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Dusk's reaction to Slendy is basically the same as mine XD
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You don't want to. Β as princess of the night, I have to spend hours chasing him away from everypony's dreams! Β He can be so annoying!
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Lol then, perhaps I can help, keeping him away.
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Umm...i'm kinda curious what the text in your icon says xDD
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It's "I hope Joey Senpai notices me..." from TPP. I'm a fan of it. XP
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Oh, i see. It's pretty popular, but i didn't saw it yet :3
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They're playing Emerald right now with May. It's pure chaos. They just released their starter, Torchic.Β Β
Β Why?
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Ouu ;_; Poor Torchic
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I know right?
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This comic is the best thing that has happened to me in a long time xD
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TENTACLE MAAANE!!(ejem...ejemtaiejem)
MWAHAHAHAHAA!!
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this reminds me of Conner Cogsworth's (that is how you spell his name right? sorry lol) idea of where Dusk Shine and Twilight Sparkle trade places for a day, and Solaris would develop a crush on Twilight, while Celestia would develop a crush on Dusk Shine XD
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conspiration? That's uh... I don't think you're using it right. Conspiracy has an inate negative connotation- conspiration does not. There's a reason we use the phrase 'conspiracy theorist'. Conspiracy implies sinister intentions, conspiration is described as "A joint effort directed toward a goal."
never mind that subtle differences change the meaning regardless of that- I THINK(not sure, it's subtle) that 'conspiraction nut' means someone who is obsessed with working with others towards a goal. So... yes.
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They both have negative connotations, as conspiration is defined as taking part in a conspiracy. In this context it should probably be "conspiracy freak." I think I might change that.
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The definition I found was "A joint effort directed toward a goal," as I said.
Also, the freak should be changed. Theorist or nut make more sense. Just an opinion.
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Came here to comment and say the same thing.Β
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"Big bro" ? "Get a life" ? My, my, my, does the Relationship between you and the others change that much when you get another gender ? I hope not.
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I misread "conspiration" as "constipation".
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Love this already. i love how you made it into a manga
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I like how you portrayed him as being overly-interested in conspiracy theories! Thats probably exactly what Twilight would be like as a guy haha.
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Slenderpony~ :3
He hides in the Everfree Forest! ^^
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Shouldn't that be conspiracy freak rather than conspiration freak? Or is that only what they want you to think? O_o
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"I was only had 8 at the time,"
only had 8... are you sure that is how it should be?
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Just remember to dubbel check your spelling grammers before you submit it next time but other then that good job on the comic.
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Spelling errors be damned! (You'll get better). I am loving the style here! Dusk shine is sooooooo cute!
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Dont you Mean she just wants to get rid of me.
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There's too many grammer mistakes here. Which is the misspelling of the words Nemesis mentioned and you kind of miss your chance to add "was" in "I was only 8 at the time, now I'm 17,..."
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Good thing I was abel to save this page I could just edit this page and correct the spelling.
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