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Published: 2012-03-25 21:26:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 3314; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 338
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Description So, got to Chapter 16 of "Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons" ([link] ) and when I read this scene I quickly wanted to draw it. Namely:

"My telekinetic, magical bullet fired, striking Mini in the torso. And just like that she stopped, staring at me with a horrified look on her face. Her very solid face. She hung there like a decoration, half her body on one side of the wall. Half her body on the other side. “Oh,” she whispered softly. “That’s… not good.”

“Mini!” screamed Gem, hovering in front of her sister. “Go ghosty! Do it!”

“I… can’t. I don’t think the spell works inside something,” she said softly. “I can’t feel my legs.”

Gem solidified before my eyes, the three of us forgotten as she held her sister. “No, do it. Do it!” she begged as she changed ghostly and passed her hooves through her sister. “Mini! Go ghosty. Please!” Again and again she solidified and desolidified, trying to get her sister to do the same. I looked on, wishing that Mini could somehow free herself.

Gem finally threw her forelegs around her twin sister, sobbing brokenly.

“I’m sorry… I mean…” I said lamely. I’d meant to kill her, but I hadn’t meant for… this.

Mini looked at me with a small smile. “It’s okay. We were trying to kill you. I mean, it’s only fair.” Somehow that made me feel even worse as the trapped mare gently stroked her sibling’s mane. “It’s okay, Gem. It doesn’t hurt at all.”

“Gem? Mini?” a male said from behind us. Standing on the pipes leading to safety was the green buck. He must have started moving the second we were out of sight. If Gemini hadn’t slowed us down he wouldn’t have had the time to head us off. I whirled, looking at the stallion as he panted for breath, his sides gleaming with sweat. His gun was slung across his neck, though. Something about him reminded me of Big Macintosh. His dying sister seemed worth infinitely more to him than caps. “Ah no… Mini…” he whispered as he walked past us without a second glance."
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"I looked to P-21 and the still trembling Glory. Both all right… No. Not all right. None of us were all right. But we were alive.

And so was Mini.

Slowly, I made my way towards where she was still breathing shallow little gulps. I floated out Cupcake’s revolver. “Mini…” I said quietly, though with the ringing in my ears everything felt quiet. I was numb from horn to hoof.

“Hey.” She gave a shaky smile. “It’s the Security pony…” she said quietly as she hung there. “Where’re Gem and Taurus? She had to go...”

I looked over at one of the rubble heaps and the motionless green head poking out of it. “They… they left. They got away.” Please, if there is any goddess in all of Equestria, let her believe me. “They’re both… just fine…”

“That’s good. Gem does silly things without me,” she said quietly as she looked at me, red eyes just like my own, crying just like my own, as her lips trembled. I wasn’t that good a liar. Were it not for the mane, I might have been looking into a mirror as she asked, “Are… are you going to finish it?”

I couldn’t say it. I could only nod as my eyes blurred with tears.

Her lips smiled as she whispered, “Thank you.”

I wrapped my hooves around her, hugging her as I levitated the gun up under her chin.

‘Pull the trigger. Pull the trigger. Pull the Goddesses-damned trigger. Damn it, you bony son of a bitch, let me be able to do this!’ I sobbed as I held her, shaking as I poured everything I could into this. Five pounds of pressure was all I needed. ‘Pull the motherfucking trigger, Blackjack. Do it! Do it! Please, for the love of Celestia, do it!’ I begged myself.

“I’m sorry.” I sobbed, gritting my teeth together. Clenching my eyes closed. Wishing it was my head that the gun was pressed against.

Mini just laughed softly. “You’re a good pony, Miss Blackjack.” I felt a second unicorn’s magic on the gun.

One last gunshot sounded out across Flank."


The dark bordering was just added to create atmosphere, to try and make it dark, moody, and sad.


Black Jack and Mini Zodiac goes to Somber
MLP and all that good stuff Hasbro
The Fallout Equestria world to Kkat.
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Comments: 21

The-Mark-of-Shame [2014-01-26 08:46:46 +0000 UTC]

I swear. I  don't cry often but that sh*t was by far the most Oh. moments of the entire fic. I just was like...

Please. Not like that. Anything but that.

 

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TragicRewrite [2012-04-16 01:29:44 +0000 UTC]

With all due respect, how the fuck does a pony fire a gun?

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AaronMk In reply to TragicRewrite [2012-04-16 01:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Depends on the pony.

In the Fallout Equestria universe it's implied that the guns are either assembled to fit into their mouths, so the grip and trigger can fit with the teeth and be operated by the tongue. But that's often over-looked in fan-art for the series I think, or at least I'm guilty of that. Another simaler explanation would be to fire it side-ways gangsta style with the tongue operating the trigger. Which I can only imagine to be terribly awkward.

Of course, if they're a unicorn like the two pictured: fuck all the rules, use your magic to manipulate it.

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TragicRewrite In reply to AaronMk [2012-04-16 02:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...Sounds terribly annoying if you aren't a unicorn XD

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AaronMk In reply to TragicRewrite [2012-04-16 03:13:54 +0000 UTC]

It does.

Though, normal ponies and unicorns can get by with clobbering things in the face... And even in the Fallout Equestria world there are more specialized pieces of equipment for non-horned equines to shoot guns (or, well, heavy guns). Namely battle-saddles...

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scorch238 [2012-03-27 21:32:32 +0000 UTC]

I have a sad now...

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AaronMk In reply to scorch238 [2012-03-27 21:42:01 +0000 UTC]

All your feels are belong to me now.

And thanks for the favorite.

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SuperBigMac [2012-03-26 13:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Dammit. TT_TT That part of the story... right there. THAT was sad. I felt terribl, even though they were trying to kill BlackJack.

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Thagyr [2012-03-26 09:54:25 +0000 UTC]

All the feels. As they say. Though we didn't really get to know Mini, she wasn't bad.

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Foreling [2012-03-26 09:48:12 +0000 UTC]

Aw man this feels month's ago D:
Such a nice scene

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f1r3w4rr10r In reply to Foreling [2012-03-26 10:09:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, so much happened since then. Blackjack even had normal legs back then. xD

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AaronMk In reply to f1r3w4rr10r [2012-03-26 19:51:59 +0000 UTC]

I've yet to get to where she starts getting those robot legs I'm seeing her in.

No spoilers! I'll catch up, someday.

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glue123 [2012-03-26 01:28:03 +0000 UTC]

aww i'm currently working on a humanized version of this scene! good job

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AaronMk In reply to glue123 [2012-03-26 01:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank ye.

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glue123 In reply to AaronMk [2012-03-26 01:36:46 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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darkgraymatter [2012-03-26 00:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Great work aaron.

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AaronMk In reply to darkgraymatter [2012-03-26 01:30:24 +0000 UTC]

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xshadowfaustx [2012-03-25 23:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Well done....
:3

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MisterTurtle [2012-03-25 22:26:14 +0000 UTC]

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Doodlehamster [2012-03-25 22:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Poor Mini. You captured the scene very well.

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AaronMk In reply to Doodlehamster [2012-03-25 23:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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