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Nearly all of us, if not every single one of us, have come across a deviation that just has a disappointing '...'. Conversely, some of us have even come across a massive wall of text.
Whether we are the people who ask ourselves, "Is that it?", or whether we are the people who ask ourselves, "What can I say?", this guide will hopefully provide you with some insight in how to go about writing a good description for your deviations, a.k.a. your Artist's (or Author's) Comments.
IIIXII has already written a beautiful guide here . He mentions a great point and that is that your artists comments are the only thing that might motivate a reader or viewer to comment your work
How many of us want constructive comments, critiques and, most importantly, feedback on our pieces?
Thus, is it only fair that if we want something back, we have to give something as well?
Background Inspiration. Did you seek inspiration from something? Were you inspired by a place or a person? If yes, let us know about it! There is no shame in telling us what you were inspired by, whether it is your next-door neighbour's dog or the clouds!
Feelings and thoughts. Do you remember what you were feeling when you were creating your piece? Was it happiness, anger, sadness, frustration, or something else? Can you remember a thought that kept going on and on in your mind when you were creating your piece?
Creation. Describe and explain the process it took you to create your piece. Did you use many tools? How long did you take? Was there a particular bit that you had to do over and over again?
Feedback
If you want specific feedback, ask a question. Even if nobody comments on your pieces, ask it anyway, because some random person may just happen across your piece, see that you are an artist wanting to improve and help you along your way.
Encourage people to comment. Things such as "I'd like to know what you think" or "Comments are much appreciated" can create a great effect. If you invite someone and give them a nudge in the right direction, some people will seize it.
It also illustrates how open you are to other people’s interpretations and opinions as well, which will increase their want to comment, as they will feel their thoughts will be taken into account.
Additionally, there is no harm in analysing our own pieces too, as long as it is constructive. A few sentences explaining what you dislike and like about the piece, what you had most and least trouble with can lead to…
Relate
…How we relate to the piece itself! (As it is a two way relationship) Not only can we explain how the piece relates to us on a more personal and emotional level, but it will help other people relate to you as well, thus, securing a connection between artist and … well, artist, really. We are all artists here, aren't we?
If one artist is provided with an opportunity to relate to another artist, it can bring on a friendship where both artists can support one another.
Length
Don't keep the Artist's Comments too short, but don't write masses and masses as well! Too short, and we are left disappointed. Too long, and we are easily overwhelmed. You don't have to describe and explain everything, but a little bit helps in helping us relate to the artist.
The key is to write something that let's your own individual feelings and personality shine through while still leaving some interpretations of the piece to the viewer. ~ amaira515
If you get carried away and you can’t cut down once you go back and read it over, try and separate your comment with paragraphs and spaces.
Language
Language might be a barrier for many of us, but that doesn't mean we can get away with just putting "..." on our pieces. Even if it is a sentence or two, it is better than nothing!
Nevertheless, if nobody can understand what you are saying, then it is basically the same as putting "...". If English is not your main language and you have a few errors in grammer and spelling, that is fine! Text speak, however, is a no-no.
Links
If your piece is one of a series, feel free to link to other pieces within the series, too. If a person likes what they see, the quick access will mean less trouble for them. However, make sure that the artist’s comments isn't filled entirely with links.
There is also a brilliant Group on deviantART dedicated to increasing artist's exposure through the use of a "Linking" system:
"Link another artists submission in your artist's comments box. It helps everyone's exposure and finds undiscovered art." ~ dALinkSystem
Protection
Many people have deviations that have a massive paragraph full of text to try and protect their work.
However, there's no easy way to say this: this is the internet. If you don’t want anything stolen, don’t put it up here.
IIIXII’s guide explains what you can do to the Artist’s Comments in terms of protecting one’s own work, so there is no need to repeat it here.
Nevertheless, do not just fill your artist’s comments with information about copyright and the use of your piece (unless it is stock). If anything, look at it like a scale. Three quarters of your artist’s comments should be about the piece itself (if not all), and the other quarter should include the information that, theoretically, protects one’s own art work, if you utterly insist for it to be there.
Nobody wants to look at a mountain of information if they just wanted to look and comment on your art in the first place.
Final Note
Hopefully, you know a bit more about what to put in your Artist’s Comments. Even though they appear to be small, they can actually mean and express a lot.
This guide is by no means complete and it does not apply to everyone. It was written by ProjectComment as a Group, by deviants, for deviants.
I would like to thank the following who contributed: amaira515, Iluvocnj2006, xblackxbloodxcellx and Scarlesaur. Their efforts in the making of this guide are much appreciated, and they deserve to be recognised.
Feel free to ProjectComment for more guides! A couple that will soon be posted: 'A Guide on (Offending) Comments', 'How NOT to Comment', 'Why Comment in the First Place?' and more!
Thank you for reading.
3wyl , posting on behalf of ProjectComment
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Comments: 106
Shirei-Shou In reply to ??? [2010-03-21 10:34:30 +0000 UTC]
My fault often to write too long artist comment
thats why I separated it now into some part. So people can choose they want to see "About art", "Concept" or only want to know "the tools" lol
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3wyl In reply to Shirei-Shou [2010-03-21 14:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Indeed!
That's quite a good way.
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hoatzins In reply to ??? [2010-03-20 20:06:33 +0000 UTC]
Straightforward and very helpful. Thanks for posting.
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heysawbones In reply to ??? [2010-03-20 18:38:39 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha, it is hilarious that someone needed this guide!
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andrah In reply to ??? [2010-03-20 15:06:05 +0000 UTC]
this article was very helpful for me. I sometimes have difficulties in writing an artist's comment, too. thanks a lot!
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Jeysie [2010-03-20 07:37:22 +0000 UTC]
Amen to this. I hate it when I see a great bit of art and want to know why the artist was inspired to create it, or how they got the idea, or where & how a picture was taken, etc. and all you get is "..." -_-
Although I'm guilty of giant Comment Essays sometimes. >_> I like to explain my full thought process on my works... or, since I like a lot of obscure things, explain what the heck I'm drawing/writing about.
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RetroOutro In reply to Jeysie [2010-04-13 12:03:57 +0000 UTC]
There are some of us who really like reading the longer comments when we have time, though it means we might not look at it the first time it's in our inbox, we don't just delete it either.
I think it gets kind of annoying only when people explain their characters whole story under the picture thoughm, instead of the work process. I have one friend who I love to death who does this on every sketch, and I'm like 'just write the damn novel already wommin.'
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Jeysie In reply to RetroOutro [2010-04-14 13:09:49 +0000 UTC]
Heh! I'm guilty of that last one too, sometimes, at least in the sense of giving a character's bio... probably because I tend to find how I got an idea more interesting than how I drew said idea (probably comes from being more of a writer than an artist...)
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3wyl In reply to Jeysie [2010-03-21 14:38:56 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...
I think it might just be finding a balance to everything. Write about the essentials, but leave enough open to the interpretation of others so that they can ask questions as well.
Understandable.
I post a few abstract things as well, but... I like to ask a question and not impact anybody else's thoughts and interpretations of the piece, so I don't say anything about it.
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Jeysie In reply to 3wyl [2010-03-21 14:57:08 +0000 UTC]
Not abstract (my creativity doesn't lend itself to abstract things)--obscure. As in, I tend to like things/characters nobody else has heard of.
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3wyl In reply to Jeysie [2010-03-21 15:03:52 +0000 UTC]
I understood what you said, I'm just trying to relate myself, as I do abstract and not obscure, although both are somewhat on the same plane... depending on how you see things.
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Jeysie In reply to 3wyl [2010-03-21 15:08:59 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Well, I can see not explaining if it's something abstract, as you'd want someone to interpret it themselves. Obscurity is just a lack of knowledge, though.
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Jeysie In reply to 3wyl [2010-03-21 15:30:00 +0000 UTC]
Plus I usually want to pimp the obscure thing I'm excited about.
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TheFulkrum In reply to ??? [2010-03-20 02:50:14 +0000 UTC]
Comments and artist comments are very often overlooked and their importance under-rated, so this is a good piece here.
One excellent suggestion:
"If you want specific feedback, ask a question"
I'm going to try that. Simple enough.
Thank you for this.
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raspil [2010-03-20 00:46:46 +0000 UTC]
This is a very important article.
The first thing I check for when looking at a deviation is the artist's comments. If there are none or they are dumb ("I dunno, I was bored it was 3am LULZ") or self-deprecating ("I know it's not very good..."), I won't waste my time on them. They don't care about what they're doing so why should I?
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3wyl In reply to raspil [2010-03-21 14:36:50 +0000 UTC]
Interesting thought, that. I believe that many feel that way too.
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AnubisNova [2010-03-19 23:43:32 +0000 UTC]
Maybe if someone can't come up with an author's comment, then they could just put something terse like "speaks for itself," or "it is what it is," or "ta-da!". Something.
It's just a thought.
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3wyl In reply to AnubisNova [2010-03-21 14:36:23 +0000 UTC]
Well... I guess that is something.
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SaeriaXchan In reply to ??? [2010-03-19 23:27:00 +0000 UTC]
i'd imagine it like this. Da Vinci didn't write an authors comment on the Mona Lisa. I think that if you feel it needs to be explained, then explain it, but the point of art is the interpretations of the viewers. For the people to grasp meaning from your art, to analysis, and to hopefully use your message in life. If you simply give that to them, it takes the strength from the work.
But that's just my opinion
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RetroOutro In reply to SaeriaXchan [2010-04-13 12:05:17 +0000 UTC]
A lot of artists are at gallery expos though to answer questions the first time the work is shown.
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3wyl In reply to SaeriaXchan [2010-03-21 14:36:04 +0000 UTC]
I can certainly understand why you might think that way.
Still, a bit of nudging in the right direction never hurt anyone, did it?
Some people need a prompt to actually voice their interpretations, instead of keeping it to themselves.
Thank you for sharing your opinion.
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SaeriaXchan In reply to 3wyl [2010-03-22 00:58:54 +0000 UTC]
nudging a person can't hurt, no.
your very welcome
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crystalkaba [2010-03-19 23:19:09 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I don't know. With a lot of my writing I simply don't have much to add because I already said everything I had to say in my deviation. But with my visual art I typically say something about the project or the method I used.
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3wyl In reply to crystalkaba [2010-03-21 14:34:53 +0000 UTC]
That is fair enough. Sometimes, you don't need to explain anything because everything has been said or shown...
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jayjd2 [2010-03-19 22:34:45 +0000 UTC]
well done!
i like how you included the part about protection. it would seem that it is such an obvious point and yet you hit the nail on the head with the immense wording used that essentially means nothing.
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musiqueen In reply to ??? [2010-03-19 22:06:57 +0000 UTC]
Great article. I personally hate it when someone posts a drawing of an OC and the artists comment is this long story on the character or what the picture is. If I write a story I like, I upload it as literature, if I have a picture inspired by something I wrote, I include 2-3 sentences from it that I think really show what I'm trying to capture.
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RetroOutro In reply to musiqueen [2010-04-13 12:06:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I think it's okay maybe if it's like a scene and the writing describes what happened immediately before and after, because then it's like an illustration for a novel, but if it's just a vanity portrait, it can be really annoying.
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ChaoticSkye [2010-03-19 21:51:29 +0000 UTC]
this turned out great! Kudos to all involved in getting the final guide put together
I follow alot of these , but there's a couple in this that I never considered before Ty !
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brokenheartsbleeding In reply to ??? [2010-03-19 21:47:59 +0000 UTC]
hmmm, i prefer to be japanese in my nature...
i'm in love with the "..." of this world...
good advice though, for those who want comments.
though, i personally could care less if people comment on my work, it's definitely not why i have it on here.
good though...
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3wyl In reply to brokenheartsbleeding [2010-03-21 14:33:49 +0000 UTC]
To each his own, I guess!
But yes, you've said it there, really. It depends on what you're after. =/
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brokenheartsbleeding In reply to 3wyl [2010-03-28 22:37:47 +0000 UTC]
true that...
and people are very different...
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QueenGwenevere In reply to ??? [2010-03-19 21:33:45 +0000 UTC]
I always figure, if English isn't your main language, then write an artist's comment in your own language! DA has users all over the world, so some of them will speak your language and be able to read your artist's comment, and hey - they might appreciate it even more because they can read it more easily than English comments!
I've seen bilingual comments, too, which are always a nice touch.
(And I admit when I see "..." it makes me suspicious that the piece might be stolen... Especially when the deviant also has a blank avatar, no journal, etc.)
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RetroOutro In reply to QueenGwenevere [2010-04-13 12:07:05 +0000 UTC]
I always wonder if it's stolen too. X3
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3wyl In reply to QueenGwenevere [2010-03-21 14:33:19 +0000 UTC]
That is quite true.
If you can, write in both your main language and translate it into English underneath.
It does for me as well, actually.
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The-Art-Godess In reply to QueenGwenevere [2010-03-20 23:57:44 +0000 UTC]
Amen to that. I watch so many people who write artists comments in English and their native language, and many times you could tell they used a translator to put it into English. And y'know what? That's fine, they made an effort.
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QueenGwenevere In reply to The-Art-Godess [2010-03-21 14:14:20 +0000 UTC]
True! Plus, hey, it's educational!
If I see bilingual comments with English and a language I don't know, I like trying to see how many words I can identify in the language I don't know. (Language nerd, I know.)
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HelplessGrapefruit In reply to QueenGwenevere [2010-03-20 19:42:08 +0000 UTC]
Interesting point... Which reminds me to find an avatar and post a journal.
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QueenGwenevere In reply to HelplessGrapefruit [2010-03-21 14:10:44 +0000 UTC]
eheh... Well, if there's just some pictures and a whole lot of emptiness, it's kind of like, "hello? Is anyone there?"
Avatars are good to have. Sometimes I visit people's pages just because they have an interesting avatar. Heck, I discovered some of the people I watch that way.
(Reminds me I should change mine sometime...)
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demon-polecat In reply to QueenGwenevere [2010-03-19 21:47:57 +0000 UTC]
Seconded on the language thing. Languages are beautiful things and should be used in all their variety <3
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QueenGwenevere In reply to demon-polecat [2010-03-21 14:04:04 +0000 UTC]
Totally! Languages are fun! I'm all for a multi-lingual site...
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WorldWar-Tori In reply to ??? [2010-03-19 21:28:25 +0000 UTC]
on a lot of my photos (mostly nature), I have ... why? because it's a damn flower. what am I supposed to say about a flower? "this flower is pink. it was in my yard. i planted it in the spring time... ding-a-linga-ling time SPRING TIME!"...
but I agree, on a lot of piece, a little bit would be nice Especially if you want critique. If you just want pretty, fine. if you want me to say something useful... gimme an idea of what you find useful
... nicely written.
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QueenGwenevere In reply to WorldWar-Tori [2010-03-20 02:03:21 +0000 UTC]
Well, you could just say "lots more where that came from!" and throw in some links to the rest of your spring flower pics...
Hey, it's something, right?
(And it always irritates me when people take landscape photos and have "..." because I'm always wondering where the picture was taken... "Wow, that looks like such a cool place! Where is it? DAMN YOU WHY CAN'T YOU TELL ME WHERE IT IS!? Arrgh... OK, moving on, then.")
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WorldWar-Tori In reply to QueenGwenevere [2010-03-20 20:07:34 +0000 UTC]
, true.
(as for that, I don't put that on mine, simply because I don't want everyone to know where I am, but if it's say on a trip, I will specify. or a known landmark, even near me, I will. But if it's my back hard I'm not going to be this was on 28473 Where I live, LN,
My City, Michigan
4****
in the far left corner of my property about 38 degrees here, and 50 degrees there, under that awkward tree to the right.
That's creepy
But if someone asks, I will be like "it's where I live in upper michigan." so there's an idea
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QueenGwenevere In reply to WorldWar-Tori [2010-03-21 13:38:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, yeah, it's not like you should be giving an exact address (especially if it's yours)... But personally I like to at least have an idea what country a shot was taken in. Or what state, maybe.
Especially if it's someplace I don't know much about, because hey, it's educational! "Wow, I didn't know (some country/region/state) had mountains like that! Cool beans!"
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