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Aaaand here's the first page of the chapter! I'm hoping to update once a week; we'll see how that goes. At LEAST once every two weeks, like before. But I'll stick to weekly as far as I can.

Following feedback from the Prologue, I went into the script and trimmed down Parch's narration quite a bit, and also made him less "Captain Obvious" about certain things. I still wish people had raised their issues about the narration way back in the days when this was a Spyro fanfic, because the narration style was exactly the same. x'D No one complained then, so I guess I figured people liked it. Oh well. It's rather late to just remove the narration without overhauling things all over again, I'm afraid!

Either way, I'm happy to start a new chapter and I hope you all will enjoy it, in spite of the narration, ha!

(Oh, and the page numbers on the bottom will show the page's place in the whole book, that's why it's not a "1". Sorry if that's confusing. xD )

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Description

Cover/Beginning: fav.me/dawtjd4

fav.me/ddye2is
>Next:fav.me/ddzax1g
~~~

Aaaand here's the first page of the chapter! I'm hoping to update once a week; we'll see how that goes. At LEAST once every two weeks, like before. But I'll stick to weekly as far as I can.

Following feedback from the Prologue, I went into the script and trimmed down Parch's narration quite a bit, and also made him less "Captain Obvious" about certain things. I still wish people had raised their issues about the narration way back in the days when this was a Spyro fanfic, because the narration style was exactly the same. x'D No one complained then, so I guess I figured people liked it. Oh well. It's rather late to just remove the narration without overhauling things all over again, I'm afraid!

Either way, I'm happy to start a new chapter and I hope you all will enjoy it, in spite of the narration, ha!

(Oh, and the page numbers on the bottom will show the page's place in the whole book, that's why it's not a "1". Sorry if that's confusing. xD )

------------------*~STUFF~*---------------------
A.E. Website
My website
Patreon CREDITS
< My main account