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Published: 2007-10-01 03:30:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description feel it seeping
t
 h
  r
   o
    u
     g
      h
your skin
poision
d a n c e s
slowly in

creating a web
of mass destruction
where your v e i n s
once lay in
i
n
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o
c
e
n
c
e
pulsing
sluggish
through your system
"Soon..."
She promises,
"You'll be dead."
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Comments: 3

fllnthblnk [2008-01-19 10:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Like the simplicity and the format. The rhythm and the rhyme of the first stanza was well done.

Misspelling--"sluggish."

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AddictiveSimplicity In reply to fllnthblnk [2008-01-21 22:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your kind words, and also for the catch on my terrible grammar skills...

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EmbersOfAnAlibi [2007-10-01 03:57:37 +0000 UTC]

jlakfdjalkdj you amaze me. I LOVE it!

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