a little more unique, though I love the color. If she's a wrestler you might try google imaging wwe divas to get some outfit ideas.Β
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It looks good man! Even for a blond haired gal she has the facial expression of a girl who had a tattoo of things she does to people. Like maybe on her butt, it would say like "Your face here" Or on one of her boobsΒ it would say "Look Don't touch." Also maybe like giving her a unique hairstyle to really give her an iconic piece of her, something that when fans or future people to be squashed can say like "Oh no, I know that ass and hair anywhere." Just my thoughts though! Overall it looks great!
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Have her holding a bike pump and some times she shows off her Inflation skills ! Getting extra big for a show !
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It's already well started, so you might as well finish it!
Without any information about your character or her background given, I don't really know what to suggest you to make her more interesting ; it'd already be a start if you started working on her bio and personality. For now, you should just follow your intuition and write what you have in mind for her, even if you think she lacks originality. Afterwards, you'll take a step back, ask for suggestions again and then start reworking her. That's what I'd recommend!
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Hmm. To make her more interesting you could try a different hairstyle, like a bun maybe. Or maybe a more unique outfit besides just a plain pink bikini. Just giving my two-cents
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