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Published: 2007-08-29 03:35:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description She was everything he dreamt of
The only thing he'd ever love
Elegance in every flaw
Slipping excuses into every crack of her mask
Keeping him in awe

Every carefully chosen word was a lie
He was a pawn of twisted entertainment
Now a symbol of resentment
As another comes to claim his place

The orignal heretic
Has nothing on her
With a deceptive smile
And endless eyes

She loved him
In their seperate world
Until he woke
And discovered the nature of her sins

She extended her hand
Only to drop his
When he needed her
Now he exists
In agony too
For now he knows what he must do

Maybe her death
Would make her see
What she did
What she does
To him
Endlessly
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Comments: 5

FTIII [2007-08-31 02:01:11 +0000 UTC]

wow... the content was wonderful! I love the subject matter.. it made me smile too.


"dreamt"

and be careful of your subjects in some places, if you're gonna edit this one.


otherwise, great job

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AddictiveSimplicity In reply to FTIII [2007-08-31 03:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmm thank you.....I never do get around to editing anything.....but thank you for the imput

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EmbersOfAnAlibi [2007-08-29 21:19:57 +0000 UTC]

loved it. and everything about it. no joke, I started smiling on like the third line cause I knew it was gonna be awesome. haha.

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AddictiveSimplicity In reply to EmbersOfAnAlibi [2007-08-30 04:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Prshtttttt! Thanks....I dunno if it should go in my WN.....because I was pissed as hell when I wrote it....and it makes me sad to know it was for no reason....

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EmbersOfAnAlibi In reply to AddictiveSimplicity [2007-08-30 23:13:20 +0000 UTC]

it should go in there anyway...nobody is going to read that and judge you...and a WN is for everything and anything...strong stuff, weak stuff, stuff you regret writing or shouldn't have or wrote for no reason...anything dude. I think it's an awesome piece.

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