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Published: 2005-03-15 06:16:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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hello guys this is one of my comic book that im trying to get it published, this is only presented in Black and White in Manga Anime Style.. I'm Currently rewriting the story and updating it,.. you can check pieces of the story by clicking up this link>> [link]whaddayathink? should i get this published?
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man I think there is a market for your work, it is very eye catching
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no it's not an underwear it's part of the pants,.. trying to make a new fashion style
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I think that looks really uber frippin proffessional. You don't see much art like this. I think the only think thats kinda makes iffy about it is the chapter title. Not to offend you, but I think a more original chapter title might be better since that one is really over used. But thats really just my opinion. Other than that though, I say GO FOR IT!
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um do you think of another title? any suggestions is OK
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Hmm, well I can't really say because I've never read the story. Think about the events of what happened in the story, perhaps an important but short line was given out during the first chapter, and you could use that.
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Looks nice, but is he supposed to be in his underwear? I mean, I wear my pants low, but this is just way too far.
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sorry i forgot to use reply but my answer is a bit down below,..
repost: it's not an underwear it's part of the pants, trying to make it look stylish,..
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Sorry, I didn't notice it. When I look closer I can see what you mean. Stylish indeed.
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