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Published: 2005-11-29 23:06:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 486; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 20
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Death:my empty darkness
my eternal sleep
my final rest
my absolute peace
the end of my day
that would never stop
the end of my hike
trying to reach the top
my silent tranquility
my everlasting calm
numbness that lays
in my right hand's palm
painless and fast
darkness then peace
the setting sun
a final relief
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Comments: 10
clam-chowder [2005-12-31 08:18:00 +0000 UTC]
You made death seem so tranquil and peacefull yet.. I dont know. I cant find the word to describe it. NIcely done
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4myself In reply to clam-chowder [2005-12-31 21:22:05 +0000 UTC]
heh thanks glad ya liked it
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bought [2005-12-01 19:02:29 +0000 UTC]
it is mostest prettiest. i usually hate poems like this. but you did it so beautifully.
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Icy-Demon-Lord [2005-11-30 03:44:18 +0000 UTC]
Nicely written love, though I would like to question the insperation?
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