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First drawing in my new seriesModel-Tara Burden
Photo-Aron Adams
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Comments: 30
yarro [2010-04-15 18:51:19 +0000 UTC]
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You obviously have the technique mastered. Overall a very nice piece. The hand outline works on her right due to the vertical positioning , but on the left I think the positioning causes a little distraction that would go away if the portion touching the face had been detailed from the hair crop down to the level of the chin. Great job on the lips and teeth the front teeth pulling the lip back a little really makes the work more interesting. The nose is properly proportioned and nostrils well drawn/shaded. Nose stud is a nice without being overly done. The wet tips look on the hair is nicely defined and shaded properly, which is usually seen done as all wet with no detail. Shadows are nice with a point light source on her left and defused light softening the shadows on her right. Eyebrows and eyelashes are nicely drawn and her right can be seen through the hair. The irises are great, eyes proportioned well and both eyes are looking at the same point in space. On first glance the face really pops and the look and expression hold you.
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sweetzuzzanna [2016-07-18 07:23:21 +0000 UTC]
I love this pic, and have made more than one tag with it ♥
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Jaquina [2012-12-06 19:59:11 +0000 UTC]
what kind of pencil did you use? :9 Very good draiwing!!
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AdamBraunArt In reply to Jaquina [2012-12-11 15:32:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks...I use a regular graphite pencil and white charcoal.
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3rdwheeler [2011-06-29 12:49:36 +0000 UTC]
really nice, i like how you haven't drawn the hands in, makes the drawing more interesting
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Abelot [2010-05-01 19:18:05 +0000 UTC]
Great work as usual,my only comment would be under her nose?.I think they call it the filtrum.To her right it seem's way out of alignment with the cute of her lip.Also I think the shading under nose is to strong.But ! that being said ,it is still a great work,with good imagination.
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TerraRhapsody [2009-12-18 13:32:33 +0000 UTC]
Lovely job! Such fine detail and wonderfully drawn. Well done!
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Jibril85 [2009-05-12 18:37:24 +0000 UTC]
This piece has been featured in my current journal
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PlasmaX7 [2009-05-11 23:09:15 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely love it! The unique, pensive expression is perfectly captured and yet ambiguous... really stunning artwork, not an average portrait.
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Raishuu [2009-05-03 15:21:06 +0000 UTC]
Great work, I love the indecision in her expression and the way her hair looks slightly wet. Her eyes are really beautiful and the nose and lips... I love it!
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kmorgan222 [2009-05-02 16:34:35 +0000 UTC]
i love this i think its perfect the way it is. i love the the way you handled the composition of this piece.
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Anna999 [2009-05-02 16:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! What did you used to draw this? I mean, pencils, pastels etc.
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AdamBraunArt In reply to Anna999 [2009-05-03 00:31:38 +0000 UTC]
I used graphite and charcoal.
Thanks
Adam
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ElizavetBrushes [2009-05-02 15:09:41 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful and realistic undertone. Maybe it would be nice if you add just a little bit undertones and some very soft and light lines for her hands? Just very delicate lines will be enough to understand that there are hands and not just strange-looking frame.
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KaizokuPanda [2009-05-02 14:53:04 +0000 UTC]
i looks like she has fer face pushed up against glass or something, is that what you were going for?
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KaizokuPanda In reply to KaizokuPanda [2009-05-02 14:55:57 +0000 UTC]
wow i cant type lol...
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AdamBraunArt In reply to KaizokuPanda [2009-05-02 14:55:02 +0000 UTC]
Her face is framed by her hands, which I decided to leave outlines.
Thanks
Adam
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KaizokuPanda In reply to AdamBraunArt [2009-05-02 15:07:51 +0000 UTC]
ah, awesome looks great
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