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adamflys — A pawn's predicament
Published: 2016-01-13 01:28:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 10941; Favourites: 403; Downloads: 97
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If you didn't make your pawn waifu material you can get the fuck outta my face.So ye, dragon's Dogma got leaked a week early from a guy doing play testing... AND GUESS WHO WAS IN THE TREAD WHERE IT WAS FIRST LEAKED! I mean, I bought it for me olde xbox, but I don't play on that like... ever.
also they changed the rad as hell main menu music.
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I havent gave a critique in a while so why not.
Your anatomy is improving but it still has its noticeable flaws like in the shoulders and how you did the characters back-armpit connection you also spread the shoulders a bit to wide and her hands a bit to small in comparison to the far away character who has bigger hands (I sometimes still make hands to small so it is hard to get right when you make your facial style and head size).
The colouring looks very nice but some of the shading is cut way to early to where the light would begin for instance her underwear is mostly under her ass cheeks so it should of been shaded more upwards and her legs should lf been more shaded aswell.
Your lineart is improving but still needs work I mean with the fat girl her ass sort of suddenly has a big chunk in the line that looks a bit rough and should be smoothed out a bit, the girl in front however has a very broken and jaggy line art in comparison which makes it look like you put all the effort into one character then rushed it with the other.
Your other character I will review in its entirety here as your chub character showed you are capable of improving quite alot, so your slim characters anatomy looks waaay out of whack like her anatomy was added last moment and you didnt draw it out entirely you only dreq wherw it could be seen which can be noticeable if body parts can be shown on the other side of the object hiding the body part... I mean legs and hips if you wondered what I meant it looks like you one leg and used alot of covering up to not draw most of her anatomy, her breasts shouldnt obscure her arms that much and her torso wouldnt connect like that to her chest/ribcage so your arms in the way of that makes a cut where her stomach is and under her breasts you can see where you coloured more torso. As for her shoulders they are drawn ok but are a bit on the short size in comparison to her head so that should of been wider lastly her hands are pretty small aswell as being in a awkward pose I think you should of done hand held together so you could have fingers on both hands rather then one flat hand and one stump.
You have improved recently but you are showing some bits of corner cutting though one girl is near enough fine the other feels rushed in comparison I think to sum it all up ya need to put your 100% into the entire pic and not just one part as it can ruin the pic as a whole if you make one part bad but you also need to repair some of the outline and as always keep tweaking with the anatomy your doing ok but your corner cutting does show abit more obviously in comparison to what you didnt cut corners in
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they changed the music with dark arisen. however i have played pretty much non stop sense it came out on pc. this game just doesn't seem to get boring
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I don't see any issues that could arise. She'll distract the enemies, and you could just give her a bow or something
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she's actually the grade A meme magic DPS sorcerer, and I'm basically a Berserk OC...
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