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Published: 2014-09-09 05:01:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 7716; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 0
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A quick Page done trying to do SOMETHING different from the original page. A problem I'm running into is that the shots chosen sometimes seem to be the most appropriate ones and I do not want to submit to Mr. K what basically amounts to the comics, drawn exactly the same, in my style. That's not gonna land me anything I don't think. Gyeh, well lemme know if this works.The page on the left is NOT DRAWN BY ME AND IS COPYRIGHT ARCHIE/ SEGA/ I DO NOT CLAIM OWNERSHIP, ETC/ DON'T GET UPSET.
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To be honset your page and ideas of each frames look so much better in my opinion
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Your Eggman is brilliant! That would have looked so cool! Awesome job!
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Like the delayed reaction mor ein the original, but really love the image of Eggman in your version.
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I think your visuals add alot more detail to the comics and I think those are the sort people would love to see.
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why didn't they use the one on the left!? its more detailed and shows much more than the one on the right!
why does archie and sega wanna hold back? they need to go all out (like with the shadow hedgehog game)...I get kids read this stuff too but a little bit of edge, intense action and a tiny bit of blood wouldn't hurt anyone. :/
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I think your visuals are much cleaner and much more detailed. I find that it's a more consistent style, and the poses and expressions fit the dialogue better.
However, I think something to take away from the official art is how good the storytelling is. I feel that the two fish characters (sorry, not read Archie Sonic in aaages) are much better placed in the original. While I love that you have them placed above Sonic to achieve the same "looking down on him" effect, the amount of background detail drags the focus away from them and their reactions. My eye was immediately drawn to the banner below the two characters first, rather than the characters themselves, whereas in the original, the lack of background and the compositional "V" shape they make with Sonic placed the attention exactly where it needed to be. In addition, your compositions would make it difficult to letter. In the final two panels, the characters are very close to the top of the panel, and in your second panel, Eggman (as much as I adore that detail, it really adds to the storytelling) would make it tricky to fit in Sonic's exposition.
TL;DR: I think the main thing to work on is composition. It's dead-on otherwise though!
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Actually, from this, it seems like you make the better visuals. Yardley and Bates aren't exactly that skilled. I'm tired of them getting praise when you bring so much more to the table. The bottom two on the official one look so lazy and even more so you put far more details into your shots.
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