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Jenny: is about to go running
Grandma: I going to have to stop you right there
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Jenny, so weak-willed. I continue to look forward to everything you've set up, excited about the pay offs. Hoping Kate starts to see some nice gains now that she's backing off her pills but has picked up a moderately healthy appetite.
One complaint. The current weight for Jenny is a sort of disproportionate to some of your descriptions you've used. I know she's eating a lot, but I doubt her belly would be filling her lap and out to knees some times. She also probably wouldn't have any problems in the shower or things like that. Just sort of takes me out of the story, but it could just be creative expression, in which case is ok.
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That's a very fair complaint and I'm kinda surprised no one came with it sooner, because I'm well aware of this and it's probably my biggest regret writing wise. I'm not really sure how to explain it though, so bear with me...
It's definitely caused by my uncontrollable tendency to take things way too far. I did it already in the very first part and since I always felt like I have to push the already set boundaries to keep it interesting for readers. At the same time I wanted to keep the weight gain, although being extremely fast, still kinda close to realistic. This of course is in a sharp contrast and the only way how I could keep it going was to make Jenny's belly swell from overindulgence way more than it would be appropriate and then let it go back to "normal" after she digests her meals... I know it doesn't really make any sense. My writing is a mess, alright? Deal with it
Apart from that, I'm glad you're still not totally hating it
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That's totally understandable. Trying to get that alluring factor without pushing the story to far forward too fast. I struggle with the same thing. I'm too quick to jump into the exciting stuff, rather than spend time on the world building.
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merry belated christmas
I feel like there is some seriousΒ expansion coming soon, no?
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Merry belated christmas to you too
I can't really say what to expect next, because even though I usually have a certain plan in my mind what should happen, when I start to write it down it always changes considerably.
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Great instalment - getting interesting now. It's making me start to wonder many things which is always a good sign, like how big will Jenny get? What will the side effects do? Will Kate be affected by any? Will Kate also get fat?
I can't wait to find out! Keep up the awesome writing : )
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Thanks for a kind comment. I think I can promise you, that the next instalment will be sooner than in 3 months. 
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Awesome! I look forward to it : )
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