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Published: 2007-10-01 03:30:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description
feel it seepingt
h
r
o
u
g
h
your skin
poision
d a n c e s
slowly in
creating a web
of mass destruction
where your v e i n s
once lay in
i
n
n
o
c
e
n
c
e
pulsing
sluggish
through your system
"Soon..."
She promises,
"You'll be dead."
Comments: 3
fllnthblnk [2008-01-19 10:54:17 +0000 UTC]
Like the simplicity and the format. The rhythm and the rhyme of the first stanza was well done.
Misspelling--"sluggish."
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AddictiveSimplicity In reply to fllnthblnk [2008-01-21 22:24:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your kind words, and also for the catch on my terrible grammar skills...
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