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Published: 2011-10-14 09:50:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1047; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 30
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Description (Whoops; I was so fired up that I accidentally made 26 pages.) XD;;;


My entry for 24-Hour Comic Day

story and rough layouts during the 24 hours; additional penciling done afterwards


ANYWAY, that's the comic. I'm going to eventually go back and make a super-polished version of this. So, the next time you see this comic, it'll have much more finalized characters, environments, etc.

And. Yes. IT'LL BE IN COLOR.


Β© 47ness, 2011

p.s. what the heck should the name of this comic be??


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Comments: 48

zkfanart [2011-12-10 22:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Hehehehehe, the heroΒ΄s identity will never be known.... XDDDDDD as in all good hero series

And the informers also get their pay! XD Eyes can hurt! cool comic! ^^

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47ness In reply to zkfanart [2011-12-12 20:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, this story is meant to focus on the poor little citizen that needs rescuing, but offer a glimmer of hope in his future...

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zkfanart In reply to 47ness [2011-12-15 21:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Is something a LOT of people need today ^^

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wraith11 [2011-10-22 01:57:14 +0000 UTC]

Awesome comic man... I actually kinda like the sketchy, storyboard style right now (though I'll also be interested to see what it looks like in colour).

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47ness In reply to wraith11 [2011-10-22 02:49:16 +0000 UTC]

The sketchiness is especially helpful right now because I know I'll probably be adding in additional pages as revisions, before committing to colour/animation.

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Laitma [2011-10-19 22:53:42 +0000 UTC]

...........Wow. Seriously, man, wow. You're freakin' amazing and this was just so goddamn hilarious and fantastic and INSANELY well-done and and and I just--holy fuck, man.
You're the greatest. ;v; <3

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47ness In reply to Laitma [2016-08-28 09:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I never did reply to this comment did I?? ;; 2011 me was a right jerk, TBH...

I figured I'd go back and see what I can remake in true storyboard fashion~ β™«

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Laitma In reply to 47ness [2016-08-28 10:52:26 +0000 UTC]

LOL n-no worries man, sometimes I just hoard comments too a-and... completely... forget to reply to them, weep;;;;;;

And hahahah, so you're gonna go for this?? Β I think it'll be great, give it a shot-!! Β XD

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47ness In reply to Laitma [2016-08-28 10:57:28 +0000 UTC]

I still have your character/inking memes where you tagged me sitting in my inbox... ;A;
I want to do the 8 character questions once I actually know more about my dumb kids and it's not spoiler info. Β¦D

Yep! It deserves a place in my portfolio. β™₯;

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Laitma In reply to 47ness [2016-08-30 08:31:41 +0000 UTC]

LOL I-I'm still sure you can find enough fun/cute facts abot your OCs to do this, hehehe-!

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Rocky-O [2011-10-17 00:36:29 +0000 UTC]

oh shit, THIS is the end! ha ha ha

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47ness In reply to Rocky-O [2011-10-17 01:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, s-sorry if the order was confusing(?) ^~;

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Suki-kitty [2011-10-16 16:59:17 +0000 UTC]

AJ! WHY ARE YOU SO BRILLIANT?!

You knooow how much I love me some silent comics. I could so see this as an animated short.

And that is possibly the most moe snail I have ever seen.

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47ness In reply to Suki-kitty [2011-10-16 18:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Yessss, most definitely going to do this as a animation, rather than a straight-up comic... (or both?? idk. it's a lot of micro-management o_o)

Best part about silent/Fantasia-style? I wouldn't have to hire voice-actors which prolly would have doubled the amount of work.

I NEED TO MAKE HIM MORE MOE FOR THE FINAL. MOARRRR.

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Nuclearkoi [2011-10-14 22:04:53 +0000 UTC]

I think "Invertebrate Night" or something like that might be something kinda cool. There are other ways of describing snail you know.

And how many things do you have on your desk that you plan to "finish up" and colour?!

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47ness In reply to Nuclearkoi [2011-10-14 23:45:39 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking "Slugs Over Broadway" a la Bullets Over Broadway . Except there are no slugs. Maybe "Slugs n' Shells [...]" but that sounds clunky.

Gosh. Everything.

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inisipis [2011-10-14 20:32:49 +0000 UTC]

A surly cigar smoking pigeon, now I've seen everything.

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47ness In reply to inisipis [2011-10-14 23:30:34 +0000 UTC]

I thought about having the bowler hat land on our brave little snail, but then it would just fall off him if he needed to duck in his shell. XD;

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inisipis In reply to 47ness [2011-10-15 00:02:28 +0000 UTC]

The spoils of war. Still, I think a Top hat would suit him better.

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47ness In reply to inisipis [2011-10-15 00:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm. Publisher-dude said it needed more payoff.


I think for the ending the snail should berunning the nightclub.

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sweet-suzume [2011-10-14 20:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha ha! I had a feeling I'd be seeing those flamingos in this! I can tell you had a lot of fun working on this.

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47ness In reply to sweet-suzume [2011-10-14 23:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh did you now~ β™«

I definitely had a lot of NO WAY- DID I JUST THINK OF THAT?? moments, kind of like your "Having Too Much Fun" deviation. Β¦Dc

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sweet-suzume In reply to 47ness [2011-10-15 18:26:43 +0000 UTC]

That's great.

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LadyAniDraws [2011-10-14 19:33:54 +0000 UTC]

You actually made 26?!! WOW!! O_O

Anyway, that was incredible, nicely planned especially being dialogue-less. I could tell what was happening without it.

Man I'd really like to try this challenge with my own comic. Get some pages out of the way and all. XD

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47ness In reply to LadyAniDraws [2011-10-14 23:32:17 +0000 UTC]

I opted for a wordless comic. Saved me OODLES of time... ;D

(i thought about making this a one-shot subplot to SSnPP, but I reeeeally wanted to get away from that world for a bit)

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keight [2011-10-14 15:59:26 +0000 UTC]

That was fun.

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47ness In reply to keight [2011-10-14 23:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Fun was definitely what I was aiming for.

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Pechan [2011-10-14 15:45:45 +0000 UTC]

i am super impressed by how clean the whole comic came out, given the insane dead line! ><;; 26 pages that are easily read, that's no small feat! excellent job ness, a lot of your recent stuff has been incredible!

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47ness In reply to Pechan [2011-10-14 23:47:58 +0000 UTC]

I crapped out soooo badly last year. ;; So I kinda knew what mistakes to avoid this time...?

Thanks~ still got a lot of revisions to deal with (and in the meanwhile I have my main comic and Geoff's contest to deal with) XD;;

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TOONOLOGY [2011-10-14 15:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow cool ending love the storyboard. Outstanding, well done. And Classic cool story man.

~Stay Classic~

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47ness In reply to TOONOLOGY [2011-10-14 23:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I plan to make it really crazy in the final version. XD

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TOONOLOGY In reply to 47ness [2011-10-15 04:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Anytime and stay classic man.

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City-of-Zeroes [2011-10-14 14:59:16 +0000 UTC]

ROFLMAO

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47ness In reply to City-of-Zeroes [2011-10-14 23:28:03 +0000 UTC]

I've been corresponding with a professional I met at APE. He says the story's got potential, but there's a bunch of revisions to come...

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JamFisher [2011-10-14 11:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha, that was an awesome read! xD

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47ness In reply to JamFisher [2011-10-14 11:47:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad I decided on doing a wordless comic. ::utterly phails at coming up with compelling dialogue::

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JamFisher In reply to 47ness [2011-10-14 11:52:14 +0000 UTC]

It worked well with the story!

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Sio64 [2011-10-14 10:49:52 +0000 UTC]

That was awesome xD

Can't wait to see it in colour! How the heck you came up with that in 24 hours is beyond me, and the line quality of your pencil work is amazing =o

I'm terri-bad with names of things, but all things considered i think it deserves a escargot reference?

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47ness In reply to Sio64 [2011-10-14 11:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~ <3

I was working amongst many creative minds that night, which must've helped.

Hmmm, maybe? i've just been privately calling it "Snail Tale" on my hard drive.

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Sio64 In reply to 47ness [2011-10-14 11:30:25 +0000 UTC]

I did think snail tale..

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47ness In reply to Sio64 [2011-10-14 11:32:15 +0000 UTC]

"tale" implies swords and sorcery. something more moxy is in order... XD

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Sio64 In reply to 47ness [2011-10-14 11:38:34 +0000 UTC]

I look forward to seeing what you come up with!

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47ness In reply to Sio64 [2011-10-14 11:44:20 +0000 UTC]

I'll be sure to post preview panels + concept work (esp. since all the characters still need to be design-designed) XD;

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Sio64 In reply to 47ness [2011-10-14 12:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Lotta work for you? xD

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47ness In reply to Sio64 [2011-10-14 22:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Um, YES. ::getting a lot of useful feedback from a professional on this::

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Sio64 In reply to 47ness [2011-10-14 22:57:18 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome! feedback's always worth it

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47ness In reply to Sio64 [2011-10-14 23:48:59 +0000 UTC]

y-yay moar work...

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Sio64 In reply to 47ness [2011-10-14 23:55:40 +0000 UTC]

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