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I did an art!! ☺This is a new character, so I haven't come up with a name yet for her. I just know rn that she is going to be related as a sibling to a character (either Rose or Forte) so more info on that later. I would ask for a critique, but I'm not core, so CRITIQUE MEEEEE in the comments. I tried a new thing for the hair (smudge it all
) This took about 2 days to make, since I'm kinda going places all the time. If you have questions about anything, ask below!!
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Thank you! She just might be my favorite of all my people. ❤😊
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Lol we all have a favorite oc XD
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I love the new texture you tried on the hair!!~ ;0; The lighting is so soft and makes all the colors go so nicely together~ >u<
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Thankyu!! I like the new texture, too 😊❤
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I hope you won't forget how you did it! That tends to happen to me when I try new things, oopsies... x//D
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Hmm, yep that's happened before, I despise it. 😒
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I found what helps is doing the process over and over again! Whether it's on the same drawing or doodling it more than once, that could help!~ O:
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You're so very welcome!!~ ># u #<
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Cute!
I especially like the little lines over her blush.
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Hi !! this is a comment from
There is a lot of detail in the drawing, I LOVe IT !! In your description it says this took 2 days but i totally understand drawings take a lot of time and we have stuff to doooooooooooo ! The background is very simple and that helps make the character pop. The lighting and her smile makes me imagine she is in a school picture day lol. You also said that you tried a new technique for coloring in the hair, I'm guessing that you used a smudge brush to move the lighter brown color around and make it look like a shine in the hair. It looks good but I feel like it should be blended out more, also the shine of the hair is not matched with the light source. Here is a link to help you with shading in hair : laurahollingsworth.deviantart.… if you don't have the drawing program mentioned then try to do this method to the fullest extent.
Now into the light source, the light source is in the top left corner and it looks like you airbrushed it in and turned to opacity down. I don't think this looks very good, it is basically fogging up the drawing. You can search up different tutorials to help with this
The line art is a bit sloppy but its not very noticeable, maybe turn the correction up so that if you have shaky hand movements then it will fix that.
One thing I wanted to point out is that there is no detail in the eyes, you can add highlights to them and make the while drawing come together.
Overall this is a really cute drawing and I hope that this critique helps you improve (i also hope I didn't sound too harsh) KEEP ON IMPROVING !!!!!!!
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Thanks sm! I hadn't noticed most of the details you pointed out, but I do know I have shaky lineart, so correction will definitely work for me. I appreciate your thoughtful response and will work from it. 😊
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This is beautiful! The shading you did was already nice and the art is stunning! Keep up the good work!
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its a nice design, and other than what LeGreatCatzy said about the hair, the only problem would be the shading. it seems to me that your light source is unbalanced, and to add light what you did was use a low opacity white brush or blending tool (especially in the top left corner).
to remedy this, i would recommend varying the colors and working on the layers that the actual hair or skin is on so that it gives depth and definition.
i do think that the smudged hair looks nice, so the only 'problem' would be the lighting.
best wishes,
drx-b
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It's really nice, other than that the hair looks a bit weird even though you used a new technique, and the line art isn't the cleanest, but otherwise great drawing! uwu
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