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Published: 2005-11-29 23:06:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 486; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 20
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Description Death:
     
     my empty darkness
    
     my eternal sleep

     my final rest
     
     my absolute peace

   the end of my day
   that would never stop

   the end of my hike
   trying to reach the top

     my silent tranquility
     
     my everlasting calm

   numbness that lays
   in my right hand's palm

   painless and fast
   darkness then peace

   the setting sun
   a final relief
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Comments: 10

clam-chowder [2005-12-31 08:18:00 +0000 UTC]

You made death seem so tranquil and peacefull yet.. I dont know. I cant find the word to describe it. NIcely done

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4myself In reply to clam-chowder [2005-12-31 21:22:05 +0000 UTC]

heh thanks glad ya liked it

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BlueTreesGreenSkies [2005-12-04 20:18:27 +0000 UTC]

very nice.

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4myself In reply to BlueTreesGreenSkies [2005-12-05 00:17:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Thunorrad [2005-12-01 20:49:19 +0000 UTC]

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4myself In reply to Thunorrad [2005-12-01 22:48:12 +0000 UTC]

lol thx

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bought [2005-12-01 19:02:29 +0000 UTC]

it is mostest prettiest. i usually hate poems like this. but you did it so beautifully.

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4myself In reply to bought [2005-12-01 22:47:30 +0000 UTC]

heh thanx

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Icy-Demon-Lord [2005-11-30 03:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Nicely written love, though I would like to question the insperation?

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4myself In reply to Icy-Demon-Lord [2005-11-30 22:15:15 +0000 UTC]

life

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