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My entry for 24-Hour Comic Day (no title yet)story and rough layouts during the 24 hours; additional penciling done afterwards
© 47ness, 2011
Page 3 & 4
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Comments: 13
XbinaryBrwnfanartist [2013-05-14 14:54:45 +0000 UTC]
I love how from a distance, it looks like the cityscape is populated by humans, but then we see the flamingos in the second panel. I like how in the background, there's a sprawling, modern city, and in the foreground, you have a more turn-of-the century feel--like the streetlamps. ^^ I like the high angle in the first one, as if we're flying, in, and then all the way down to street level as we see the car from below. I love how chatty you make the flamingos without them saying a word. : D
And that car, wow...^^^ So much detail. ^^ I love the hats on the flamingos! ^^ I'm trying to figure if the smiling guy in the car is a passenger or the driver--and I like how the guy opening the car door for the flamingos look aloof and somewhat deferential.
Awesome work! ^^ ^^
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47ness In reply to XbinaryBrwnfanartist [2013-05-14 20:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for all your thoughtful feedback! :,D
Mmm, I think the smiling guy in the car is just another flamingo craning his head; it's any wonder how they all fit in there. XD;
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XbinaryBrwnfanartist In reply to 47ness [2013-05-14 23:37:54 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure! ^^
That must be a huge car to fit all of the flamingos in there! : D
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zkfanart [2011-12-10 22:35:18 +0000 UTC]
Really cool.... specially for the station wagon I appreciated the mix of old and modern style on it
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Laitma [2011-10-19 22:46:33 +0000 UTC]
H-h-holy shit man, I still can't believe your work, augh! PERSPECTIVE and your super-gorgeous bold strokes~ augh, so spectacular. And flamingos?? This is gonna be AWESOME. 8)
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47ness In reply to Rocky-O [2011-10-17 00:51:59 +0000 UTC]
I was sitting with some hilarious n' clever artists/writers, most of the night. ::felt da love::
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TOONOLOGY [2011-10-14 14:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Wow that awsome. I love the background of the city.
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Sio64 [2011-10-14 10:40:12 +0000 UTC]
Is this just pencil? And are those dapper flamingos?!
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47ness In reply to Sio64 [2011-10-14 11:24:43 +0000 UTC]
The first page has ink .....and then I realized it was bleeding through. (I was using both sides of the paper fff) XD;;;
INDEED.
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Sio64 In reply to 47ness [2011-10-14 11:31:14 +0000 UTC]
I hate when that happens.
And freaking awesome!
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