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4-string — What I wanna...
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Published: 2008-10-30 11:37:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 784; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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I wanna be inside your head… And not in a creepy stalker way no,I wanna sit with you and a sunrise just to listen to your voice in its golden rays of light.
I wanna laugh at all your jokes… and I wanna *get* all your jokes.
Even the secret ones you laugh at in your head cause you know no one else will get it.
And I know you're making them.
I wanna be there when you smile at the first demotivation poster you find on 4chan that day.
I wanna snap a photo of it then post it in its own thread called ‘just cause’.
I wanna put that thread under ‘Transportation’ because you drive me crazy.
I wanna double post it in music too, cause that’s what I hear when I’m with you.
I wanna hide a rickroll in your hot chocolate, so with every sip you would know…
Never gonna give you up.
Never gonna let you down.
Never going to run around…
And desert you.
I wanna roll a brand new rogue just to steal your heart,
I’d guard it with my level 70 tank and stack my con buffs so no one could take it away.
Unless you asked for it… then I’d transfer to my hunter.
And he would run through the fires of every map in WOW to get it to you with interest…
Which would be my heart, even though you already own it…
I wanna google you + me and click I’m feeling lucky,
Cause the first result will always be, me and you… in a video on youtube.
We’d dance to music only we could hear, played by blog’s from myspace.
And we’d have no comments, subscribers or 5 star votes but we’d dance anyway…
Cause that’s how I wanna spend my day…
I wanna be a better person, so I can be the kind of guy you deserve.
I wanna be there when you laugh and be there when you cry.
I wanna be your shoulder to lean on… if only you’ll be mine.
Most of all I just wanna be. With. You.
Comments: 23
I remember when you were writing this and I got the preview! AWESOME Glad you posted it!
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That's right you did too 
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I love the premise of this piece! It flows nicely, and for being of a romantic subject, I applaud you on not making it melodramatic and oozing with saccharine.
I've missed your writing.
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I don't do it very often these days lol
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Wow... I really cant say much more than that. This is really good, and very different. And not different in a bad way or different in an odd way.. but it's a refreshing kind of different. The kind that makes me sigh really deeply and smile. I want more of this..
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lol, thanks, I'm not sure if you'll ever see something like this again though, it's not something I usually do and I'm not sure I'll get this kinda inspiration again... but I hope I do ^_^
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This is really sweet. I love it. I'll make sure to show joe later. I would write more but i've just been awake for like 24 hours. so *dies* Relay for life yay.
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lol, thanks Mitch, let me know what he thinks too
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he read it and thought it was nice and nerdy. He also wondered who it was about but I doubt we're ever going to know.
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"And I know you're making them."
..is probably what you were going for 
"I wanna google you + me and click I’m feeling lucky,"
Now that sentence on the other hand is one of the bestest ever!
Really sweet poem. I love how it can be deep and still be 'recent' at the same time. You don't have to write like it's still the 20th century to be good ^^
It made me both giggle and go aww.
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""And I know you're making them."
..is probably what you were going for
DAMNIT! There's always one of those in everything I write... thank you.
"Now that sentence on the other hand is one of the bestest ever!"
Thanks, I really liked it too
Thank you, that means a lot cause I 
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That was good. I especially liked the transportation part. Made me laugh.
And I think spoken word is a good choice. I could see this being performed at an open mic at a coffee shop.
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Thank you, I'm almost tempted to find a coffee shop if only I was a good public speaker
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i love this.
really good stuff you have here.
it could be considered poetry i guess...
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Thank you, I considered it mostly spoken word since as I was writing it I had a sort of 'rhythm' for how it should be read (or spoken rather)... that and it didn't seem to fit in any other categories
in any case thanks for the
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I know, i find it hard to put my stuff in the right cattagories too!
Your welcome!
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Dude, this is really deep stuff. I like this a lot.
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Wow, thanks, for the 
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