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Aarok — The Pact -9-

Published: 2010-01-10 18:25:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 10017; Favourites: 123; Downloads: 65
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Whew you will laugh but in some days my comic gets 1 year old and HOORAY i've got 9 pages so far... i have to get a bit faster, maybe i will be with my new tablet which will (hopfully) soon be delivered.

But back to the story, council is nearly over, Aarok looses his temper, Azka too .
They finally get an important hint from the green messenger, where they should search, a bit late, but better late than never !
So next page we get out of the old cave to the fresh air again. Well and Aarok has to fly to the Reds territory alone. Aww poor guy he's sad you can see this in the last panel.

Now lets take a closer look at the "green" messager [link] , i'll draw page 10 now .

(c) art + charas to me, lightbrushes to *redheadstock
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Comments: 83

KaxantheDragon [2011-09-02 20:08:40 +0000 UTC]

Story line is excellent. My major problem with this comic so far is layout. Its hard to follow the order of your panels as well as the speech bubbles. I suggest a careful study of how the eyes are drawn to the page to help with layouts. There are also several tutorials here on DA you can check out as well.

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Aarok In reply to KaxantheDragon [2011-09-04 15:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Hi there , thank you for your critique. Yes you are right, somehow my panels look confusing, now where you mention it. Of course i never paid attention to that, since i already knew in which order i have read them, but for someone who isn't familiar with the story it can be difficult.

I try to change that on page 28, since 27 is nearly finished

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KaxantheDragon In reply to Aarok [2011-09-04 15:46:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem. I look forward to the rest of the story.

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Aarok In reply to KaxantheDragon [2011-09-04 15:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Me too xD let's see if i get that finished someday.

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KaxantheDragon In reply to Aarok [2011-09-04 16:06:49 +0000 UTC]

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Alanah123 [2010-08-20 08:31:32 +0000 UTC]

i love Aaroks expression in the 4th panel

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Aarok In reply to Alanah123 [2010-08-20 08:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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Alanah123 In reply to Aarok [2010-08-20 08:45:21 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome

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VaylerSilv [2010-02-13 07:31:55 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME as always! You are Perfect artist... as always.

You did great and hard work... Big respect for you from me! Now your pictures more beautiful than earlier. I congratulate you.

Green dragoness behaves or is suspicious or simply clumsy. And it looks funny! Now I know who she is...

Azka as always really interesting character. Her muzzle is really full of emotions. Do you know that you can draw characters with perfect expressive emotions on their faces?

XDXD Aarok muzzle of dissatisfaction is funny! XDXD

Other dragons is perfect too.

Perfect page!!!

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Aarok In reply to VaylerSilv [2010-02-15 07:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you you always write such nice comments i really enjoy reading them :3!

Yes, Karanya is a rather stupid person so it would be just a matter of time when she says something wrong xD.

You really like Azka don't you ^^ ?
Yes somehow its rather easy to draw the emotions form her that from Aarok, its always difficult because of his long nose and his teeth

Glad that you like it, atm i shade page 11 maybe i can finish it today and upload it tomorrow.

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VaylerSilv In reply to Aarok [2010-02-21 12:54:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!!

Is she really stupid?

Umm? She simple interesting. I like Tantura too.

I'm waiting next with big impatience.
PS: Sorry... I'll comment page 10 later, okay?

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Aarok In reply to VaylerSilv [2010-02-22 08:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes shes not intelligent she only follows the orders of her aunt/queen.

Don't worry, don't feel forced to comment.

Page 11 is up now, hope you'll like it .

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VaylerSilv In reply to Aarok [2010-02-25 15:04:41 +0000 UTC]

I will comment on two other pages soon.

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EdDarkflame [2010-01-25 17:38:37 +0000 UTC]

This just gets better and better! Can't wait for page 10!

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Naba008 [2010-01-23 09:27:50 +0000 UTC]

I like these a really lot Hell, I should check DA more

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Aarok In reply to Naba008 [2010-03-15 08:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Elziler [2010-01-21 01:39:46 +0000 UTC]

awsome!! out of curiosity though..isnt there ganna be a page nine?

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Aarok In reply to Elziler [2010-03-15 08:50:00 +0000 UTC]

sure at the moment i colour page 12 xD

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retroboy78 [2010-01-14 03:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Oohh... seems like a trap to me... scary!

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Aarok In reply to retroboy78 [2010-01-14 07:11:17 +0000 UTC]

It is ^^ thank you.

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Wildfire66 [2010-01-13 21:49:45 +0000 UTC]

Awsome

Hmm looks like that green dragon almost caused a bit of trouble hehe..

And Aarok go into Red territory alone?
Hmmm doesn't sound good..could be trouble hehe

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Aarok In reply to Wildfire66 [2010-01-14 07:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, yes she did. Of course there will be trouble otherwise it would be boring xD.

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RusCSI [2010-01-12 10:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Now I see...she has prepared a trap for him, hasn't she? I just have this feeling
And her speech is given her up...especially 'the noble prince Kaeroth' =3 I wonder if any of wood dragons could say so

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Aarok In reply to RusCSI [2010-01-12 15:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Maybe ^^
Yes, i mentionend some time ago, shes a rather srupid dragoness, here she had really luck that nobody had some closer thoughts about her speech. Only Aarok got enraged, well because he can't understand why somebody can call Kaeroth noble.

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RusCSI In reply to Aarok [2010-01-13 14:44:27 +0000 UTC]

Well, let's see what will happen next

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RavenNocturna [2010-01-12 07:42:16 +0000 UTC]

the black dagon is going aloone ohhhhhhhhh scary!!=]

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Aarok In reply to RavenNocturna [2010-01-12 15:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes but only scary for the others xD.

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RavenNocturna In reply to Aarok [2010-01-13 01:22:07 +0000 UTC]

he must be brave!!=]

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Aarok In reply to RavenNocturna [2010-01-14 06:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Or stupid ^^

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Kefren4400 [2010-01-12 02:53:14 +0000 UTC]

I ahve aited long for this! Pretty cool X3

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Aarok In reply to Kefren4400 [2010-01-12 15:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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HyenaVitani [2010-01-11 12:36:31 +0000 UTC]

OHHH NOOOOO HE IS GOING TO GO ALONEEEEEEEEE!!!

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Please be safeeeeeee!

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Aarok In reply to HyenaVitani [2010-01-12 15:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Yes walking alone is pretty boring, but hes faster .

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HyenaVitani In reply to Aarok [2010-01-13 12:41:30 +0000 UTC]

=X

And immune to light magic!

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Getsugaryuu [2010-01-11 02:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, i smell a very well thought out ambush in the making! Better be extra careful Aarok.
I can sympathize with you on him going alone, poor guy...
This comic just keeps on getting better and better, but the suspense is killing me^^

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Aarok In reply to Getsugaryuu [2010-01-11 07:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, yes i have no problems with the story, only the shading always takes so much time.
Nobody really wants to go alone in enemies land .

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BlueRavenfire [2010-01-10 22:56:54 +0000 UTC]

another good comic page.

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Aarok In reply to BlueRavenfire [2010-01-11 07:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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BlueRavenfire In reply to Aarok [2010-01-11 22:00:39 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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Fireflash-Rainclaw [2010-01-10 21:24:13 +0000 UTC]

nice keep it up

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Aarok In reply to Fireflash-Rainclaw [2010-01-11 07:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, i will ^^.

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Fireflash-Rainclaw In reply to Aarok [2010-01-11 07:08:56 +0000 UTC]

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KratosAurion28 [2010-01-10 21:05:12 +0000 UTC]

Finally, this is very good keep working ^^

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Aarok In reply to KratosAurion28 [2010-01-11 07:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, yes i'll do.

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KratosAurion28 In reply to Aarok [2010-01-11 13:27:12 +0000 UTC]

Yey~

Keep one, Im looking forward to read more of youre great and beautiful work ^^

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The-Nuclear-Pegasus [2010-01-10 20:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Very nice and epic!

You're really creative,Aarok, and creative people are my favorite.Such as you.

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Aarok In reply to The-Nuclear-Pegasus [2010-01-11 07:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, glad that you like it.

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The-Nuclear-Pegasus In reply to Aarok [2010-01-11 07:08:51 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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CrazyTaizy [2010-01-10 20:52:52 +0000 UTC]

the adventure begins
soon XD

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Aarok In reply to CrazyTaizy [2010-01-11 07:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes soon ^^ thank you.

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