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Published: 2012-08-26 03:28:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 625; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 4
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Why can't you b r e a t h e,little girl?
It can't be the lack of oxygen
For I can see the rust covering you
It's hurting you, isn't it?
It's killing you, isn't it?
Why can't you s m i l e,
little girl?
It can't be the lack of humor
Or do you not find all this funny?
It's annoying you, isn't it?
It's pushing you, isn't it?
Why can't you s e e,
little girl?
It can't be the lack of light
Even my own scarred eyes can see this truth
It's hidden from you, isn't it?
It's breaking you, isn't it?
Why can't you l i v e,
little girl?
It can't be your lack of soul
Or is it completely gone now?
It's rusted, isn't it?
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Comments: 11
You know, this is really good. Also, can I maybe make a little comic out of those verses? They are great.
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This is so amazing ;.; I freaking love your poems! The feels! T^T
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ahhhhh thank you!! You're too nice! ;w; I'm happy you like it~ I love .flow too, haha
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Thank you so much! ;u; I'm glad you like it.
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;w;
I'm not.
But thank you -huggles-
I still feel like there's something wrong with me for writing this poem...OHWELL
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Jesus christ dude this is freaking amazing ;o;
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Write more crap not later, write more crap now~! 8D This is fucking amazing!
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