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AmethystBlade [2017-02-26 01:34:49 +0000 UTC]
Next:Ā www.deviantart.com/art/Lesson-ā¦
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qeveren [2017-01-13 04:33:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad to see this has updated.Ā Poor Dusk. Ā
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Boltpen [2017-01-10 06:17:47 +0000 UTC]
Me too. I understand that these kind of things take time but..... YOUR ART IS TO DAMN GOOD TO WAIT FOR!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE DON'T STARVE US=ME TO DEAAAAAATTTTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ZMasterskull [2016-12-24 02:21:27 +0000 UTC]
so...no next link?Ā You know its kind of a bad system if a USER has to post it instead o the actual deviant who uploaded this
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DanvilleBengal [2016-12-20 22:48:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm being an asshole and a supporter of Fluttershy, but part of me wished that the manticore actuall killed Rarity.
Then of course, the manticore would probably killed the others as well, and then there wouldn't be any story going forward.
...obviously, I have a pretty icy issue with Rarity at the moment--I Despise obvious GoldDiggers, which Rarity really is showing up to be one at first glance--she's got to redeem herself in my eyes as far at this story unfolds...
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ZMasterskull In reply to DanvilleBengal [2016-12-21 02:40:00 +0000 UTC]
Yea i dont like how she is portrayed in this comic either.Ā Content like this where the creator doesnt see how they are ACTUALLY portrayed bothers me
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JM001kkkk In reply to ZMasterskull [2022-01-07 21:27:08 +0000 UTC]
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Boltpen In reply to ZMasterskull [2017-01-10 06:13:56 +0000 UTC]
IT'S MADE TO BE READ LIKE A MANGA THINGY!!! OF COURSE THERE IS GONNA BE A LITTLE BIT BITCHYNESS!!!!
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BlazingSolstice [2016-12-01 22:26:22 +0000 UTC]
I am so glad your still working on this
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Cowtardation [2016-11-30 05:32:59 +0000 UTC]
Wait wait wait is this comic sharing the same contentnewity as the human version cause I kinda got confused with the "Lesson" and "Letter" stuff
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0RyomaMikado0 In reply to Cowtardation [2016-11-30 05:40:02 +0000 UTC]
The pony version tells the beginning of the story and the human version tells the climax of the saga
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Boltpen In reply to 0RyomaMikado0 [2017-01-10 06:14:24 +0000 UTC]
What's the human version? Link for it?
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saintguardian [2016-11-22 04:48:29 +0000 UTC]
4 pages in a month.Ā It's my birthday gift, I just know it!Ā Thank you very much for posting this and doing such great work in a short amount of time.Ā I do hope to read more of your comic as I do enjoy the style.
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Wakeangel2001 [2016-11-19 19:07:03 +0000 UTC]
I remember the Manticore attack from the first episode, the funny thing was that Rarity was actually the first one to attack it, kicking it in the face.Ā It was kinda funny that Rarity of all the mane six would be the one to draw "first blood."
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Henshidoku [2016-11-19 07:32:52 +0000 UTC]
looks like somepony is working so goddang hard on her comic xD
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Moongaze14 [2016-11-18 15:55:27 +0000 UTC]
Excellent design for the manticore. Kinda like the way Rarity and AJ are positioned there, looks like a rescue romance, lol.
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foldabotZ In reply to Moongaze14 [2016-11-24 06:31:35 +0000 UTC]
Since this is going to the harem route, the girls have get "comfortable"Ā Ā Ā with each other if they're gonna share Dusk.
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IJoinedForPonies [2016-11-18 10:05:12 +0000 UTC]
You might want to fix AJ's cutie mark on the largest panel, it's a bit out of position from where the tail is.
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tyto4tme4l In reply to IJoinedForPonies [2016-11-18 10:08:07 +0000 UTC]
Actually, I think the tail is out of position.
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cartoonsbest [2016-11-18 08:42:45 +0000 UTC]
A double page, good.
IĀ also like the AJ and Rarity pose in the first panel.
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iminari [2016-11-18 08:06:08 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE THIS COMIC. I love that you gave him pincers on his chin.
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digitalkon [2016-11-18 02:03:31 +0000 UTC]
Aqui esta, la prueba de Nightmare Moon de la bondad. Muy hardcore y con yeguas celosas de lengua filosa.Ā
Nice
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GogglesPizano [2016-11-18 01:37:01 +0000 UTC]
And this is why Applejack is awesome and best pony. Yeah I said it. XD
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AlphamonOuryuuken [2016-11-18 01:27:39 +0000 UTC]
Rarity better be counting her lucky stars that AJ wasn't spiteful enough to let her get hit. She owes her a DAMN big apology after this!
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VossZero [2016-11-18 01:13:24 +0000 UTC]
So Applejack tackled Rarity to save her from the Manticore? Or is there a page missing?
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dres870 In reply to VossZero [2016-11-18 01:22:52 +0000 UTC]
Yes last page she did that.
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