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Published: 2010-06-30 12:48:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2537; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 0
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I am so sorry for writing this one! But I think it is a good way to improve my self! ( I am too small for making *ABXeye improve them self)
As long as he is a wonderful artist, when I checked my inbox and saw he has a new work, I was curious about it. After seeing this picture, I got disappointed!
I think it is a creative picture. You know guys, had never seen a car-washing picture before. So in that case, it is so creative and I appreciate his creativity.
But when I take a look at this work, I feel it is a little amateur. Well... I do not know why but it looks like a snapshot which is taken by a cellphone and it is edited by a new member of dA who want to express some feelings but he/she doesn't know how to.
I cannot see any kind of feelings in it. It is just something normal. It is not showing something like pain,sorrow, happiness, being fateful, agreement or disagreement or things like them!
And another thing which is bothering me, is the situation of the car. it is in the middle of the picture. and the picture is not square. I think if it was square I would surely give it a higher mark! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Colors are dead. It could be a good point. But as long as the meaning is not clear, it is just making no sense.
What do you think? FAIR OR UNFAIR? : )
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dear enhedam
First of all I have to thank you for caring to share your idea and opinion about this picture but I'm afraid that I have to give it an unfair for the following reasons:
not every picture must express those feelings that you mentioned sometimes a plain photo could be a good photo not that I am saying this is a good photo but that a photo that lacks emotion doesn't necessarily mean that it's bad, so have to disagree.
since your interested in giving critiques i'd like to add that a good critique must challenge the photo technically and conceptually and it shouldn't be personal or always optimistic...I wouldn't mind having this as a comment since it is your personal view and I respect it!
by the way It's not the first time I'm giving unfair, I had full positive critiques that was also unfair to me
but again no offense and thanks for your effort, I regard this as a serious viewer who cares about my work!
All the best!
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Great texture to this. Almost looks like a run down asylum instead of a car wash...
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Amazing colours and texture!
Congratulations for this shot!
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ummm... age ye critique zedesh benvisam narahat mishi agha?
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aslan! benevis khosh halam mishim
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