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Published: 2010-12-02 06:08:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 615; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 3
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its decemberand these days i
don't mind eye contact,
long car rides and
to sleep in late;
thats all i seem to want.
right now i've got
a head ache; my fingers
are so cold they're blue
but all i want to do is
drive far away
from here and sleep
for five whole days.
i can't stand three
more weeks of any
of this. my eyes are
so tired, your anger
scares me and it
sets my teeth on edge.
but i'm here anyway,
rubbing my eyes awake
and running barefoot
in the snow because
i wont let myself
be alone.
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Comments: 25
CyneNoir [2011-01-01 23:02:16 +0000 UTC]
If your friends would do that, it'd be their loss. This poem swells with emotion and the conclusion fits perfectly. I feel like you can get to know the speaker my reading this piece.
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breathingglassstars [2010-12-16 02:15:32 +0000 UTC]
this feels like december to the utmost degree.
i adore it.
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breathingglassstars In reply to acciopen [2010-12-16 19:36:01 +0000 UTC]
you are so welcome
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livesofbirds [2010-12-06 14:25:08 +0000 UTC]
well if i was your friend in 'real-life' i would probably grab you
and hug you very tight, if your friends don't feel the same, that's
their ignorance.
i think this is lovely and so are you. <3
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acciopen In reply to livesofbirds [2010-12-06 17:27:06 +0000 UTC]
thank you (:
oh dear
so are you.
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livesofbirds In reply to acciopen [2010-12-06 17:28:33 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome lovely.
and thank you as well. <3
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londonrey [2010-12-05 05:58:14 +0000 UTC]
ohhhh don't say that doll-face.
they'd love you more.
i'm sure of it.
you're such an incredible thing.
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SilverOnBlue [2010-12-02 19:33:17 +0000 UTC]
i eant to hug this poem - even if that sounds crazy. its just so cool - no pun intended. and yes, i know how you feel (comments)
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acciopen In reply to SilverOnBlue [2010-12-03 05:32:18 +0000 UTC]
no, no i understand. thanks (:
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MissSarah15 [2010-12-02 17:39:46 +0000 UTC]
I agree with your description all the way. <3
This piece is...well...lovely. Yes. It's just lovely and gorgeous.
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julia-caitlin [2010-12-02 15:49:35 +0000 UTC]
i agree with this piece and your artist comments. this is lovely (:
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