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alexandru1208 [2012-03-20 19:34:59 +0000 UTC]

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Impact

Well , seems I am the first to say this and also my first Critique.
Well , first I can start with the vector itself , It's not bad , it's quite great , no big flaws even.
But the look and way her eyes are seem quite , doll-looking , nothing wrong or anything but it makes her look like a doll more then a pony , well let's get over that.
The idea to make her eye colors different from each other is very original , not so many people are doing this at this moment so it's a new addition in the OC world , The mane and her tail is well made and very simplistic , no other complex stuff into it.
The colors are best organized , a large part of Red on the tail and mane and 'cool' it down with an orange shaded yellow adds it a rather great touch to it.
The Cutie mark has very interesting design and shows quite a misery to see what talent she has.
For overall , the design and vector is great for a first time , the eyes (Pupils more) need some 'emotion' into it , to look in a direction if able , even at the 4'th wall , showing emotion to the characters adds more originality into it , not saying it does not have.

Keep on doing this and you will have great OC designs from now on.
-Alex.

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Bolt-Pheron [2012-04-05 22:25:29 +0000 UTC]

Ah wow! This is great!

Just a question of curiosity. Do you by chance suffer from hetrochromania as well? Or was it just an idea you had for your OC?

My OC also has Hetrochromania, be it though that the eye colours are a mirror of yours.

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Just a quick link if your interested in seeing my OC.

I decided to give my OC Hetrochromania for the fact that I too suffer from it. So this is why I ask, it would be interesting to meet another brony with the same disability as me.

Till next time!

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Pink3Blu3Blizz [2012-03-21 02:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Very original. excepting the pose

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