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MERRY CHIRSTMAS TO YOU! Finally...
Oh well, it's Christmas and Aurora is in such a good mood, that she gives out free headbutts!
Poor Rhon...The anatomyΒ and perspective sucks here and there, but I like the general athmosphere here. Rhon's situation is still not really good and Kaeroth just leaves him there and vanishes! Shame on him!
Prepare to say goodbye to Aurora soon... I hope you didn't grew too attached to her. She had already way more screentime, than I planned first. And I somehow have the feeling that most of you really want to know, why Aarok is in Rhons debt, right?
Oh by the way, a tail-biter is not really a nice word, since hatchlings often bite in the tails of their parents to play with them. It should just show, that Aurora, doesn't really see Rhon as a worthy challenger.
EDIT: Changed the text + added Auroras' scars
(c) art, story and charas by me
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Your last picture from past year? Nice. A page of great comic. Even better.
Looks like Rhon has alot of trouble in that position... and Kaeroth a bit useless and slow... or just mocking Rhon and putting him in more trouble? He is kinda... bad?
Neck is pretty much the weakest point of dragon's body. Π‘arotid artery, spinal cord along which the communication with the whole body... and can't even defend much easily this place... arms are not much flexible and muzzle can't rotate so... Looks like if somebody get you for your throat, you are pretty much died.
Also looks like Aurora has too high self opinion? XD Yup... I guess because she is good fighter and a royal person.
How Rhon will survive such position? or Kaeroth at least do something useful instead of talking nonsense and mocking Rhon while it's battle?XD We'll wait and see...
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sorry I am late! I must of miss this one. 
dam, poor rhon. 
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This is the first one I've seen, looks great! Keep up the good work!
-Sil
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The characters are nice and detailed. Also liking the use of the low angles in the first and eight panel, nice way to imply dominance. Do mind your grammar, the sentence in the fifth panel is a bit oddly constructed, a better choise would be:Β "Oh, why haven't I noticed before? A little tail-biter has challenged me." Having someone proofread these before you upload them won't be a bad idea. Looking forward to the next one.
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Thank you, oh you're right ^^. I didn't really paid attention to it, but I must admit, it really look dominant, how she looks there.
I changed it, thank you for telling me. And I already thought, the sentence looks weird, I just didn't know, what to change.
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A happy new year to you 
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It looks like Rhon was afraid to move,Β or... I don't really know, did he have a chance to stand again? In my opinion he just didn't want to risk further. Nice idea it was, Rhonny, but the prince will never face the enemy so openly, I suppose Kaeroth left for a second attack (this time, unexpectedly, waiting for Aurora to busy herself with our boy).
I have assumptions about the debt, have had them for a while, but I want to see if I was wrong. No spoilers :3
I'm a it confused with the last panel as I can't quite imagine what is happening. Aurora was on Rhon (while he was on his belly), so... how did they end up headbutting each other? xD It doesn't look like she was trying to bite his throat o_O
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Maybe both. He just knows, that he has no chance against her and hopes, that Kaeroth would help him to escape, but well he has other plans.
She is standing on him, and he looks up to the sky to look for Kaeroth. And while he does so, Aurora slams her head down. But I failed with the perspective there. Rhon is lucky enough, that she wants him to suffer a long and painful death instead of just killing him fast with a throatbite.
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Indeed he's lucky here. If he wasn't, who knows what would happen in the past.
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It's a bit wierd that she is still joking around now that the red dragons are tearing her clan apart. I would think she would be enraged and attack them without mercy and without saying anything.
I mean they are destroying everything she has and are threatening the life of her only child, I would think she would be more serious about that.
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If she would have realzied, how serious the situation really is, she would have reacted as you discribed. Oh I saw, that Helen already answered your question ^^. Thank you, Helen xD
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She doesn't know about the "war" yet, to her it looks like 2 idiotic reds decided to play.
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I see.
She'll unfortunatly quickly find out it's much more serious than that.
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Oh poor Rhon !! Shame on you, Kareoth ! I hope Aurora'll kick his ass !!
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She really shoudl do... maybe i'll arrange taht.
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Headbutt always are knocking enemies out ^^ Nice page you did and I like how the Aurora snapped her tail from Rhon jaws with so much effort ^^
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Thank you, well Aurora is an expert on fighting and she plans a painful and long death for him.
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Ouch painfull death, worst death even for best soldier. I think that being ripped fast is better than long pain.
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First of all, beautiful work, I admire your style and the beautiful dragons you draw.
Secondly, I really like this page, I can't wait to know what's gonna happen next!
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Thank you very much 
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I'm sure you'll be faster but still, take your time!
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A new page,yes!
And I so like the colors of the reds and of black dragon queen.
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Ah yes, finally. Me too, black and red are just the perfect match.
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Not for Rhon and Aurora! ^^
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She sexy with she's dangerous but yeah don't want to get into a fight with her
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I agree xD she's definatly noone to mess with
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She's not dead is she? D=
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Kaeroth heard that the black queen had a hatchie so I would make a guess he's going after it.
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Nope, he doesn't care about it, his mother asked him to fetch her necklace, as it is already explained a few pages earlier.
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Oh nein, ich mag aurora doch aber! Morgen ist Weihnachten, schebkst du uns dann noch eine Seite?
Frohes fest auch dir!
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Ich auch... ich mag eigentlich sowieso alle schwarzen Drachen aber, geht halt nicht anders. Muss morgen frΓΌh arbeiten und danach ist dann das obligatorische Familienfest, also eher nicht. Aber ich sitz schon an der neuen, hab gerade voll Bock, weiter zu machen.
Danke Mysti, wΓΌnsch ich dir auch
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Na dann gebe ich dir noch die 2 Feiertage Zeit, aber mehr nicht
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