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Published: 2010-05-03 23:55:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 286; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Can love be so cruel?I can think of a thousand times i cried because of it.
why then....do we need it to be happy?
it`s funny how you learn how to breathe with it,
and also, how you can`t breathe without it.
Then, there`s the pain, why should we suffer it?
why do we have to say "yes" to love if it says "no" to us?
Do we then have to wait until we get the "yes"?
Love, please tell me what i`ve done wrong to make you stay with me.
I`ve been waiting for pain to wash you away.It Can`t.
Then, Show me why you are the best feeling.
I want to swim in happiness.
Teach me how to stand still.
Teach me how to breathe.
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I love the line "I want to swim in happiness" because not only is that how people describe it, but it's how it actually feels.
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thanks! i´m really glad you liked it
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"Teach me how to stand still.
Teach me how to breathe."
Beautiful. This part added at the end gives it a feeling of hope, inner strength through the confusion and pain.
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thanks, that´s what i wanted to give to this writing, i mean, after all, you still have some hope when you love someone, glad you liked it
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Wow..... this is so deep.... makes u think a lot.... :]
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thanks! i didn´t think this was good haha, i´m glad you liked it
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well it is :] and ur welcome
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