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ThetaOfQuicksandFun [2012-06-20 14:17:11 +0000 UTC]

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It seems like a more of less nice place but the suttle outline and textures seem somewhat fake, even for an artificial rendering. The way the building in the backgroude rises is not abrupt enough and needs to create a more vertical bulk to it. The layering and visual potentual to change is enough to make a powerful scene that actually works together. The color contrast is more than adequet to give a placement for all the composite objects in this deviation. I can't say much more but you could widen the image to where it gives a sense of place like increased background trees, overall interesting frame of scenery.

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relhom [2012-06-20 14:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Nice touch..

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