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aww!! thanks!!
I hope you enjoyed the rest of the chapters as well...
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This looks really cool. Maybe review the grammar though?
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well, feel free to send me a note , and give me the correct grammar
and I will replace it..
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Here's the what I saw wrong corrected if you want it: Β WHAT DO YOU DESIRE FOR ?? POWER AND GLORY ?? BEAUTY AND PERFECTION ?? KNOWLEDGE AND WISDOM ?? OR SOMETHING THAT IS BEYOND ALL OTHERS ?? Β EARTH (YEAR XXXX) At the end of recorded history, mankind made a remarkable evolutionary leap. A civilization of amazing technological advancement was established, there was no wars, the hatred and ugliness that plagued our existence had been eradicated. The world was in a state of harmony, but even the greatest evolutionary leap can not ... save earth from DIVINE DESTRUCTION. But, one man who doesn't want to accept his fate builds a time machine to escape to the past ... He returned when there was no creatures on earth, but he can't change anything because it will change the history and destiny of mankind. So he created his own dimension and called it the digital dimension. Β Β If you want me to do the rest just tell me.
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can you be my beta reader??
and correct all the grammar mistake and maybe give your own words..
but I can not pay you.
but you can get to read the upcoming Β chapters before others??
btw I would be glad if you can do Β all rest chapter2-5??
just sent me an email..
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I can't promise anything, But I'll do them for you if I get some spare time. I've got some work to do. I couldn't find your email so you can send me a message at ryan.willard@rocketmail.com if you like.
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lol.. my e-mail at the donation section..
adamexe20a@gmail.com
btw no problem.. feel free to take your time...
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Nice choice of colors! The character design's pretty interesting, too! Congrats!
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well thanks!
the kings is the central theme..
cause the hero bond them together into a harmonious whole...
well, no more spoiler..
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well at the end of the story the prologue is simply a narrator point of view aka the queen...
so the queen does not know what it the real reason.. and the kings faces is unknown..
but they have a little bit of their detail...
cause I plan to make a difference point of view..
so later you will see from 3rd and 4th kings point of view..
and their story is sightly difference.. ( well both think they are correct )
so the readers will decided which side you are own..
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I can't wait to know what the reason is from both the 3rd and 4th king then.
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well, that is probably going to happen in season 3 , the final arc..
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Kind of reminds me of a shounen jump cover composition.
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well, i just put them randomly..
lol...
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Ok,I read all the chapters and decided there is no problem except u dont have any comedy scenes
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lol.. it just a prologue chapters.
so no comedy scene yet...
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aww!! thanks!!
enjoy all the chapters!!
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ooo wow this is so awesome very intresting!! i love ur stuff!!
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thanks!!
did you finish all the chapters?
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oh there's more? ill have to take a look then XD
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lol.. go to my gallery and you will find 1-4 prologue chapter completed...
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ahh ok sure will XD
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Amazing work, I just enjoy looking at your gallery!
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well hope you enjoy reading all the chapters..
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Wow, it's just so great. it had to take a lot of practice to successfully draw like this or maybe it's an innate talent. XD
All the details is just so fantastic. Sorry for my bad english, I'm french canadian but I try Β
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aww!! thanks!!
hope you enjoy reading all the chapters..
and hope you understand it well..cause my english not so perfect,..
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For me your english is perfect XD
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Super awesome!!! Kyaaa there all so cool!Β β (oγ βΏ o#)α
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aww!! enjoy all the chapters!!
and sorry for the grammar mistake..
T_T
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Omg this is awesome!!! I didn't know it was a comic until I scrolled down. This is sweet.
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aww! thanks for the commentΒ
enjoy!!
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Thank you very much Adamexe20a. I'll be sure to keep a look out in your gallery.
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Wow.. this looks very good~! It reminds my of D. Gray Man but better!
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thanks!!
hope you enjoy all the chapters..
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Hey, great job! This looks like a really intriguing story! And in the first chapter, the continuity of your drawings of the main character look very good too
There are a few grammatical points that are not quite how we would say in English, but overall it still makes sense and would not really matter until the publishing stage ^_^
Also do you watch Bleach? Because the third and fourth kings remind me of Urahara and Tensa ZangetsuΒ Β
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lol,Β i watch all the main anime, not only bleach, but bleach arc is also included
(can't wait for that)
... butΒ FYI these is just the vision of the queen/narratorΒ , not the real image of the kings, cause no one have seen them,Β
but i'm glad you notice that, cause i wanted you guys to have the voice while you read it..
lol... beside the real kings faces should remains as secret ...Β until (opss i can't tell, it will spoil the plot...)
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oh i see, then i guess the queen watches bleach too! 
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lol, the queen watch and monitor every worldsΒ that exist in D.D
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T-this comic is awesome! I love the story-line and the concept. Your style is so cool and beautiful, I love it~Β
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aww! thanks!!
well it just a prologue chapters..
i try to finish chapter5 as fast as i can...
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OnO Must've taken you...like...all your life! Love love love the fact that you were brave enough to do it without colors (cursed ghost lines OAO)! Very well done!
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aww!! thanks!!
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