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Addicted2Kairo — One Morning
Published: 2006-04-29 15:43:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 223; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Colors of clothsThat fly with the wind,
On the laundry line…
Moves like little, delicate,
Sensitive, things.
The sun that greets the dampness out
With strong sleepy rays.
They pet the colors slowly,
Gently,
The rays free the vapor out
To travel through the breeze.
Morning light touches
Her naked body.
It adds certain whiteness,
To her skin…
Certain hope, unity and
Chosen solitude…
To her morning smoke.
She greets the morning with
A smile, a subtle epiphany.
A smile,
That tells about all little
Delights she expects.
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Comments: 21
everytime i hear or read about laundry lines, i keep remembering mohammed reda as ali bond in talateen yoom felsegn
lol
its a nice piece though
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morning has broooken, like the first moooorning-- cat stevens would be proud of you
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Heh, Maybehhh. I like that song a lot. I have so many memories with morning!
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you know me with poetry that is not in arabic , but i really like this one , it has a good structure that reflects the same feeling that words does , its really good .
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I am glad you said that...Because feeling is the most important
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normally i dont read poetry but I love reading yours, this is agreat example, the set up and use of words makes it very easy yet still enriching to read. Lol if that makes sense. Love the photo too, maybe another name for it, like "morning's touch" or something, again great work
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I might think about "Morning Touch", actually...Thanks
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no problem i just thought of it as it refers to the woman being touched by sunlight and the building looks like the rising sun is fully touching every part of it. thanks for considering it
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You know me with Poetry, I just scrolled down to post the comment on the picture
nice pic, I think the name placement could be elsewhere though
Poetry wise, well I have no idea, for me, you could be writing in chinese for all I care
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Thanks a lot. And thanks for passing by.
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ohh 
Good job
its a
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Thanks a lot 
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