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A-P-A-R-T — ch1 pg13
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♥origional story
origional charcters Masashi Kishimoto
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I really hope you make more, because we know Kishimoto, is not going to do anything with them. ^^ it was really nice. ^^
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One word...
EXCELLENT! *Electric guitar notes* 
I can't wait for the next chapter. Kudos to you! Consider yourself watched!
There a re a few typos in the dialogue though...
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That's so beautiful T.T Why haven't I seen this before. It's the best Dattebayo!
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*5 hours later*
I SSSSOOOO KNEW THAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!!!!!
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When's chapter 2 coming out? Can you send me it???
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I'm sorry it's taking a million years @A@ I've just started my senior year o high shcool so I'm like UUUGH COLLEGE STUFF and UUUGH MARCHING BAND all the time. I doodle a lot in school, but I dont work on apart coz I want it to be more serious than just doodles. 
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this is a cheesy imatation from another naruhina written work ( i think u made it though ) ( oh well i like it )
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hm... please excuse me, it would appear that the awesome just made my head explode
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excellent adaption so far, too bad it was a dream
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NYAAAH NO CUTTY! JESUS CHRIST ITS A LION GET IN THE CAR!!!
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*blows up car car and you got eaten while i go to the twinky factory*
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0.0 WHOOOOHOOO!! LET'S PARTY 4 NARUHINA! x3 hehe yay!
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That's just PERFECT!
I can see it happening in the manga, word for word the whole story!
you rock!
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