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Nearly all of us, if not every single one of us, have come across a deviation that just has a disappointing '...'. Conversely, some of us have even come across a massive wall of text.

Whether we are the people who ask ourselves, "Is that it?", or whether we are the people who ask ourselves, "What can I say?", this guide will hopefully provide you with some insight in how to go about writing a good description for your deviations, a.k.a. your Artist's (or Author's) Comments.


IIIXII has already written a beautiful guide here . He mentions a great point and that is that your artists comments are the only thing that might motivate a reader or viewer to comment your work

How many of us want constructive comments, critiques and, most importantly, feedback on our pieces?

Thus, is it only fair that if we want something back, we have to give something as well?


Background

Inspiration. Did you seek inspiration from something? Were you inspired by a place or a person? If yes, let us know about it! There is no shame in telling us what you were inspired by, whether it is your next-door neighbour's dog or the clouds!

Feelings and thoughts. Do you remember what you were feeling when you were creating your piece? Was it happiness, anger, sadness, frustration, or something else? Can you remember a thought that kept going on and on in your mind when you were creating your piece?

Creation. Describe and explain the process it took you to create your piece. Did you use many tools? How long did you take? Was there a particular bit that you had to do over and over again?


Feedback

If you want specific feedback, ask a question. Even if nobody comments on your pieces, ask it anyway, because some random person may just happen across your piece, see that you are an artist wanting to improve and help you along your way.

Encourage people to comment. Things such as "I'd like to know what you think" or "Comments are much appreciated" can create a great effect. If you invite someone and give them a nudge in the right direction, some people will seize it.

It also illustrates how open you are to other people’s interpretations and opinions as well, which will increase their want to comment, as they will feel their thoughts will be taken into account.

Additionally, there is no harm in analysing our own pieces too, as long as it is constructive. A few sentences explaining what you dislike and like about the piece, what you had most and least trouble with can lead to…


Relate

…How we relate to the piece itself! (As it is a two way relationship) Not only can we explain how the piece relates to us on a more personal and emotional level, but it will help other people relate to you as well, thus, securing a connection between artist and … well, artist, really. We are all artists here, aren't we?

If one artist is provided with an opportunity to relate to another artist, it can bring on a friendship where both artists can support one another.


Length

Don't keep the Artist's Comments too short, but don't write masses and masses as well! Too short, and we are left disappointed. Too long, and we are easily overwhelmed. You don't have to describe and explain everything, but a little bit helps in helping us relate to the artist.

The key is to write something that let's your own individual feelings and personality shine through while still leaving some interpretations of the piece to the viewer. ~ amaira515

If you get carried away and you can’t cut down once you go back and read it over, try and separate your comment with paragraphs and spaces.


Language

Language might be a barrier for many of us, but that doesn't mean we can get away with just putting "..." on our pieces. Even if it is a sentence or two, it is better than nothing!

Nevertheless, if nobody can understand what you are saying, then it is basically the same as putting "...". If English is not your main language and you have a few errors in grammer and spelling, that is fine! Text speak, however, is a no-no.


Links

If your piece is one of a series, feel free to link to other pieces within the series, too. If a person likes what they see, the quick access will mean less trouble for them. However, make sure that the artist’s comments isn't filled entirely with links.

There is also a brilliant Group on deviantART dedicated to increasing artist's exposure through the use of a "Linking" system:

"Link another artists submission in your artist's comments box. It helps everyone's exposure and finds undiscovered art." ~ dALinkSystem


Protection

Many people have deviations that have a massive paragraph full of text to try and protect their work.  

However, there's no easy way to say this: this is the internet. If you don’t want anything stolen, don’t put it up here.

IIIXII’s guide explains what you can do to the Artist’s Comments in terms of protecting one’s own work, so there is no need to repeat it here.

Nevertheless, do not just fill your artist’s comments with information about copyright and the use of your piece (unless it is stock). If anything, look at it like a scale. Three quarters of your artist’s comments should be about the piece itself (if not all), and the other quarter should include the information that, theoretically, protects one’s own art work, if you utterly insist for it to be there.

Nobody wants to look at a mountain of information if they just wanted to look and comment on your art in the first place.


Final Note

Hopefully, you know a bit more about what to put in your Artist’s Comments. Even though they appear to be small, they can actually mean and express a lot.

This guide is by no means complete and it does not apply to everyone. It was written by ProjectComment as a Group, by deviants, for deviants.

I would like to thank the following who contributed: amaira515, Iluvocnj2006, xblackxbloodxcellx and Scarlesaur. Their efforts in the making of this guide are much appreciated, and they deserve to be recognised.

Feel free to ProjectComment for more guides! A couple that will soon be posted: 'A Guide on (Offending) Comments', 'How NOT to Comment', 'Why Comment in the First Place?' and more!


Thank you for reading.

3wyl , posting on behalf of ProjectComment



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Comments: 106

3wyl In reply to ??? [2019-09-14 19:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Yes, this article is a very old one. It wouldn't hurt to create new ones, but I imagine the community has changed a bit, and will continue to change too.

I think, overall, a person could write their comment a number of different ways and it would still be effective. Nowadays, I imagine the main thing is to keep it short and sweet.

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anjyil In reply to 3wyl [2019-09-15 05:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that is true.  time keeps marching forward ^_^  But I feel like short and sweet tends to not allow you to give truly good feedback, or worse, sound too frank or a little intimidating.  Words are so important, more so because of the text format.  Balance is hard to maintain.

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3wyl In reply to anjyil [2019-10-26 16:58:56 +0000 UTC]

It is more difficult when things are short and sweet. Words are our main form of expression on the internet, so I would agree.


Ultimately, it depends on how you approach it. I think an artist's comment could be more effective if a question/invitation was included, and that can be short and sweet. I know a lot of people argue that they can keep a constructive short and sweet, but I'm not sure that gets to the crux of the issue.

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anjyil In reply to 3wyl [2019-10-27 02:49:57 +0000 UTC]

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3wyl In reply to anjyil [2020-03-31 23:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that's a fair point. I think if you write about everything you mentioned there, it would be a constructive comment.


Certainly, it's not easy - if it were, it wouldn't take so much effort, or be something that's sought after and needed in this community.


I think it's also willpower. Some people have time, but don't believe they can write a constructive comment, or they're not interested. It's difficult to apply yourself if you're not interested or motivated.

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anjyil In reply to 3wyl [2020-04-01 05:19:04 +0000 UTC]

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roxya1 [2017-04-04 22:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Another great topic, I had never thought about these kind of comments. Thank you for the article!

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3wyl In reply to roxya1 [2017-04-04 23:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Hurricane-Hannah [2016-01-23 12:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I found this guide very helpful; however, I have a question.

I was pretty active on this site a few years back and in my artist comments I would use the code < sub >(without the spaces) and it would make the text appear a bit smaller.

The I left for a few years and just recently came back and noticed that now the text was too small and decided to simply remove the code. However, when I went in to edit, there was no longer a code, the entire text was just small text.

I have tried deleting the text and rewriting in the artist's comments and have tried writing in applications like MS Word and pasting it in but it just automatically reverts to the too small text.

I tried the site's FAQ and found nothing and I tried to write a ticket to them but they have no category for this type of problem. Yours is the only journal I can find that even relates to the artist comments.

Any help you or someone reading this comment can give, I would greatly appreciate it.

Thank you.

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3wyl In reply to Hurricane-Hannah [2016-01-25 18:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Hey Hurricane-Hannah ,

Apologies for my late response.

I assume you have hit 'Edit' as well as 'Edit with StashWriter'?

Have you tried copying/pasting from Notepad? Or hitting 'enter' so it stretches the box and then pasting right at the bottom?

You can file a ticket at the help desk here: help.deviantart.com/contact/?c…

Hopefully that helps.

3wyl

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Hurricane-Hannah In reply to 3wyl [2016-01-28 20:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your information.

Unfortunately, nothing you suggested could help but I was able to send the staff a ticket and hopefully then can help me.

Thank you again for your time and suggestions.

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3wyl In reply to Hurricane-Hannah [2016-01-29 00:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! Good luck there.

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Hurricane-Hannah In reply to 3wyl [2016-01-29 01:58:07 +0000 UTC]

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UvvieSigma [2015-11-05 15:47:30 +0000 UTC]

This is surprisingly helpful, I didn't know there was a guide for writing "artist's comment"s. Unfortunately, nobody ever reads them on my pictures, but there are some things that are good to remember nevertheless

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3wyl In reply to UvvieSigma [2015-11-07 18:02:41 +0000 UTC]

I am glad!

Ah, that's a shame. =/

Regardless, people may stumble across your works, so it's worth considering for sure.

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MoonFey [2015-07-01 15:10:01 +0000 UTC]

I always do at least attempt to write a little something in the artist comment and I always mentions the materials I used, but it is often really hard to know what to write, so this guide is very helpful for me. Thank you so so much!

I also find it a bit sad to see the '...' comments. Why not add a smiley instead? or a stamp, or find one off the many icons from a plz account that'd fits your personality?

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3wyl In reply to MoonFey [2015-07-04 12:52:32 +0000 UTC]

That sounds awesome.

I am glad!

Yeah, that is true! There are a lot of smilies for sure.

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VLLady [2015-02-10 09:59:52 +0000 UTC]

This is so interesting journal! I got many new pieces of info and advices. Thank you!
However, I have to tell about something. I watch some people on dA and I'm sometimes really surprised, how other people comment under their works.
For example: you said, that we should appreciate every single comment and always reply it, showing our attention. So, I saw some deviants who have a lot of comments under their works, and they NEVER reply them. It usually happens, when an artist is very popular (and he says 'he doesn't have time or possibilities to answer all comments'). Hmm, but people still comment under his/her works. It seems he 'doesn't care' of them, because don't reply every comment, but still people like, fav and comment his works. Strange
Another example: I've seen really a lot of works, which have nice descriptions (or, as you said, 'an author's comment'). But... nobody next comments these works! They have '0 comments'. Sometimes I really feel pity about these people. It usually happens (but not always!!), when works are... hmm, not drawn well, or very unknown, or not popular. People just are not interested in them. This is sad. But sometimes even great works have 0 comments (plus great description!), and still nobody comment it. This is also sad!

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3wyl In reply to VLLady [2015-03-08 14:41:25 +0000 UTC]

I am glad!

Well, I think that if we want to foster good relations with other people, it would be best to reply to every comment that you do receive. Obviously, different people will do differently.

There are many reasons why people don't reply to comments, and sometimes it actually puts someone off from commenting in the first place.

A lot of people like to comment anyway, even if they don't receive a response back, and I imagine they have their reasons. I think a good reason is that they want to make themselves known. Perhaps they see that person as their idol or inspiration, and so they continue to worship them even without any recognition back.

The ones with 0 comments are very sad indeed. It does depend on many things at the end of the day.

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ilikadachocolate [2013-02-05 00:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you heaps for writing this. I'll follow this advice in the future.

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3wyl In reply to ilikadachocolate [2013-02-05 10:45:19 +0000 UTC]



Go with what works best for you, while keeping this in mind! It's not full-proof by any standard.

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xxEmi-AnGeL-chanxx [2012-01-20 22:13:10 +0000 UTC]

*feels embarrassed as often used 'u' and 'ur' and other conjunctions unless writing an actual story*

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3wyl In reply to xxEmi-AnGeL-chanxx [2012-01-21 12:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww, it can be a habit?

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xxEmi-AnGeL-chanxx In reply to 3wyl [2012-01-22 08:35:44 +0000 UTC]

It probably is

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itklivry [2011-09-30 18:58:40 +0000 UTC]

That's all very well and good, but how do you remove/edit a comment that you've already made on someone else's work? If anyone can tell me, please e-mail me at itklivry at yahoo dot com.

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Griffonmender In reply to itklivry [2016-05-19 01:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Go to the comment.
There should be an option "hide" it when you hit the little pencil button on the side
Or use edit to delete the text.

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3wyl In reply to itklivry [2011-09-30 22:41:15 +0000 UTC]

You can't.

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SANU-CHAN [2011-08-30 16:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, very helpful. I shall remember this.

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Hatta-san [2011-01-17 18:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks this is very helpful

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FreckleOnMyPalm [2011-01-16 15:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Haha when I write my artist's comments I always feel like I'm writing so much but then I preview it and it's a lot shorter/easier on the eyes then I thought XD I always try to explain any important reasons behind things in my pieces and such like to make the pieces a bit more engaging for folks.

Anyway, this is a nice set of guidelines, I really hate seeing a beautiful piece with the '...' or a piece of any level with what looks like a short novel written about it.

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3wyl In reply to FreckleOnMyPalm [2011-01-16 20:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Ah... that's cool then!

I get what you mean... If it's too long, others will be put off and all of that.

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bLah-27 [2010-10-03 05:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Alright! I'm going to change all my deviations from "." to what 3wyl suggests! Thanks for the helpful advice XD

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3wyl In reply to bLah-27 [2010-10-04 18:27:25 +0000 UTC]

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RetroOutro [2010-04-13 12:08:35 +0000 UTC]

" However, there's no easy way to say this: this is the internet. If you don’t want anything stolen, don’t put it up here. "

You think a generation made up of pirates and 'How I what it when I want it for the price I want it' attitudes towards commercial works would understand this concept easier.

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3wyl In reply to RetroOutro [2010-04-13 15:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, yes! O.o

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gosangoku [2010-04-13 10:10:00 +0000 UTC]

This is magnificent advice. Nowadays, I don't often utilise elipses. I do attempt to write a sentence or two at least, although I do occasionally find it difficult to express myself in an Artist's Comment. I never know what I'm expected to say! As such, this guide is quite helpful. I'll definitely remember it for next time I submit a deviation. Thank you for your time and effort!

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3wyl In reply to gosangoku [2010-04-13 15:26:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it helped!

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gosangoku In reply to 3wyl [2010-04-13 19:50:02 +0000 UTC]

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Manwathiell-Stock [2010-04-13 01:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Very well written and so true.
You made me want to watch the group, and I'm going there!
I found this article featured on Artistic Maneuvers' Blog.


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Cherrypopz [2010-04-06 13:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thank you very much for this guide. It's very well written and so helpful!

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3wyl In reply to Cherrypopz [2010-04-06 16:53:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so!

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Kaz-D [2010-03-22 07:12:43 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic Article, very useful too! And look! You got two rejections. TWO it must be great!

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3wyl In reply to Kaz-D [2010-03-22 13:58:22 +0000 UTC]

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the-photographicpoet [2010-03-21 18:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Excellent report

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scarletspy [2010-03-21 14:56:53 +0000 UTC]

When I find a deviation that I really love and am interested about, I get extremely disappointed to find that the artist comment only consists of '...'. If a deviation has an inspirational and original concept that I've never seen before, I always like to know how the artist came up with the idea. ^^

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RolkStone [2010-03-21 14:45:49 +0000 UTC]

ok, well the artist's comments is just as personal as the art itself. there shouldn't be any rules involved.

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3wyl In reply to RolkStone [2010-03-21 15:02:37 +0000 UTC]

There aren't any rules.

These are just a couple of prompts for those that want to write something but don't know what... and it also increases the want for artists to give feedback, but it depends if you want that or not.

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SamBlob [2010-03-21 11:00:36 +0000 UTC]

I am very happy to see this guide available and equally happy to realize, after reading through it, that I didn't really need it myself, as I already do most, if not all, of that. However, it will be of help for many others.

The person I watch who gives the "..." comment the most is a car photographer, and it's a bit frustrating when I've never heard of the car. He usually comments on one-offs or really rare ones, though.

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3wyl In reply to SamBlob [2010-03-21 14:42:37 +0000 UTC]



Hmm...

I guess, ultimately, it's left up to the artist. If they feel they need to explain, they will, and if not, they won't.

It's just... there are so many variables and levels with Artist's Comments, that you can never hit it completely and fully, if that makes sense?

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SamBlob In reply to 3wyl [2010-03-21 15:05:34 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it does.

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