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Crayma [2008-08-25 15:37:03 +0000 UTC]

coool~~ *-*

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MikoyashaMuffin [2008-08-23 15:46:39 +0000 UTC]

You always draw with a sense of elegance. <] The first thing I noticed was the fact that your picture looks way too old to be the same character. (*ultimate hypocrite*) Where the neck meets the shoulder should be dented in slightly... don't worry about emphasizing this, because she's just a little girl. Perhaps move the lips over more to align it with the nose... and the neckline should go back more by the ears. Right above the eye on the right, the bone where your eyebrows are... it shouldn't jutt out so much... and the hands. The calves should probably be a tiiinnyy bit more curvy. But this is also excusable since she's supposed to be six. Add a little curve to the feet, perhaps...

Very good, though. Nice effect.

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totallyfai [2008-08-23 04:01:24 +0000 UTC]

MUAHAHAHA you have just opened to door to xunyi critic when you typed the"Please give me lots of crit. , I need it."
definitly bad move sam
ok 1. NEver in any case is odd proportions spose to exist (with exception of humongouse heads and Clampyfied ppl to the extreme) and to be honest other than the neck and a bit of the leg i guess the proportion is fine
2. the lips is to close to the right side of her face. scooch it to the left
3. draw ur hair more like xunyis cuz ur way of drawing hair bothers me to some since cause it doesn't' look like hair. And even though it is all flowly it has a dead stiff feeling
4 OMFG learn to draw a hand and stop doing all these positions that lets you draw as little of the hands as possible, see i would have drawn the left hand over the dress
5 the right hand -___- im not even gonna bother, go read clam or soemthign and ull learn how to draw hands
7 it's a bit sketchy, but i guess all of ur art work is sketchy like make it cleaner just for xunyi
8. ur feet doesn' t look like feet, it has no curves or that represents a normal foot
9. the legs look like long blocks of cheese
and 10. i gotta admit this is the best thing i think youve drawn...human wise

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cappyandpashy4ever [2008-08-23 02:12:47 +0000 UTC]

I was gonna point out the neck...but I suppose that's supposed to be like that -_-

Anyway, I saw the original comic, and the girl is so cute ^^ You drew her in a more mature way though. It doesn't look bad, just...different.

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