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1MidnightRiver1 — [G] Hysh's encounter with the Guardian Spirit

Published: 2017-04-25 02:54:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 333; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description Gift for mah frand MLPFrost Sorry I know its just a sloppy sketch ;-;
Also, her and Spirit do look a bit similar but I don't think its too similar, you can change her if you think she looks too similar but thats up to you ^^
Hope you like it!


The young filly ran through the forest at her fastest gate. Tears rolling down her cheeks and choking on air she ran on. She had had it with the other foals, making fun of her for looking similar to Spirit. Suddenly she realized that she had reached the forest's edge. She stopped and gazed over the meadow. She knew she wasn't supposed to be out this far but she didn't care. Suddenly she felt a soft cool breeze and noticed the trees start to wave in the wind. She stared in awe as she heard multiple soft whispers run inbetween the tree branches. Suddenly a quick black shadow ran between the trees. Weaving and twisting and turning through the trees, the character quickly approached Hysh. Frozen in fear, she couldn't move. She closed her eyes as she heard the hoof steps grow closer. Suddenly she felt the cold breathe of the pony. Opening her eyes she saw the glowing galaxy eyes of the Guardian Spirit. She stood in fear and awe. She had never been so close to her after.......the incident. The large mare stood over her, breathing with such calmness.
    "Why is thou filly so far from thy herd?" The Spirit spoke in a formal voice.
    "I....I" Hysh choked up as the mare stood patiently. "I was bullied....." She spat out. "For looking like you,"
    Ever since the incident, Spirit hasn't been able to comprehend feelings, she was there to protect ponies, so she never really needed feelings.
    "Bullied......for looking like.....me?" She stood in disbelief.
    They stood in silence for several moments. Listening to the soft birds chirping and the rustle of the tree branches.
    "Come," The Spirit spoke. She began towards the village. Hysh, obeying, followed her.
    When they approached the village, the foals saw Spirit and Hysh. They stared in horror. Spirit stood still, eyes still glowing, mane and tail flowing gently in the wind. She looked at Hysh and nudged her forward, towards the other foals.
    "Hah! She might as well be your mother!" One of the foals chuckled.
    Suddenly Spirit ran towards the foal, and stopped right in front of him. The colt stood frozen in fear. Spirit suddenly opened her mouth, show casing her large fangs, as she suddenly let out a breathe. Her breathe was white as mist and had small stars and crosses in it. Closing her mouth she growled and spit out black tar on the colt. Turning around Spirit looked at Hysh in the eyes, and showed a small, fang filled, smile. Then she vanished into the dark and dense forest.
    Hysh couldn't believe what had just happened, she just had the Guardian Spirit stand up for her! She knew that the other foals would avoid her now, but she felt as if she might make a new friend.
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Comments: 4

CrowNym [2017-04-25 08:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh I love this so much! This was a great thing to wake up to! I never even thought of the idea of her being bullied by the other foals for looking similar to Spirit. Now that you bring this up, I think I can keep her like this. This is amazing!

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1MidnightRiver1 In reply to CrowNym [2017-04-25 21:44:56 +0000 UTC]

I am so glad you like it ^^ but is it maybe alright if you give her a bit more purple or something ^^'

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CrowNym In reply to 1MidnightRiver1 [2017-04-25 21:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah of course~! Maybe it'll give her a bit more purple-ish tint in her pelt color?

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1MidnightRiver1 In reply to CrowNym [2017-04-26 01:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Sounds awesome ;w;

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