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Nirelleth [2010-08-25 21:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Part of the critiques for #PortraitClub .

You look really beautiful in the dress and the overall styling is very nice and fitting. I would definitely improve the crop, right now both elbows are cut off which isn't really good for the composition. Maybe placing the camera further off would have helped. Positioning yourself on a 2/3 line of the photo with some negative space could have also made for a great composition.

I would also change the pose, while the hands stemmed in the sides fits the mood of the image somehow your shoulders are lifted which creates a bit of an awkward pose. Also there seems to be a kind of tilt of the head towards the camera which makes everything a bit out of proportion.

I hope this helps.

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orsnai [2010-08-02 16:40:59 +0000 UTC]

This artwork was featured here [link] for being part of #Self-Portraiture gallery, don't forget to the article. Thank you for the wonderful contribution!

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