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AaronTP — Silent Planet part 2 pg3
Published: 2011-06-03 15:38:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2081; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 49
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Thanks for looking.Based on book by C.S. Lewis. MacMillan Publishing Co.
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Your Seroni are the best I've yet seen. I love his books, too.
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Do you want to know something? C. S. Lewis made part of life since I was a little kid, and the first time I've seen your work, I cried (really).
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Thank you for the great compliment. I also grew up with Lewis' stories and it's been nice to find so many people who like them so much too.
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As a hobby you mean? Yes, I mostly do comics related stuff.
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let me get to the bad parts first:
your linework may need improvements. use line hierarchy for foregroung, middle ground and background
the good part:
i like the dramatic feeling of this page. nice work though. congrats for being able to compose storylines with drawings!
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Duly noted on the line improvement. It definitely feels clumsy as it is now. Thanks for the comments.
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